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[Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - Dual - Dec. 08, 2012

This is the sequel to my first beywheelz story, Reach for the Stars. Enjoy!
Also, if you vote that this story is bad, please tell me why you think so. That way I can improve and hopefully make this story the best it can be.

Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21 part 1
Chapter 21 part 2
Chapter 22 part 1


Character descriptions-



RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - Dual - Dec. 08, 2012

Chapter 1 is up!


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - DarkNinja720 - Dec. 08, 2012

Pretty good!


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - Dual - Dec. 08, 2012

Thanks! Any ideas on how I could make it better?


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Dec. 08, 2012

It's a bit fast-paced, but I dont see many errors. I also like the idea of the story. Keep it up!


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - Dual - Dec. 08, 2012

Ok, ill try to slow down the pace. Thanks for the tip!


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - Dual - Dec. 10, 2012

Chapter 2 is up! Sorry its a bit long.
I can't seem to get this right. Chapter 3 is up and now, its short XD


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - thelegISlAtive - Dec. 10, 2012

i like the eg system thing cool great story so far


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - Dual - Dec. 10, 2012

Thanks! Chapter 4 is up by the way.


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - thelegISlAtive - Dec. 11, 2012

man that 4th chapter was really cool with the old style blades as well as a different style of blading too with the badest bladers around tyson max kai and ray. you never fail to interest me


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - Dual - Dec. 11, 2012

Haha thanks Smile Chapter 5 might possible be up today. If not then probably tomorrow.


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - DarkNinja720 - Dec. 11, 2012

Hmm, Chapter 4 is good, but how does anyone know about Tyson and Dragoon, Max and Draciel, Ray and Driger, and Kai and Dranzer?


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - Dual - Dec. 11, 2012

Hmm. That was a problem i tried to address. However, the best i got was that there had been previous rumors that had been built upon. Ill try to reveal more of this theory throughout the story.


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - thelegISlAtive - Dec. 11, 2012

man i cant wait for chapter 5 man you are my mine story writer ima die for the next chapter


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - DarkNinja720 - Dec. 12, 2012

Sam Have you battled C.J.?


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - Dual - Dec. 12, 2012

Sam- My dad? For fun yah. He always won though.


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - Dual - Dec. 13, 2012

Chapter 5 is up!


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - DarkNinja720 - Dec. 13, 2012

Good chapter, but you put C.J. some instead of son. Keep it up! Smile


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - Dual - Dec. 14, 2012

Did I? Sorry I can't find it. Well, chapter 6 is up. Sorry if its a bit short.


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - DarkNinja720 - Dec. 14, 2012

Pretty good chapter, except sometimes in place of 'too', you put 'to'. KIU!


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - cdog - Dec. 14, 2012

cool story thow bro i like using the old school as a wheel thats cool hooked like fish countinue with chater 7


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - Dual - Dec. 14, 2012

Thanks! Chapter 7 is up, but its short. Sorry.


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - Dual - Dec. 17, 2012

Chapter 8 is up!


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - DarkNinja720 - Dec. 19, 2012

Keep it up! Smile


RE: [Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past - Dual - Dec. 19, 2012

Sorry i havent updated in a while, its final exams week. Woohoo -.-