[Beywheelz Story] A Bit of the Past

Poll: What do you think?

Amazing!
52.17%
12
Great!
8.70%
2
Good.
13.04%
3
Ok...
8.70%
2
Bad.
17.39%
4
Total: 100% 23 vote(s)
This is the sequel to my first beywheelz story, Reach for the Stars. Enjoy!
Also, if you vote that this story is bad, please tell me why you think so. That way I can improve and hopefully make this story the best it can be.

Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21 part 1
Chapter 21 part 2
Chapter 22 part 1


Character descriptions-
Chapter 1 is up!
Pretty good!
Thanks! Any ideas on how I could make it better?
It's a bit fast-paced, but I dont see many errors. I also like the idea of the story. Keep it up!
Ok, ill try to slow down the pace. Thanks for the tip!
Chapter 2 is up! Sorry its a bit long.
I can't seem to get this right. Chapter 3 is up and now, its short XD
i like the eg system thing cool great story so far
Thanks! Chapter 4 is up by the way.
man that 4th chapter was really cool with the old style blades as well as a different style of blading too with the badest bladers around tyson max kai and ray. you never fail to interest me
Haha thanks Smile Chapter 5 might possible be up today. If not then probably tomorrow.
Hmm, Chapter 4 is good, but how does anyone know about Tyson and Dragoon, Max and Draciel, Ray and Driger, and Kai and Dranzer?
Hmm. That was a problem i tried to address. However, the best i got was that there had been previous rumors that had been built upon. Ill try to reveal more of this theory throughout the story.
man i cant wait for chapter 5 man you are my mine story writer ima die for the next chapter
Sam Have you battled C.J.?
Sam- My dad? For fun yah. He always won though.
Chapter 5 is up!
Good chapter, but you put C.J. some instead of son. Keep it up! Smile
Did I? Sorry I can't find it. Well, chapter 6 is up. Sorry if its a bit short.
Pretty good chapter, except sometimes in place of 'too', you put 'to'. KIU!
cool story thow bro i like using the old school as a wheel thats cool hooked like fish countinue with chater 7
Thanks! Chapter 7 is up, but its short. Sorry.
Chapter 8 is up!
Keep it up! Smile
Sorry i havent updated in a while, its final exams week. Woohoo -.-