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Doing a complete rewrite of Chouzetsu, any tips?

Doing a complete rewrite of Chouzetsu, any tips?

Cant provide you with specific tips, but here are general ones that may help:

* Dont get too stressed! Rewriting is a lot of work, so its okay to to feel pressured to remember every single character or try to fix holes from rewriting certain stuff. Stress then turns into force, so youll potentially make things come off a little too hard and not as well as you expected
* Somewhat tying in with stress, its okay to take out huge chunks of the original plot! One friend of mine rewrote nearly the entire season’s plot, and it actually ended up pretty well. Dont worry and hold yourself back from rewriting because you feel like it wont be as good, etc.
* Characterization! It may be a rewrite, but it doesnt mean you can change someone’s personality entirely without altering the backstory or making an explanation. However, besides staying in character, you can also add hidden depths to someone the original didnt explore much, add hidden motives, plausible headcanons, etc. Dont go too bizarre to the point your reader doesnt recognize any character

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Doing a complete rewrite of Chouzetsu, any tips?

Now thats a fanfic I would personally read. Looking forward to it.

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Not bad eh?

here is one thing i learned in making a fanfics

Don't spoil

But yeah my new Fanfic Is where i have plans

First I Make the Episode at Google Docs, and Copy and Paste

Second i Post episode list with 5 epiaodes in it, whenever i already finish 5 episodes, i make another Episode List

Third i don't spoil content for another season, (till the last episode)

Doing a complete rewrite of Chouzetsu, any tips?

I considered doing that at one point but never went through with it. Looking forward to seeing what you do.

Thinking about doing a Fan Fiction that has my Official Beyblade OC as the main protagonist. Any suggestions? (this takes place in the Sparking Era btw)

If you want, let me know what you think of my OC

Official OC

Spoiler (Click to View)

Name - Athena Walhalla/Valhalla

Athena is the little sister of Lane, after seeing his flare grow she starts to get worried and makes a Sparking Bey of her own. She later joins The Bombers and becomes close friends with Hikaru and Hyuga rather quickly.

Gender: Female

Age: 10

Bey: Guide Adeona Charge' 4A

Special Moves: Guiding Shoot, Guiding Upper, Sparking Shoot

Eye Color: Purple

Hair Color: Purple

~Fun Facts~

Her favorite food is pasta

She loves cats. (she often cosplays as one)

Her bey is based the Roman Goddess Adeona, the goddess who leads children back to their homes, this reflects Athena's kind and loving personality.

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Thinking about doing a Fan Fiction that has my Official Beyblade OC as the main protagonist. Any suggestions? (this takes place in the Sparking Era btw)

If you want, let me know what you think of my OC

Official OC

Spoiler (Click to View)

Name - Athena Walhalla/Valhalla

Athena is the little sister of Lane, after seeing his flare grow she starts to get worried and makes a Sparking Bey of her own. She later joins The Bombers and becomes close friends with Hikaru and Hyuga rather quickly.

Gender: Female

Age: 10

Bey: Guide Adeona Charge' 2A

Special Moves: Guiding Shoot, Guiding Upper, Sparking Shoot

Eye Color: Purple

Hair Color: Purple

~Fun Facts~

Her favorite food is pasta

She loves cats. (she often cosplays as one)

Her bey is based the Roman Goddess Adeona, the goddess who leads children back to their homes, this reflects Athena's kind and loving personality.

sounds like a good character! awesome name, too c:

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Call me either Sands/Suns! That one female Beyblade fan

Pfp: Cedric from Arcaea by Nataslyn on Discord

[Status: Lurking]

Thinking about doing a Fan Fiction that has my Official Beyblade OC as the main protagonist. Any suggestions? (this takes place in the Sparking Era btw)

If you want, let me know what you think of my OC

Official OC

Spoiler (Click to View)

Name - Athena Walhalla/Valhalla

Athena is the little sister of Lane, after seeing his flare grow she starts to get worried and makes a Sparking Bey of her own. She later joins The Bombers and becomes close friends with Hikaru and Hyuga rather quickly.

Gender: Female

Age: 10

Bey: Guide Adeona Charge' 2A

Special Moves: Guiding Shoot, Guiding Upper, Sparking Shoot

Eye Color: Purple

Hair Color: Purple

~Fun Facts~

Her favorite food is pasta

She loves cats. (she often cosplays as one)

Her bey is based the Roman Goddess Adeona, the goddess who leads children back to their homes, this reflects Athena's kind and loving personality.

sounds like a good character! awesome name, too c:

Thank You

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Some spoilers for Beyblade Burst:Rise of Darkness!Eeeek!

