Beyblade Comic

Poll: What should the age of the stinkin' rich guy be

Little Boy
37.93%
11
Teenage Boy
31.03%
9
Grown Man
10.34%
3
Elderly Man
20.69%
6
Total: 100% 29 vote(s)
This is a Beyblade Sprite Comic I made. I am good at art but a lazy spriter, so I just used pokemon sprites.

Here it is:
Beyblade Comic

Basically, the story revolves around two brothers who live in an abandoned community center a few miles away from Skakel City. A city owned by a stinking rich blader who makes terrible laws. He even demanded that those who do not join his blading team shall go to jail or work for him as a bey fixer for life. The brothers, Roi and Pers run off far, far away to the location of their current residence.

It is later recognised that The stinking rich guy himself is making a bey of ultimate power.
He wants a bey with all the elements. He wants it to have all the attributes at 100% and no faulties. But in order to creat this bey, he needs an unlimited source of energy, he destroyed many machines and buildings to creat energy, and even absorbed energy from the sun... but when all else fails, he turns to the human race!
(yeah, basically that means he's gonna absorb energy out of humans to create his ultimate bey.)

Please comment.
it does'nt work for me
Ooh nice pokemon sprites and good story
I like this, how could you not JordanX? O-o
And one thing, how does he see through the camera, if the beyblades spinning? Dizzy @_@.
lol kidding.
(Oct. 29, 2010  12:14 AM)Pyro Wrote: I like this, how could you not JordanX? O-o
And one thing, how does he see through the camera, if the beyblades spinning? Dizzy @_@.
lol kidding.

We never had this conversation. [never thought about that...]
he he, jugglers sprites from pokemon, nice work. like to see what happens next.
Awsome comic, can't wait for more.
Nice reference, connecting your stories like that. You are a talented artist.
it would be funny if you did a battle scene from pokemon as well to start a match.

Blader Roi would like to battle! -cue music-
guys amking bayblade comice post it lada bey oops i mean bye
(Nov. 17, 2010  5:26 AM)BladerX225170 Wrote: guys amking bayblade comice post it lada bey oops i mean bye

I think this person was typing a silly version of:
Guys, I'm making a beyblade comic. I'll post it later. Bey, Oops, I mean bye!