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I have a hiatus of writing for a while. But this is a story I made up
Chapter I
Chapter II
Chapter III
Chapter IV Part I
Chapter IV Part II
Chapter V (flashback)
Chapter VI
Chapter VII part I
TO BE CONTINUED
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Big time credits to kaihiwatatari5673 who made this sig for me.
Chapter I
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It was one fine Tuesday in Miami...
"Hurry up, we're gonna be late!!" Tim said
"Can you wait! I'm tying my shoes here." Keltz said
Hi there, my name is Keltz Washington. I'm a Blader from U.S.A with my friends Tim and Daniel. And we are forming the Beyblade team representing our country. Today we have a tournament at the Bey Colloseum.
"All right, last one to the colosseum is a rotten pickle!!" Daniel said.
We rushed to the colosseum. And we've arrived just in time.
"All right fellow bladers, let's begin the first annual Country team battle. And first, the Unstoppable U.S.A will square off against the Mischievous Mexico. First comes in Keltz VS Él!!!" the DJ said in a loud voice.
Let's do this!" I said
"You're going down pendejo!!" Èl grunted
"3" The DJ said
"2" the crowd said
"1" I and Èl screamed
"GO SHOOOOOT!!!!" All screamed even my mom could hear it.
The beys rushed into the stadium.
Keltz Blitz Orion gave some punishing blows to Èl's Basalt Byxis.
"All right, I have been taking it easy on you kid. Time to finish this, Byxis, Screwing Ram!!!!"
" Not so fast, Orion, Superb Illusion!!!"
Orion splits into clones, and eventually the trick worked. Byxis smashed a fake Orion and all the Orions rushed him and charged Byxis rapidly. And eventually pushed it out of the stadium. Orion wins
"NOOOOOO!!!!!!" Èl screamed
"We did it Orion! Yeah!" I said proudly.
"That's that, Keltz, along with his Blitz Orion TH170HF/S moves to the Semifinal round" The DJ announced
TO BE CONTINUED
"Hurry up, we're gonna be late!!" Tim said
"Can you wait! I'm tying my shoes here." Keltz said
Hi there, my name is Keltz Washington. I'm a Blader from U.S.A with my friends Tim and Daniel. And we are forming the Beyblade team representing our country. Today we have a tournament at the Bey Colloseum.
"All right, last one to the colosseum is a rotten pickle!!" Daniel said.
We rushed to the colosseum. And we've arrived just in time.
"All right fellow bladers, let's begin the first annual Country team battle. And first, the Unstoppable U.S.A will square off against the Mischievous Mexico. First comes in Keltz VS Él!!!" the DJ said in a loud voice.
Let's do this!" I said
"You're going down pendejo!!" Èl grunted
"3" The DJ said
"2" the crowd said
"1" I and Èl screamed
"GO SHOOOOOT!!!!" All screamed even my mom could hear it.
The beys rushed into the stadium.
Keltz Blitz Orion gave some punishing blows to Èl's Basalt Byxis.
"All right, I have been taking it easy on you kid. Time to finish this, Byxis, Screwing Ram!!!!"
" Not so fast, Orion, Superb Illusion!!!"
Orion splits into clones, and eventually the trick worked. Byxis smashed a fake Orion and all the Orions rushed him and charged Byxis rapidly. And eventually pushed it out of the stadium. Orion wins
"NOOOOOO!!!!!!" Èl screamed
"We did it Orion! Yeah!" I said proudly.
"That's that, Keltz, along with his Blitz Orion TH170HF/S moves to the Semifinal round" The DJ announced
TO BE CONTINUED
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"Next up, Daniel VS Grando!!"
Daniel walked calmly into the stadium.
"So, you think you're going to win huh?" Grando questioned
"Yup, I'm sure I'll win and give you a big break, A big terrible break.." Daniel smirked.
"Alright bladers , stop yer yappin and lets get to it. 3!!!" The DJ shouted
"2" The crowd shouted
"1" I and Grando shouted
"GO SHOOOT!!!" All screamed.