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Valt and Lui die
Toko is the one defeating the final boss
Free arm gets ripped off

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Do not buy galaxy pegus my one broke in battle wing broke off rip

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Oh are we talking about rise I can’t find episodes past the one in hell tower where delta broke divalose why delta why left me sad and has any one noticed that venom deviose is really a ReDesigned luirnore

Do not buy galaxy pegus my one broke in battle wing broke off rip

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Oh are we talking about rise I can’t find episodes past the one in hell tower where delta broke divalose why delta why left me sad and has any one noticed that venom deviose is really a   ReDesigned luirnore

Wrong forum. This thread is about Fan-Fiction, Not products or the anime.

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It’s confusing, and strange, but at times, understandable. I was referring more to the joke comments lol

But also, I’m getting a laptop from my school on Tuesday, so I should hopefully be able to write a lot easier and faster, as I do better on laptops/computers than iPads. So that’ll be nice. Hopefully I can get some stuff done with it. I’d hope to at least get one chapter for any fandom released within a week from getting it, so maybe it’ll be one of my fanfics here, or maybe not. I dunno, this isn’t important, and uh, I dunno what else to say lol

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It’s confusing, and strange, but at times, understandable. I was referring more to the joke comments lol

But also, I’m getting a laptop from my school on Tuesday, so I should hopefully be able to write a lot easier and faster, as I do better on laptops/computers than iPads. So that’ll be nice. Hopefully I can get some stuff done with it. I’d hope to at least get one chapter for any fandom released within a week from getting it, so maybe it’ll be one of my fanfics here, or maybe not. I dunno, this isn’t important, and uh, I dunno what else to say lol

I think you will find it easier to write from a computer

Unfortunately my school has Wattpad blocked so I have to wait until I get home to write for my stories... But maybe it's different for you.

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Fan Fic meme (low effort)

Me at every Fanfic:

https://imgflip.com/i/4daxe4

It’s confusing, and strange, but at times, understandable. I was referring more to the joke comments lol

But also, I’m getting a laptop from my school on Tuesday, so I should hopefully be able to write a lot easier and faster, as I do better on laptops/computers than iPads. So that’ll be nice. Hopefully I can get some stuff done with it. I’d hope to at least get one chapter for any fandom released within a week from getting it, so maybe it’ll be one of my fanfics here, or maybe not. I dunno, this isn’t important, and uh, I dunno what else to say lol

I think you will find it easier to write from a computer

Unfortunately my school has Wattpad blocked so I have to wait until I get home to write for my stories... But maybe it's different for you.

I normally write on a Google Doc, as there’s less lag, and zero chance of pressing the delete button, but it keeps going, destroying half of your work. Then I copy and paste, and then format it’s size.

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I got the laptop, so now all I need is motivation lol

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I'm thinking of focusing more on the battles aspect, before I start working on my own characters and that sort of thing. I feel like I'd start a thread for people to request battles against others, but only if it's in the same season context.

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Brave Valkyrie is my favorite bey, and Valt is my favorite character even if he's a bit overrated.

Note: The “Blog” prefix is there mostly concerning the fact that some users may be comfortable posting updates on their stories and characters here.

Hi! Im not expecting this thread to be quite active. But hey, I see that a bunch of you guys are writers so lets have a thread to discuss our hobby! This thread specifically focuses on writing for Beyblade, so please do not talk about writing in general or something that isnt related to Beyblade

Rules

1) Keep the topic concerning Beyblade fanfic writings. Please do not post whole chapters and stories on here, and make a new thread for that. Permitted are fanfic advertisements as well as short paragraphs (like if you want critique).

Topics that are permitted (but not limited to) are stuff like discussing what is easy/hard to write for Beyblade fanfics, sharing ideas with your fellow writers, asking for help with Beyblade names, saying one thing you dont like about Beyblade fanfics in general, etc.

You can also discuss fanart for your fanfictions! Crossovers and comics are allowed as long as they are mostly Beyblade-oriented, but please don’t stray too far into another series.

2) Do not be rude! You are permitted to complain and share concerns, but please do not specifically call out/do anything rude to other users. Especially do not bash on story ideas unless you are willing to offer constructive criticism. Sharing a fanfic pet peeve is permitted as long as you do not call out other people

3) You can advertise non-fanfic threads as long as you participate in the discussion.

4) Though theres no age restriction, Ill cut you guys off at Rated M, and especially no excessive gore (Cupcakes level, really)

5) No trolling whatsoever, especially spam. Everyone WILL read your post so dont act like it

6) This is concerning rule #1. You are allowed to post character bios here as long as there is no excessive spam. Users have permission by default to criticize and post reactions of your character (ex. “Cool!” / “Wheres the fanfic with that character?” / “I feel like you can improve on X”). If there is an excess of character bio spam and lack of discussion, I will speak up. This is not a “Post Your Character Bio Here” thread, this is a discussion thread.

