cool again but i really like how atticus has a dragon like his dad and like how brent has a water like creature like his dad well his dad has a dead sea monster but they are alike in a way

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TEAM FIREBLAZE!

I actually never realized that XD i swear that was an accident.

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

I'm so sorry I haven't posted a chapter in awhile. Haven't had computer access. Chapter 9 is up!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

um i have a question do you accept character request i wonder cause if you do then i got one im praying to put in this story im just asking

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TEAM FIREBLAZE!

No character requests, sorry.

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Chapter 10 is up! (Sorry for the double post). Also, I'm thinking of writing another "story". I'll still work on this one, but I want to start another one. Now you may or may not be thinking, CG, first of all, why the heck is your username so weird? You also might be thinking that I had my other two stories closed because I didn't have enough time to work on both. Now that is still the case, and that's why I will be making this other story more of a...hm...a sitcom I guess. As I have stated here multiple times (or maybe that was in a youtube video) I know I'm not that funny, but I'll give it a try. It will slightly be based off of my life, and slightly based on my favorite sitcom, Outnumbered (yah. I'm obsessed with it). It also will address some touchy subjects but I don't mean to offend anyone (I'll address that more in the actual thread). So, yah. new chapter, new (sort of) story. Eh, forget it.

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Chapter 11 is up! To bad my story isn't really popular. Eh, I don't care, its fun

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

It's awesome! Plus, it's still a bit new, let it sink in.

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As soon as I get Doom Molten Drago, you are as good as defeated!


MY Beyweelz Story(Featuring Doom Molten Drago):

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http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-a-BeyWhe...pid1049498

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John 3:16
"For God so loved (Insert your name here), that He gave His only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth on Him, shall not perish, but have everlasting life." This is in the Bible.

That's an awesome story! I want to buy more Beywheelz now!

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Because... I was called a genius...

Haha, this is just a representation, product will not do all that is shown in the commercial. Chapter 12 should be up tomorrow by the way.

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Cant wait for the next chapter!

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As soon as I get Doom Molten Drago, you are as good as defeated!


MY Beyweelz Story(Featuring Doom Molten Drago):

Spoiler (Click to View)

http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-a-BeyWhe...pid1049498

Click here!

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John 3:16
"For God so loved (Insert your name here), that He gave His only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth on Him, shall not perish, but have everlasting life." This is in the Bible.

I haven't posted here for so long this story is a bit of the past...
Anyway, chapter 12 is (finally) up!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

? AT THE MOMENT IT SEEMS LIKE AKIRA IS THE STRONGEST NECAUSE SENSE GRASSHOPER BEASTED ALOT OF THEM.

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TEAM FIREBLAZE!

Well...we'll see. Chapter 13 is up!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

I like these stories! I can't wait for the round robin (Finished Chapter 13). Keep it up!

Yeah, this is an awesome story! Keep writing! Can't wait for Chap. 14!

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As soon as I get Doom Molten Drago, you are as good as defeated!


MY Beyweelz Story(Featuring Doom Molten Drago):

Spoiler (Click to View)

http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-a-BeyWhe...pid1049498

Click here!

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John 3:16
"For God so loved (Insert your name here), that He gave His only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth on Him, shall not perish, but have everlasting life." This is in the Bible.

I didn't like it because the storyline isn't well written in my opinion, although I like Beywheelz. I'd suggest you'd read the hunger games books, make an interesting plot in the books, just don't copy it.

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I hate the Hunger Games...and your stories were very short and incomplete, so you really don't have anything to say about a "bad storyline." Plus, I am not writing a story about a bunch of teenagers who run around trying to survive and kill each other with beywheelz.

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Chapter 14 is up!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Chapter 15 is up! The Paladins are formed!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Chapter 16 is up! And...information on the story I will be writing after this (which won't be a sequel) will be coming soon! So keep checking the thread for the info!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Wow your chapters are amazing. I really like reading them. And to have so many stories going on to. You sir are a great writer. Can't wait to see more chapters up.

Really? Thanks! I want to be a writer when I grow up, so that's really good to hear

Also, I couldn't wait. I'll just give sequel info out now!

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Story title- That Ain't Working, Thats Beyblade!
Story Plot- I know I know, cheesy title, but I have my reasons. The reasons being...
This story is about a rock band who are entering high school. They immediately experience some difficulties, but things start to look up when they decide to add a member into the band. This member introduces them to beyblade, and the band soon becomes a team, competing in local tournaments.
However, tension builds as the four friends try to juggle gigs, tournaments, and the pressures of high school at the same time. Soon, it looks like the only choice they have is to disband, and go there separate ways.
NOTE- This is just the beginning of the plot. I don't like to plan my stories, I like to build on them, so this is just the basic plot of which I will build off of.
Characters-
Name- Ben Riley
Age- 14
Beyblade- Revizer Dragooon S130XF

Name- Landon Russell
Age- 14
Beyblade- Duo Tempo E230RS (I chose Tempo instead of Horogium for reasons that will become obvious when I begin to write the story, if they haven't already)

Name- Cynthia Louis
Age- 14
Beyblade- Phantom Cygnus 230D

Name- Shira Floyd
Age- 14
Beyblade- Revizer Revizer SA165BWD

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Ok, here it is, round 1 of the tournament! Chapter 17!
Enjoy

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Chapter 18's up! Enjoy!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)