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(Jul. 26, 2021  7:48 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 26, 2021  7:46 PM)Staron Wrote: You said that Chapter 8 is when 1st 2nd and 3rd characters come in, right?

Nah, I'm working on a way to incorporate 1st place in but 2nd and 3rd only get the chapter early sorry Unhappy
So, first place isn't gonna get in?
(Jul. 26, 2021  8:15 PM)Staron Wrote:
(Jul. 26, 2021  7:48 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Nah, I'm working on a way to incorporate 1st place in but 2nd and 3rd only get the chapter early sorry Unhappy
So, first place isn't gonna get in?

2nd Place and 3rd place won't get in but get the chapter early 1st place gets in
(Jul. 26, 2021  8:39 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 26, 2021  8:15 PM)Staron Wrote: So, first place isn't gonna get in?

2nd Place and 3rd place won't get in but get the chapter early 1st place gets in

Alright, guess I'll be out of the fanfic..
(Jul. 26, 2021  8:41 PM)Staron Wrote:
(Jul. 26, 2021  8:39 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 2nd Place and 3rd place won't get in but get the chapter early 1st place gets in

Alright, guess I'll be out of the fanfic..

Don't worry, TechnoX will have 2 more character contests so you still have a chance to join Smile
(Jul. 26, 2021  8:41 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 26, 2021  8:41 PM)Staron Wrote: Alright, guess I'll be out of the fanfic..

Don't worry, TechnoX will have 2 more character contests so you still have a chance to join Smile

But what if I lose.
(Jul. 26, 2021  8:54 PM)Staron Wrote:
(Jul. 26, 2021  8:41 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Don't worry, TechnoX will have 2 more character contests so you still have a chance to join Smile

But what if I lose.

Just have confidence in yourself and your character then I'm sure you will win! Smile
Yo, Unseen when's the next chapter?
(Jul. 26, 2021  10:25 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Yo, Unseen when's the next chapter?

Coming soon my good sir (I'm almost finished with it)
(Jul. 26, 2021  10:30 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 26, 2021  10:25 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Yo, Unseen when's the next chapter?

Coming soon my good sir (I'm almost finished with it)

Cool 👍 I still have a lot of work to do for mine...
Chapter 8 is out!
This was a great chaoter! 😉 😉
(Jul. 26, 2021  11:00 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 8 is out!

nice chapter!!

also it really seems like oliver will be getting his own bey soon
I don't know how but I missed your 2 chapters. (Gonna read them now)
Incoming Chapter 9
I'd really like a rating please
I'll rate in a few!!!
nice episode!
Length: 4/5 it's was not your longest chapter but it was long (than mine at least )

Grammar: 5/5 I notice very slim mistakes good job!

Diolouge: 5/5 the battle was just, amazing but I do feel like the Victorians were so unprepared

Characters: you really brought them to life just felt like something was of with Alegh 4/5

Battles: 5/5 I cant...

Over all: 23/25 You did good just need some improvements!
(Jul. 28, 2021  12:14 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Length: 4/5 it's was not your longest chapter but it was long (than mine at least )

Grammar: 5/5 I notice very slim mistakes good job!

Diolouge: 5/5 the battle was just, amazing but I do feel like the Victorians were so unprepared

Characters: you really brought them to life just felt like something was of with Alegh 4/5

Battles: 5/5 I cant...

Over all: 23/25 You did good just need some improvements!

Aleph: Excuse me?!

Unova: Oo you busted

jk jk lol just a little short but thanks for the rating, I can't rate yours today but I will tommrow
After a lot of thought, I've decided I'm gonna switch over to the Japanese dub of my fanfic (No, it won't be in Japanese) for example Valtryek-Valkryie Rush Launch-Rush Shoot if you guys have anything you want to say about this just quote this message

Edit: Decided to change my mind and just keep the Eng Dub becuase I'm more familiar with it!
Cool it doesn't really matter but what is Ultravors sub name gonna be?
(Jul. 28, 2021  5:39 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Cool it doesn't really matter but what is Ultravors sub name gonna be?

Read the post again, I've edited it
Okay makes sense I'm familiar with it to
(Jul. 28, 2021  5:46 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 28, 2021  5:39 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Cool it doesn't really matter but what is Ultravors sub name gonna be?

Read the post again, I've edited it

lol! nice choice!
When’s next chapter?
(Jul. 28, 2021  6:19 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: When’s next chapter?

Gonna upload another Beyjitzu chapter then start on TechnoX