So...we are allowed to share our headcanons/ship here, right? i'd like to share my headcanons ^^

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hey guys, did you know that in terms of competitive battling, vaporeon is one of the most underrated? not only that it is a water type which grants it only 2 weaknesses and 3 resistances, vaporeon also has a whopping HP stat of 130 and a respectable special defense of 95, allowing it to tank attacks well. it also has the access to the ability hydration, which makes it especially a power to be beckoned in rain teams as it is immune to status moves. not only as a staller, vaporeon can also hold the role of a sweeper as it has a respectable special attack stat of 110, allowing it to fit on HO or HO Rain teams well. in addition, it is able to learn the moves toxic, scald, wish, protect and acid armor making it a very compatible staller and support, flexible to fit in various teams, tiers and so much more to come.

Note: The “Blog” prefix is there mostly concerning the fact that some users may be comfortable posting updates on their stories and characters here.

Hi! Im not expecting this thread to be quite active. But hey, I see that a bunch of you guys are writers so lets have a thread to discuss our hobby! This thread specifically focuses on writing for Beyblade, so please do not talk about writing in general or something that isnt related to Beyblade

Rules

1) Keep the topic concerning Beyblade fanfic writings. Please do not post whole chapters and stories on here, and make a new thread for that. Permitted are fanfic advertisements as well as short paragraphs (like if you want critique).

Topics that are permitted (but not limited to) are stuff like discussing what is easy/hard to write for Beyblade fanfics, sharing ideas with your fellow writers, asking for help with Beyblade names, saying one thing you dont like about Beyblade fanfics in general, etc.

You can also discuss fanart for your fanfictions! Crossovers and comics are allowed as long as they are mostly Beyblade-oriented, but please don’t stray too far into another series.

2) Do not be rude! You are permitted to complain and share concerns, but please do not specifically call out/do anything rude to other users. Especially do not bash on story ideas unless you are willing to offer constructive criticism. Sharing a fanfic pet peeve is permitted as long as you do not call out other people

3) You can advertise non-fanfic threads as long as you participate in the discussion.

4) Though theres no age restriction, Ill cut you guys off at Rated M, and especially no excessive gore (Cupcakes level, really)

5) No trolling whatsoever, especially spam. Everyone WILL read your post so dont act like it

6) This is concerning rule #1. You are allowed to post character bios here as long as there is no excessive spam. Users have permission by default to criticize and post reactions of your character (ex. “Cool!” / “Wheres the fanfic with that character?” / “I feel like you can improve on X”). If there is an excess of character bio spam and lack of discussion, I will speak up. This is not a “Post Your Character Bio Here” thread, this is a discussion thread.

So...we are allowed to share our headcanons/ship here, right? i'd like to share my headcanons ^^

Uhh No not on WBO do that on Wattpad or some other place

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So...we are allowed to share our headcanons/ship here, right? i'd like to share my headcanons ^^

Uhh No not on WBO do that on Wattpad or some other place

Uhh no do not spread false information. Tenma, you are perfectly free to post your headcanons.

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Uhh No not on WBO do that on Wattpad or some other place

Uhh no do not spread false information. Tenma, you are perfectly free to post your headcanons.

thank you!! i have a bunchload of headcanons stuck in my head rn ^^

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Uhh No not on WBO do that on Wattpad or some other place

Uhh no do not spread false information. Tenma, you are perfectly free to post your headcanons.

Headcanon: Fubuki (Beyblade Burst Chouzetsu/Turbo Series) can get flustered very easily and he actually likes to cook, though, he flusters when someone compliments his cooking. He is insecure about the fact that he flusters easily, which is why he rarely cooks.

Let me know what do you think about my headcanon! ^^

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hey guys, did you know that in terms of competitive battling, vaporeon is one of the most underrated? not only that it is a water type which grants it only 2 weaknesses and 3 resistances, vaporeon also has a whopping HP stat of 130 and a respectable special defense of 95, allowing it to tank attacks well. it also has the access to the ability hydration, which makes it especially a power to be beckoned in rain teams as it is immune to status moves. not only as a staller, vaporeon can also hold the role of a sweeper as it has a respectable special attack stat of 110, allowing it to fit on HO or HO Rain teams well. in addition, it is able to learn the moves toxic, scald, wish, protect and acid armor making it a very compatible staller and support, flexible to fit in various teams, tiers and so much more to come.

Hey anyone who passes by this thread. Please don’t quote or respond to the previous post. I already reported it, just ignore and move on.

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My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

Hey anyone who passes by this thread. Please don’t quote or respond to the previous post. I already reported it, just ignore and move on.

Yeah... It trashing the threads advertising its stupid botox!

Not like anyone is going to use it...

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Hey anyone who passes by this thread. Please don’t quote or respond to the previous post. I already reported it, just ignore and move on.

Yeah... It trashing the threads advertising its stupid botox!

Not like anyone is going to use it...

Yeah, we really need more mods. Maybe volunteer ones that are temporary until we find someone full time.

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My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA