Beyblade Burst Zero

can you accept my character?
name: Satoshi kimura (also known as Ten)
beyblade: Shivering Poltergeist
(Mar. 25, 2019  7:36 AM)Fusion core Wrote:
(Mar. 25, 2019  7:17 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Thanks! I’m not too sure how I feel about someone wanting to kill Gingka and Paris, especially since this is in the Burst Universe, where we try to keep things a little friendly. Perhaps we could compromise and negotiate on things?
Yes ! I give you the full freedom to do things as you want . You are the writer and the characters are in your hands . You can make modifications as you want . I just want the basic appearance , the basic personality , the name and the the basic looks to be the same . And i want his bey to be super strong and an attack type of fire and lightning element . The rest is upon you ! You are free to make your descisions . I ought to respect you for accepting my character request . I have full faith in you that you can understand and design my character even better than me and can make my character come alive . The fate of the characters MUST be in the writers hands . Thank you very much @[Sir Saitama] and best of luck for your upcoming episodes . Joyful_3

Thanks for being so mature about this! I’ll add your character in later on, then! Thanks so much for the support, I really appreciate it.
(Mar. 25, 2019  7:36 AM)Fusion core Wrote:
(Mar. 25, 2019  7:17 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Thanks! I’m not too sure how I feel about someone wanting to kill Gingka and Paris, especially since this is in the Burst Universe, where we try to keep things a little friendly. Perhaps we could compromise and negotiate on things?
Yes ! I give you the full freedom to do things as you want . You are the writer and the characters are in your hands . You can make modifications as you want . I just want the basic appearance , the basic personality , the name and the the basic looks to be the same . And i want his bey to be super strong and an attack type of fire and lightning element . The rest is upon you ! You are free to make your descisions . I ought to respect you for accepting my character request . I have full faith in you that you can understand and design my character even better than me and can make my character come alive . The fate of the characters MUST be in the writers hands . Thank you very much Sir Saitama and best of luck for your upcoming episodes . Joyful_3

Im crying of happiness because more people like you should definitely exist. Kudos for being so mature and friendly towards the writer clap clap
(Mar. 26, 2019  3:10 AM)Chessmaster Chi Wrote: Great story! Thanks for sharing!

Thanks! I really appreciate the support! The next chapter will be coming out soon!
can you still accept characters?
(Mar. 28, 2019  9:32 PM)klarac Wrote: Keep writing dont give up!

Thanks! I haven’t given up though, just planning out the next few chapters and the overall direction of this story.

Chapter 7 - The BeyFestival! The Z5 Awaken!

(Mar. 28, 2019  5:27 AM)Creeperalpha Wrote: can you still accept characters?

Yeah, I still accept characters. I’ll try to add your idea when I can.
Chapter 8 - Invincibility! Smash Revenge!

Meet Smash Revenge!” Roan grinned.
With many ‘oohs’ and ‘aahs’ from the crowd, Paris held out Pegasus.

“This is Immortal Pegasus!” Paris introduced.
Roan quickly studied the attack type.
“You’ve got an interesting bey,” he complimented. “Can it take me down?”

Paris hoped so. He fixed his posture and prepared for battle.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”

Flash Trident, in its taller mode, came crashing down onto Revenge.
“Take it down now Trident! Final Flash Sting!” Toko exclaimed.

Revenge’s incredible speed assisted it in dodging Trident’s attack.
“No!” Toko was taken by surprise as he and Paris exchanged looks.

“All yours Paris!” Toko yelled. “Go!”
Flash Trident extended its height, bouncing into the air as it grabbed onto Immortal Pegasus.

Pegasus was thrown into the air at an amazing speed.
“Thanks,” Paris smiled. “Now, Immortal Starblast Attack!”
Pegasus shot down, and landed onto Revenge’s layer.

“Impressive!” Roan said. “But I’m not in the Z5 for nothing!”
Smash Revenge tilted forward and shot, entering the middle of the stadium.

Eventually, Immortal Pegasus was thrown off, bouncing away.
“Now it’s my turn!” Taiki chuckled. “Adamantine Blade!”

Adamantine Theseus stabbed through Revenge, knocking it away. However, it made a solid recovery.
“All that for nothing?” Taiki gasped. “Well! Take on my Adamantine Barrage Fury!”

Theseus glowed, as it rushed through Revenge, breaking the sound barrier. Smash Revenge was unharmed.
“Revenge! Attack!” Roan called.

Smash Revenge dodged Theseus’ impending attack and pierced through it, bursting it.
“Agh! No way!” Taiki said in disbelief.

Revenge shifted its trajectory, going adjacent to Trident.
“It’s my time to shine! Flash Counter!”

Trident’s avatar appeared, a spearman wielding a trident.
“Go! Trident!” Toko bellowed.

Like a bullet, the stamina type struck through Revenge, knocking it into the wall.
“Yes!” Toko celebrated.
Smash Revenge rebounded off of the wall, driving itself into Trident.
“Smash Counter!” Roan shouted.

Trident immediately burst.
“No!” Toko fell to the floor.
Cho-Z Achilles lit up.
“Super Z Slash!” Aiga roared.

With a single flick, Smash Revenge was thrown into the air.
Roan was shocked.
“I certainly wasn’t expecting this! Now Revenge! Super Revenge Slash!”

Revenge made its way down to Achilles and retracted the burst stoppers. And then...
Cho-Z Achilles skyrocketed into the air and burst.
“I-Impossible!” Aiga widened his eyes.

Ultra Centurion jolted around the stadium.
“Ultra Revival!” Charles commanded. It shot with incredible speed, and drilled into Revenge’s layer.

Smash Revenge effortlessly tossed Centurion away, slamming it into the wall.
“Burst Strike!” Charles exclaimed once more. 

Ultra Centurion left a vibrant trail of red behind as it made its way into Revenge.
“Burst him!” Roan called out.

And Smash Revenge did so. Ultra Centurion rolled back and hit the wall of the stadium, bursting upon impact.

The four fallen bladers glanced at Paris.
“Right! Supernova Shoot!” Paris said confidently. Immortal Pegasus pummeled through Revenge as if barely budged.

“It’s not moving!” Aiga pointed out.
Pegasus managed to capture Revenge in the center of the stadium.
“Immortal Stormbringer!” Paris exclaimed.

As dust and light expelled from the stadium, a ring formed around the bey.

The ring attempted to compress Revenge, however it was obvious that was a difficult task. 
“Why isn’t it moving?” Paris grunted.
Toko pulled out his tablet. “It’s because of Revenge’s heavy weight!”

Paris yelled, “Go now, Pegasus! Take him down!” 
Smash Revenge and Immortal Pegasus were swept into the air in unison.
“It’s going to be a ring out finish,” Charles observed.
“For who?” Taiki panicked.

Pegasus landed at Paris’ feet first. Smash Revenge landed back into the stadium, spinning unbalanced.

“You’re really strong,” Paris smiled as he picked up Pegasus.
“Wait! Where are you going?” Roan asked.
“You won fair and square,” Paris stated the obvious.
Roan laughed for quite a while. “Only one point. First to two wins. Plus, I want to battle you again.”

Aiga stepped in. “I’ll ref!”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Pegasus’ five feathers lit up in unison.
“Supernova Shoot!” Paris commanded, as Immortal Pegasus shot through Smash Revenge.

Before Pegasus had room for seconds, Revenge’s layer lit up.
“Super Revenge Slash!” Roan exclaimed.

Within three seconds, Immortal Pegasus exploded into three parts.
Paris was left speechless.
“Good job!” He complimented Roan.
“You too. I look forward to battling you in the finals.”

Paris reached for Immortal Pegasus and assembled the bey together.
“You can count on it!” He smiled cheerfully.

The BeyClub left the BeyFestival.
“What a blast!” Paris said.
“That was pretty fun,” Taiki added. “Apart from losing,” Aiga folded his arms.

“Hey!” Paris said sternly. “It doesn’t matter whether you win or lose! Even though I lost against Roan, I had fun!”

Aiga giggled. “Oops, forgot. Guess the teacher can learn from the students.”

A few hours later, after the five parted ways, Paris turned on his favorite channel.
“And Daniel completes the 100 blader challenge!” Hanami announced. “Anything you’d like to say?”

Daniel grinned intimidatingly.
“I do. Paris Hagane, if you’re out there, you stand no chance at defeating me!”
(Mar. 29, 2019  9:20 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote:
(Mar. 28, 2019  9:32 PM)klarac Wrote: Keep writing dont give up!

Thanks! I haven’t given up though, just planning out the next few chapters and the overall direction of this story.

Chapter 7 - The BeyFestival! The Z5 Awaken!

(Mar. 28, 2019  5:27 AM)Creeperalpha Wrote: can you still accept characters?

Yeah, I still accept characters. I’ll try to add your idea when I can.

Amazing! I think you’ve done the best with using Roan so far! Wink

(Mar. 30, 2019  10:49 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote:
Chapter 8 - Invincibility! Smash Revenge!

Meet Smash Revenge!” Roan grinned.
With many ‘oohs’ and ‘aahs’ from the crowd, Paris held out Pegasus.

“This is Immortal Pegasus!” Paris introduced.
Roan quickly studied the attack type.
“You’ve got an interesting bey,” he complimented. “Can it take me down?”

Paris hoped so. He fixed his posture and prepared for battle.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”

Flash Trident, in its taller mode, came crashing down onto Revenge.
“Take it down now Trident! Final Flash Sting!” Toko exclaimed.

