World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

This is a story I was writting. I was writtig it in spanish so it will take some time to traduce.

The story is about a organization that controls the destiny of people by traveling in time. Then when a huge problem appears the only man with the power to fix it is a kid named Xavier.

I will upload First Chapter tomorrow. Tell me what you think about ht story so far.

TIMERS:CHAPTER 1: The homeless man.
Part one

On a saturday night, a homeless was sitting in front of a bakery located in a dark street. There were only a few lights with poor brightness. The homeless was dirty and wearing ripped clothes. He has a long and plentifull hair and beard.

Then an old beige-color carpull over just in front of the man, a well dressed man tell him.
- Hi. Whats your name?
- My name is Braston Luneroix- said the homeless.
- Do you have a place to sleep this night?
- What do you think?
- Well, this is your lucky night! because...
- Good luck doesn't exist -Braston interrupted- Is destiny, Sr...You siod your name is...
- My name is Guillermo Torres, my boss want me to take you to the house, he is in the car waiting.
- Why your boss want to know me?
- My boss only wants to do a charity, Mr. Braston.

Sorry but no one said nothing so i will make someone close this.

Can someone close this.