The beys immediately crashed in the middle of the stadium.
"Your bey is no match for my Hell Aquila!!" Grando exclaimed.
"You think?! How dare you insult my Ray Beater! As a punishment, take this!! Ray Beater, Sonic Ring!!!" Daniel shouted.
The sonic rings pushed aquila to the edge of the stadium.
"Not just yet, Aquila, Metal Wing Slash!!!" Grando shouted
His bey dashed with high speed, immediately hitting Beater to the edge of the stadium. When all seems lost...
"Beater, Cosmic Dash!!" Daniel shouted.
Again, Daniel's Beater turned the tide in the battle. And Aquila was pushed right out of the stadium.
"Yeah, now that's what I'm talking about!" Daniel said in victory
"Im..Impossible" Grando whispered
"Wow, what a backbreaking battle! Daniel goes to the Semifinal Round, Where you can see his Ray Beater ED145WF in action again.
TO BE CONTINUED..
Daniel walked calmly into the stadium.
"So, you think you're going to win huh?" Grando questioned
"Yup, I'm sure I'll win and give you a big break, A big terrible break.." Daniel smirked.
"Alright bladers , stop yer yappin and lets get to it. 3!!!" The DJ shouted
"2" The crowd shouted
"1" I and Grando shouted
"GO SHOOOT!!!" All screamed.
The beys immediately crashed in the middle of the stadium.
"Your bey is no match for my Hell Aquila!!" Grando exclaimed.
"You think?! How dare you insult my Ray Beater! As a punishment, take this!! Ray Beater, Sonic Ring!!!" Daniel shouted.
The sonic rings pushed aquila to the edge of the stadium.
"Not just yet, Aquila, Metal Wing Slash!!!" Grando shouted
His bey dashed with high speed, immediately hitting Beater to the edge of the stadium. When all seems lost...
"Beater, Cosmic Dash!!" Daniel shouted.
Again, Daniel's Beater turned the tide in the battle. And Aquila was pushed right out of the stadium.
"Yeah, now that's what I'm talking about!" Daniel said in victory
"Im..Impossible" Grando whispered
"Wow, what a backbreaking battle! Daniel goes to the Semifinal Round, Where you can see his Ray Beater ED145WF in action again.
TO BE CONTINUED..
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"Okay folks, time to continue the battle between the U.S.A and Mexico!! Next up, Tim VS Santos!!!" the DJ announced
" Size doesn't count here, its your bey spirit that counts. My Burn Quetzalcoatl will win!!" Tim said excitedly
" Not if my Fang Dragonite has anything to say about it" Santos said
"Lets rrrrrrruuuummble!!!! 3!!" The DJ said
"2" the crowd screamed
"1" Tim and Santos prepared
"GO SHOOOOT!!!" all screamed
Their beys circled around the edge. But suddenly Dragonite comes in the center, Quetz soon followed, and made a big clash in the center
"Push him out, Quetz. ATTAACK!!!" Tim commanded
"Dragonite, special move, Counter Smash!!!
Dragonite countered Quetz's strike and send it flying in the sky
"What do i do, What do i do?!" Tim said nervously "Aha, Quetz, Viper Snap!!
Quetzalcoatl rained down like a shooting star, aiming straight at Dragonite. A big blow in the stadium occured, BOOOOOOOMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!
"There it is, Quetz spinning and Dragonite is almost out!!!"
"Lets finish this, QUUEEETTZZ!!!" Tim shouted
Quetz gave a final punishing blow to Dragonite. it immediately breaks because of a cracked facebolt. Tim wins
"Oh yeah, we win Quetz, Yesss!!!!"
"..........." Santos said nothing
"That is it!!! U.S.A moves to semifinal and Mexico has to be eliminated. What a battle folks!! We'll continue tomorrow for the semifinal round."
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" Size doesn't count here, its your bey spirit that counts. My Burn Quetzalcoatl will win!!" Tim said excitedly
" Not if my Fang Dragonite has anything to say about it" Santos said
"Lets rrrrrrruuuummble!!!! 3!!" The DJ said
"2" the crowd screamed
"1" Tim and Santos prepared
"GO SHOOOOT!!!" all screamed
Their beys circled around the edge. But suddenly Dragonite comes in the center, Quetz soon followed, and made a big clash in the center
"Push him out, Quetz. ATTAACK!!!" Tim commanded
"Dragonite, special move, Counter Smash!!!
Dragonite countered Quetz's strike and send it flying in the sky
"What do i do, What do i do?!" Tim said nervously "Aha, Quetz, Viper Snap!!
Quetzalcoatl rained down like a shooting star, aiming straight at Dragonite. A big blow in the stadium occured, BOOOOOOOMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!
"There it is, Quetz spinning and Dragonite is almost out!!!"
"Lets finish this, QUUEEETTZZ!!!" Tim shouted
Quetz gave a final punishing blow to Dragonite. it immediately breaks because of a cracked facebolt. Tim wins
"Oh yeah, we win Quetz, Yesss!!!!"
"..........." Santos said nothing
"That is it!!! U.S.A moves to semifinal and Mexico has to be eliminated. What a battle folks!! We'll continue tomorrow for the semifinal round."
TO BE CONTINUED
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Tomorrow noon at Bey Colosseum...
Keltz was beside his locker, packing his Blitz Orion and assembling his launcher. He looked upset. Soon Daniel approached him and said
"What happened to you man? You okay?" Daniel asked
"Not really Dan, last night I had a really bad nightmare... I can't sleep well, and now my Orion myssteriously keeps glowing all the time." Keltz explained
"I understand, for now just focus on the tournament. You'll be up next." Daniel said
"Right..." Daniel whispered
"Alright folks, lets start the semifinal round of the annual Country team Bey Battle tournament. I'm sure we'll have a blast as the Unstoppable U.S.A goes face to face with Germany the Great, First to blade is Keltz and Nathan!" the DJ announced
"My Counter Chameleon will humiliate you!!" Nathan big-mouthed
"Hmph, we'll see about that." Keltz replied bravely
'Let's begin the action, 3!!" the DJ shouted
"2" the crowd shouted
"1" Keltz and nathan readied their launchers
"GO SHOOOT!!!" All shouted
The beys clashed at each other
"Chameleon, dodge his attacks!" Nathan said
"Not so fast, Orion, hit him from above!" Keltz commanded
"I got you now, Chameleon, Reversal slash!!" Nathan smirked
Chameleon countered Orion's strike, sending it to the edge of the stadium
"Keltz.." Tim murmured
"If he strikes Orion, I'll lose! What do I do?" Keltz thought to himself
Suddenly a mysterious figure appeared
"Go on Keltz, use your inner power. You know you want to." The mysterious figure said in a dark tone
"Who are you?" Keltz questioned
"I am the mysterious figure from you dreams!!!"
"No,no..." Daniel said
"Use it, use it, USE THE LIGNTNING OOOOORRRBBBB!!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!!! AH HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!" The mysterious figure laughed
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!" Keltz screamed in pain
Keltz snapped back into reality
"ORION, OMEGA THUNDER DOME EXPLOSIOOOOONNN!!!" keltz commanded
Orion released its inner power,all of it. It creates an eletrical dome of explosion that no bey can withstand.