Revenge’s incredible speed assisted it in dodging Trident’s attack.
“No!” Toko was taken by surprise as he and Paris exchanged looks.

“All yours Paris!” Toko yelled. “Go!”
Flash Trident extended its height, bouncing into the air as it grabbed onto Immortal Pegasus.

Pegasus was thrown into the air at an amazing speed.
“Thanks,” Paris smiled. “Now, Immortal Starblast Attack!”
Pegasus shot down, and landed onto Revenge’s layer.

“Impressive!” Roan said. “But I’m not in the Z5 for nothing!”
Smash Revenge tilted forward and shot, entering the middle of the stadium.

Eventually, Immortal Pegasus was thrown off, bouncing away.
“Now it’s my turn!” Taiki chuckled. “Adamantine Blade!”

Adamantine Theseus stabbed through Revenge, knocking it away. However, it made a solid recovery.
“All that for nothing?” Taiki gasped. “Well! Take on my Adamantine Barrage Fury!”

Theseus glowed, as it rushed through Revenge, breaking the sound barrier. Smash Revenge was unharmed.
“Revenge! Attack!” Roan called.

Smash Revenge dodged Theseus’ impending attack and pierced through it, bursting it.
“Agh! No way!” Taiki said in disbelief.

Revenge shifted its trajectory, going adjacent to Trident.
“It’s my time to shine! Flash Counter!”

Trident’s avatar appeared, a spearman wielding a trident.
“Go! Trident!” Toko bellowed.

Like a bullet, the stamina type struck through Revenge, knocking it into the wall.
“Yes!” Toko celebrated.
Smash Revenge rebounded off of the wall, driving itself into Trident.
“Smash Counter!” Roan shouted.

Trident immediately burst.
“No!” Toko fell to the floor.
Cho-Z Achilles lit up.
“Super Z Slash!” Aiga roared.

With a single flick, Smash Revenge was thrown into the air.
Roan was shocked.
“I certainly wasn’t expecting this! Now Revenge! Super Revenge Slash!”

Revenge made its way down to Achilles and retracted the burst stoppers. And then...
Cho-Z Achilles skyrocketed into the air and burst.
“I-Impossible!” Aiga widened his eyes.

Ultra Centurion jolted around the stadium.
“Ultra Revival!” Charles commanded. It shot with incredible speed, and drilled into Revenge’s layer.

Smash Revenge effortlessly tossed Centurion away, slamming it into the wall.
“Burst Strike!” Charles exclaimed once more. 

Ultra Centurion left a vibrant trail of red behind as it made its way into Revenge.
“Burst him!” Roan called out.

And Smash Revenge did so. Ultra Centurion rolled back and hit the wall of the stadium, bursting upon impact.

The four fallen bladers glanced at Paris.
“Right! Supernova Shoot!” Paris said confidently. Immortal Pegasus pummeled through Revenge as if barely budged.

“It’s not moving!” Aiga pointed out.
Pegasus managed to capture Revenge in the center of the stadium.
“Immortal Stormbringer!” Paris exclaimed.

As dust and light expelled from the stadium, a ring formed around the bey.

The ring attempted to compress Revenge, however it was obvious that was a difficult task. 
“Why isn’t it moving?” Paris grunted.
Toko pulled out his tablet. “It’s because of Revenge’s heavy weight!”

Paris yelled, “Go now, Pegasus! Take him down!” 
Smash Revenge and Immortal Pegasus were swept into the air in unison.
“It’s going to be a ring out finish,” Charles observed.
“For who?” Taiki panicked.

Pegasus landed at Paris’ feet first. Smash Revenge landed back into the stadium, spinning unbalanced.

“You’re really strong,” Paris smiled as he picked up Pegasus.
“Wait! Where are you going?” Roan asked.
“You won fair and square,” Paris stated the obvious.
Roan laughed for quite a while. “Only one point. First to two wins. Plus, I want to battle you again.”

Aiga stepped in. “I’ll ref!”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Pegasus’ five feathers lit up in unison.
“Supernova Shoot!” Paris commanded, as Immortal Pegasus shot through Smash Revenge.

Before Pegasus had room for seconds, Revenge’s layer lit up.
“Super Revenge Slash!” Roan exclaimed.

Within three seconds, Immortal Pegasus exploded into three parts.
Paris was left speechless.
“Good job!” He complimented Roan.
“You too. I look forward to battling you in the finals.”

Paris reached for Immortal Pegasus and assembled the bey together.
“You can count on it!” He smiled cheerfully.

The BeyClub left the BeyFestival.
“What a blast!” Paris said.
“That was pretty fun,” Taiki added. “Apart from losing,” Aiga folded his arms.

