Beystory 1:needs character requests

Poll: how did you like this story?

BEST...STORY...EVER!
0%
0
needs improvment...
50.00%
2
Ok...
50.00%
2
WORST...STORY...EVER!
0%
0
Total: 100% 4 vote(s)
chapter 1:Me Vs. Sora
chapter 2:The new move
i will add new chapters
Make chapters longer... Grammar check.... And spelling check. :\
Ya make the chapters longer, and basically what ever China said. Smile Also make sure the actual story makes sense. No offense...