"Son of a...." Daniel muttered in shock
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Keltz was beside his locker, packing his Blitz Orion and assembling his launcher. He looked upset. Soon Daniel approached him and said
"What happened to you man? You okay?" Daniel asked
"Not really Dan, last night I had a really bad nightmare... I can't sleep well, and now my Orion myssteriously keeps glowing all the time." Keltz explained
"I understand, for now just focus on the tournament. You'll be up next." Daniel said
"Right..." Daniel whispered
"Alright folks, lets start the semifinal round of the annual Country team Bey Battle tournament. I'm sure we'll have a blast as the Unstoppable U.S.A goes face to face with Germany the Great, First to blade is Keltz and Nathan!" the DJ announced
"My Counter Chameleon will humiliate you!!" Nathan big-mouthed
"Hmph, we'll see about that." Keltz replied bravely
'Let's begin the action, 3!!" the DJ shouted
"2" the crowd shouted
"1" Keltz and nathan readied their launchers
"GO SHOOOT!!!" All shouted
The beys clashed at each other
"Chameleon, dodge his attacks!" Nathan said
"Not so fast, Orion, hit him from above!" Keltz commanded
"I got you now, Chameleon, Reversal slash!!" Nathan smirked
Chameleon countered Orion's strike, sending it to the edge of the stadium
"Keltz.." Tim murmured
"If he strikes Orion, I'll lose! What do I do?" Keltz thought to himself
Suddenly a mysterious figure appeared
"Go on Keltz, use your inner power. You know you want to." The mysterious figure said in a dark tone
"Who are you?" Keltz questioned
"I am the mysterious figure from you dreams!!!"
"No,no..." Daniel said
"Use it, use it, USE THE LIGNTNING OOOOORRRBBBB!!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!!! AH HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!" The mysterious figure laughed
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!" Keltz screamed in pain
Keltz snapped back into reality
"ORION, OMEGA THUNDER DOME EXPLOSIOOOOONNN!!!" keltz commanded
Orion released its inner power,all of it. It creates an eletrical dome of explosion that no bey can withstand.
"Son of a...." Daniel muttered in shock
TO BE CONTINUED
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The stadium is destroyed, Orion is barely spinning, Chameleon is splitted into parts, a flying Counter metal wheel flung into Nathan's hand.
"Wow, the stadium is busted, but Keltz is the winner! We'll give you a break as our staffs fix the stadium." the DJ announced
Daniel carried Keltz who is barely standing
"What was with you back there man?" Daniel asked
"Urrrrghhh......Or..rr...e" Keltz moaned
"You better take some shut-eye tonight." Daniel adviced
Suddenly, a boy with yellow shirt and sunglasses approached them
"Hi, the name's Lleyton Cahill, up fo' a friendly match?" He asked in a polite and friendly tone
"Keltz, since you've totaled the stadium before, I'll handle this. Okay Lleyton, I accept your challenge!" Daniel said
"3,2,1, GO SHOOT!!" Dan and Cahill shouted
The beys centered into the stadium, Death Aquario is sturdy in the center no matter how many times it's hit by Beater
"Aquario, Aqua Clones!!" Cahill said
Aquario splitted into clones.
"Heh, nice try, Beater, Copycat!!" Daniel said
Beater copied Aquario's move. The clone's clashed at each other, and KO'ed Beater out of the stadium
"What...n..no." Daniel said
"Nice match, I'll be back tomorrow." Lleyton said
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"Wow, the stadium is busted, but Keltz is the winner! We'll give you a break as our staffs fix the stadium." the DJ announced
Daniel carried Keltz who is barely standing
"What was with you back there man?" Daniel asked
"Urrrrghhh......Or..rr...e" Keltz moaned
"You better take some shut-eye tonight." Daniel adviced
Suddenly, a boy with yellow shirt and sunglasses approached them
"Hi, the name's Lleyton Cahill, up fo' a friendly match?" He asked in a polite and friendly tone
"Keltz, since you've totaled the stadium before, I'll handle this. Okay Lleyton, I accept your challenge!" Daniel said
"3,2,1, GO SHOOT!!" Dan and Cahill shouted
The beys centered into the stadium, Death Aquario is sturdy in the center no matter how many times it's hit by Beater
"Aquario, Aqua Clones!!" Cahill said
Aquario splitted into clones.
"Heh, nice try, Beater, Copycat!!" Daniel said
Beater copied Aquario's move. The clone's clashed at each other, and KO'ed Beater out of the stadium
"What...n..no." Daniel said
"Nice match, I'll be back tomorrow." Lleyton said
TO BE CONTINUED
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Keltz was running around the park seraching for his Phantom Orion B:D. Suddenly a boy in a black robe spotted and picked up his bey.
