Beystory 1:needs character requests - blader7228 - Jul. 29, 2012
chapter 1:Me Vs. Sora
i,a blader that is a big friend of ginka,was watching a battle at the third naitional tournement
then,someoen launched a bey from nowhere"Go,cyber"the guy said"is that sora?"i asked myself
and i suddenly knew it was!he was battling!"cyber!special move!OV DRIVE!"shouted sora
then,sora bew his oppent out!then when the tournement was over,i saw sora"hey,sora!"
i shouted.Sora stopped."what is it,kid?"sora asked"i want to battle you!"i answered
"okay!"said sora
"3"i said,as we attached our beys to our launcher
"2"said sora
"1..LET IT RIP"we both said!and we pulled the rip cord.
the beys clashed feircely!"go!cyber"shouted sora"strike grand destroyer!"i shouted
"i will end this now"i say."special move!destroyer,Olde sword attack'
and then a giant beam of darkness shot out of destroyer!"a stadium out,sora"i said,happily
"awwwww"sighed sora chapter 2:The new move
"LET IT RIP!"i say"Go!special move!iron axe strike!,and get it right this time!"i say,launching my beyblade
it sprouted its claws,but they didn't spin,and the bey was sent flying"AAAWWW!,EPIC FAIL"i say in misery"hey,you"i heard someone say,i turned around"what?"i ask"i want to battle you"he answers"ok..."i say
"3"i say
"2"he says
"1"we say
"LET IT RIP!"
They clash Epicly
"go destroyer!"i shout
"come on go!Gasher"the guy says
"wait,your tetsuya,aren't you?"i ask
"yes,crab"he answers
"destroy!olde sword attack"i shout
"KRABBAWHHUHHAT"shouts tetsuya
And gasher falls out of the stadium"i win,wataraganey"i say
"how did this happen?"cried tetsuya"it was a grand gasher,crab"
"meh..."i say i will add new chapters
RE: Beystory 1:needs character requests - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 29, 2012
Make chapters longer... Grammar check.... And spelling check. :\
RE: Beystory 1:needs character requests - H3LLO - Jul. 31, 2012
Ya make the chapters longer, and basically what ever China said. Also make sure the actual story makes sense. No offense...
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