Can someone close this.

Poll: Do you like my story?

1- Horrible
50.00%
2
2- Very bad
0%
0
3- Bad
0%
0
4- I dont like it.
25.00%
1
5- Its okay.
0%
0
6- I like it.
0%
0
7- Cool
0%
0
8- Good
0%
0
9- Very good
0%
0
10- Awsome!!!
25.00%
1
Total: 100% 4 vote(s)
This is a story I was writting. I was writtig it in spanish so it will take some time to traduce.

The story is about a organization that controls the destiny of people by traveling in time. Then when a huge problem appears the only man with the power to fix it is a kid named Xavier.

I will upload First Chapter tomorrow. Tell me what you think about ht story so far.
TIMERS:CHAPTER 1: The homeless man.
Part one

On a saturday night, a homeless was sitting in front of a bakery located in a dark street. There were only a few lights with poor brightness. The homeless was dirty and wearing ripped clothes. He has a long and plentifull hair and beard.

Then an old beige-color carpull over just in front of the man, a well dressed man tell him.
- Hi. Whats your name?
- My name is Braston Luneroix- said the homeless.
- Do you have a place to sleep this night?
- What do you think?
- Well, this is your lucky night! because...
- Good luck doesn't exist -Braston interrupted- Is destiny, Sr...You siod your name is...
- My name is Guillermo Torres, my boss want me to take you to the house, he is in the car waiting.
- Why your boss want to know me?
- My boss only wants to do a charity, Mr. Braston.
Sorry but no one said nothing so i will make someone close this.
Can someone close this.