"Give my bey back!!" Keltz said
"Heh, that fast? no way. You'll have to battle me first!" The boy said
Keltz pulled out his alternative bey L Drago Destroy F:S and readied his launcher
"3,2,1 GO SHOOOT!!!" They screamed
The beys clashed around the stadium, and the two bladers seemed serious
"Finish this L Drago, Tornado Swirl!!"
Orion was swirled up into the air
"My chance, Orion, Phantom Saw Cutter!!" The boy shouted
His attack missed, and Orion hit the ground, overheating it and spun out. Keltz win and took back his Orion
"This isn't over boy, I'll be back and haunt you overtime HAHAHAH!!!!" The mysterious boy vowed
Suddenly Keltz woke up in the Bey Hotel wit his friend Tim beside him
"Feeling better?" Tim asked
"I think so..." Keltz replied
Suddenly his Blitz orion flashed rapidly, and evolved into Shinobi Orion WA160XF
"Your bey j-just evolved into a Zero-G bey?!" Tim said in shock
"........I'm ready Ore, just you wait!!!!" Keltz whispered
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"Give my bey back!!" Keltz said
"Heh, that fast? no way. You'll have to battle me first!" The boy said
Keltz pulled out his alternative bey L Drago Destroy F:S and readied his launcher
"3,2,1 GO SHOOOT!!!" They screamed
The beys clashed around the stadium, and the two bladers seemed serious
"Finish this L Drago, Tornado Swirl!!"
Orion was swirled up into the air
"My chance, Orion, Phantom Saw Cutter!!" The boy shouted
His attack missed, and Orion hit the ground, overheating it and spun out. Keltz win and took back his Orion
"This isn't over boy, I'll be back and haunt you overtime HAHAHAH!!!!" The mysterious boy vowed
Suddenly Keltz woke up in the Bey Hotel wit his friend Tim beside him
"Feeling better?" Tim asked
"I think so..." Keltz replied
Suddenly his Blitz orion flashed rapidly, and evolved into Shinobi Orion WA160XF
"Your bey j-just evolved into a Zero-G bey?!" Tim said in shock
"........I'm ready Ore, just you wait!!!!" Keltz whispered
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"And we continue to the second round of the semifinal of the country team battle!!! Since Daniel is on the Bey shop to buy some bey parts, we will replace Daniel with Keltz! he is going to brawl with Leon Hawk.
Its Zero-G VS Zero G here, as Keltz's just-evolved Shinobi Orion WA160XF fights against Leon's Archer Gryph C145S, Let's rumble!!" The DJ said
"Hmm, I wonder what my evolved partner look like in battle, perhaps this is my chance to find out!!" Keltz whispered
"Alright bladers, ready your launcher and beys, 3!!" the DJ said
"2" the crowd said
"1" Keltz and Leon said
"GO SHOOOT!!!" all screamed in unison
Orion was spinning furiously in the side of the stadium, while Gryph was spinning in the center. Suddenly, Leon said:
"Gryph, Arrow Speed!!!" Leon commanded
"Orion, jump!!!" Keltz commanded
Orion dodged Gryph's fast attack and suddenly Keltz said
"C'mon Keltz, time this right, Orion, Lightning Pierce!!!" Keltz said
Orion shot down like a bullet and hit Gryph right on target. Gryph was barely spinning.
"You think this is over, John!!!" Leon called
John came and launched his MF-H Gravity Perseus BD145MF and made the match 2-on-1
"Hey that's cheating!!!" the DJ said. But no one listened
Suddenly a bey flung into Gravity and knocked it out of the stadium, it was Tim.
