Beyblade myths fanfic

this if my first fan fic if you want you can give me characters and ideas and they probably will be included!

I will be posting chapters weekly
Burst sound

Announcer: And the winner is shu kurenai

Fin: Man that shu is the best one day I want to beat him and then the champion

Ven: Ha no way you will he is way out of your league

Fin: Just wait till we get our own beyblades

Ven: Either way free is better than that Shu Kurenai

Fin: There’s no way free is better than shu


Ten years later

Three, Two, One, go shoot

Anouncer: Ferret and Kerbeus go flying into the ring and keep bouncing off each other it is like they are both not doing any damage or losing any stamina

Both beys are fighting over the center bouncing off eachother

Fin: Aaaaaaaah ferret rise from the flames

Ferrets avatar appears

Kaiden: Kerbeus go and crush him

Kerbeus’s avatar appears
Fins eyes turn blood red and a dark red frame engulfs him

Fin: Now flamesurge crush
Ferret tilts starts speeding backwards against the wall and his free spinning ring starts spinning the opposite direction giving ferret more speed and then crashes into omen kerbeus

Kaiden’s eyes turn bluish green
Kaiden: Now Omen chains
Omen Kerbeus turns green and is perfectly silent and then starts spinning around the center but not in it

They both crash into each other making an intense explosion of red and green then they hear a bursting sound and kerbeus is in 5 different pieces at kaidens feet
Kaiden scowls grabs his bey and runs away before the referee can call it
Fin won the battle and moves onto the next round
(Feb. 23, 2021  5:34 PM)danjain0527 Wrote: Burst sound

Announcer: And the winner is shu kurenai

Fin: Man that shu is the best one day I want to beat him and then the champion

Ven: Ha no way you will he is way out of your league

Fin: Just wait till we get our own beyblades

Ven: Either way free is better than that Shu Kurenai

Fin: There’s no way free is better than shu


Ten years later

Three, Two, One, go shoot

Anouncer: Ferret and Kerbeus go flying into the ring and keep bouncing off each other it is like they are both not doing any damage or losing any stamina

Both beys are fighting over the center bouncing off eachother

Fin: Aaaaaaaah ferret rise from the flames

Ferrets avatar appears

Kaiden: Kerbeus go and crush him

Kerbeus’s avatar appears
Fins eyes turn blood red and a dark red frame engulfs him

Fin: Now flamesurge crush
Ferret tilts starts speeding backwards against the wall and his free spinning ring starts spinning the opposite direction giving ferret more speed and then crashes into omen kerbeus

Kaiden’s eyes turn bluish green
Kaiden: Now Omen chains
Omen Kerbeus turns green and is perfectly silent and then starts spinning around the center but not in it

They both crash into each other making an intense explosion of red and green then they hear a bursting sound and kerbeus is in 5 different pieces at kaidens feet
Kaiden scowls grabs his bey and runs away before the referee can call it
Fin won the battle and moves onto the next round

So things:

In the wrong forum, should be in "Your Creations" not "Discuss wbo.org"

Doesn't have the Fan Fic prefix

This one isn't required, but have a better name than "Beyblade Myths"
sorry I just don't know how to do a prefix

what was the suggestion for the new name