"Hey Keltz, need a hand?" Tim said
Tim turned the tables against them, and they charged at Gryph, sending it flying to the ground, leaving a small crack on the impact
"Yes we win" Tim and Keltz said, high-fiving
"Ok folks, U.S.A advances to the Finals taking place next week, stay tuned and good evening!" The DJ said
TO BE CONTINUED
Its Zero-G VS Zero G here, as Keltz's just-evolved Shinobi Orion WA160XF fights against Leon's Archer Gryph C145S, Let's rumble!!" The DJ said
"Hmm, I wonder what my evolved partner look like in battle, perhaps this is my chance to find out!!" Keltz whispered
"Alright bladers, ready your launcher and beys, 3!!" the DJ said
"2" the crowd said
"1" Keltz and Leon said
"GO SHOOOT!!!" all screamed in unison
Orion was spinning furiously in the side of the stadium, while Gryph was spinning in the center. Suddenly, Leon said:
"Gryph, Arrow Speed!!!" Leon commanded
"Orion, jump!!!" Keltz commanded
Orion dodged Gryph's fast attack and suddenly Keltz said
"C'mon Keltz, time this right, Orion, Lightning Pierce!!!" Keltz said
Orion shot down like a bullet and hit Gryph right on target. Gryph was barely spinning.
"You think this is over, John!!!" Leon called
John came and launched his MF-H Gravity Perseus BD145MF and made the match 2-on-1
"Hey that's cheating!!!" the DJ said. But no one listened
Suddenly a bey flung into Gravity and knocked it out of the stadium, it was Tim.
"Hey Keltz, need a hand?" Tim said
Tim turned the tables against them, and they charged at Gryph, sending it flying to the ground, leaving a small crack on the impact
"Yes we win" Tim and Keltz said, high-fiving
"Ok folks, U.S.A advances to the Finals taking place next week, stay tuned and good evening!" The DJ said
TO BE CONTINUED
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As the trio drived home, Daniel noticed Keltz's upset face and asked:
"You look down lately, how 'bout a trip to Vincent Hill? the nice breeze should calm you down." Daniel suggested
They headed to Vincent Hill
"Sure is nice up here, thanks Dan." Keltz said
"You're very welcome..." Daniel replied
Suddenly a man with terrifying eyes approached them
"You, boy in the blue shirt, come here" the man said
"Why do you want Keltz sir?" Tim asked
"Don't make me hurt you, now lend me the kid or I'll have to do this the hard way.." The man gruffed
"Try and go pass me first.!!!" Daniel defended
"SHUT UP YOU FOOL, PHOENIIIIC!!!!!!" The man shouted
Pirates Phoenic pushed Dan to the edge of the cliff
"NO, Dan!!" Keltz said
As he helped Dan get up, Keltz suddenly screamed:
"AAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!"
It turned out that the man was actually Ore, and he was stealing his Lightning Orb of All Bey Power. Just after that, Keltz collapsed and fell from the hill, 20 feet and landed head-on first, as the dust cleared, his friends rushed him
"You look down lately, how 'bout a trip to Vincent Hill? the nice breeze should calm you down." Daniel suggested
They headed to Vincent Hill
"Sure is nice up here, thanks Dan." Keltz said
"You're very welcome..." Daniel replied
Suddenly a man with terrifying eyes approached them
"You, boy in the blue shirt, come here" the man said
"Why do you want Keltz sir?" Tim asked
"Don't make me hurt you, now lend me the kid or I'll have to do this the hard way.." The man gruffed
"Try and go pass me first.!!!" Daniel defended
"SHUT UP YOU FOOL, PHOENIIIIC!!!!!!" The man shouted
Pirates Phoenic pushed Dan to the edge of the cliff
"NO, Dan!!" Keltz said
As he helped Dan get up, Keltz suddenly screamed:
"AAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!"
It turned out that the man was actually Ore, and he was stealing his Lightning Orb of All Bey Power. Just after that, Keltz collapsed and fell from the hill, 20 feet and landed head-on first, as the dust cleared, his friends rushed him
Big time credits to kaihiwatatari5673 who made this sig for me.
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). I'll take the Zero-G request.