“Hey!” Paris said sternly. “It doesn’t matter whether you win or lose! Even though I lost against Roan, I had fun!”

Aiga giggled. “Oops, forgot. Guess the teacher can learn from the students.”

A few hours later, after the five parted ways, Paris turned on his favorite channel.
“And Daniel completes the 100 blader challenge!” Hanami announced. “Anything you’d like to say?”

Daniel grinned intimidatingly.
“I do. Paris Hagane, if you’re out there, you stand no chance at defeating me!”

Great! I liked the Battle Royale!
(Mar. 31, 2019  2:14 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Mar. 29, 2019  9:20 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Thanks! I haven’t given up though, just planning out the next few chapters and the overall direction of this story.

Chapter 7 - The BeyFestival! The Z5 Awaken!


Yeah, I still accept characters. I’ll try to add your idea when I can.

Amazing! I think you’ve done the best with using Roan so far! ;)

(Mar. 30, 2019  10:49 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 8 - Invincibility! Smash Revenge!

Great! I liked the Battle Royale!

(Mar. 31, 2019  2:14 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Mar. 29, 2019  9:20 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Thanks! I haven’t given up though, just planning out the next few chapters and the overall direction of this story.

Chapter 7 - The BeyFestival! The Z5 Awaken!


Yeah, I still accept characters. I’ll try to add your idea when I can.

Amazing! I think you’ve done the best with using Roan so far! ;)

(Mar. 30, 2019  10:49 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 8 - Invincibility! Smash Revenge!

Great! I liked the Battle Royale!
Thanks! I really appreciate the support! :)
Will you accept my chartars amber Duo with Duo Artemis and al duo with Duo apollos
Chapter 8 - Demolition! Havoc Daemon!
OH NO PEGASUS
Chapter 9 - Going All Out! Immortal Slash!
Chapter 10 - The Winner’s Coronation! Pegasus vs Daemon!
(Apr. 04, 2019  10:29 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 10 - The Winner’s Coronation! Pegasus vs Daemon!
I like how the battle was like Valt VS Free in BEYBLADE Burst God/Evolution! Smile
(Apr. 05, 2019  12:38 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Apr. 04, 2019  10:29 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 10 - The Winner’s Coronation! Pegasus vs Daemon!
I like how the battle was like Valt VS Free in BEYBLADE Burst God/Evolution! Smile

Thanks so much! It really was a great episode. Smile
Chapter 11 - Burn! Torch Ragnaruk!


Sorry for the late post guys! I’m wondering if anybody would like a list of beys?
Sure, and it’s not late if you look at my chapter schedule
OH GODS

im so happy that Ryota appeared. Wished he was in Turbo instead of Ranjiro
Ryota! YAY! Also sure!
Character Name: Hiryu Roku (Fun Fact: Roku means Six in Japanese :p )

HIryu is a smart, mysterious and powerful blader who uses the left-spinning Balance-Type bey Hex Hydra 10Expand Destroy'. A bey with 6 blades that can either go out for Attack Mode, or go in for Defense/Stamina Mode.

Bey: Hex Hydra 10Expand Destroy' (Balance-Type)

Moves:
Hexa Blast - Hydra maintains the center as a hexagon shape is created around Hydra but mainly the opponent bey. If the opponent bey comes in contact with the hexagon walls, it will be pushed around. At the same time, the walls of the hexagon will close in until it reaches near Hex Hydra where the opponent bey is attacked and causing it to burst. (This move is basically a mix of Dead Hades' Dead Gravity as the wall is created around, and Flame Libra's Inferno Blast since the bey is forced closer to Hydra.

Hex Destruction - Hydra's Blades go in Attack Mode as Hydra throws a barrage of attacks at the opponent, also because of the Destroy' Driver could cause the opponent's bey to destabilize.

Hex Guard - Hydra's Blades go in Defense/Stamina Mode as it defends itself from coming attacks and makes sure it stays up.

Hex Drive - normally used in Defense/Stamina Mode, Hydra glides around the stadium gaining more/maintaining Stamina.

pls add me
(Apr. 09, 2019  1:38 AM)MrBlade Wrote: Character Name: Hiryu Roku (Fun Fact: Roku means Six in Japanese :p )

HIryu is a smart, mysterious and powerful blader who uses the left-spinning Balance-Type bey Hex Hydra 10Expand Destroy'. A bey with 6 blades that can either go out for Attack Mode, or go in for Defense/Stamina Mode.

Bey: Hex Hydra 10Expand Destroy' (Balance-Type)

Moves:
Hexa Blast - Hydra maintains the center as a hexagon shape is created around Hydra but mainly the opponent bey. If the opponent bey comes in contact with the hexagon walls, it will be pushed around. At the same time, the walls of the hexagon will close in until it reaches near Hex Hydra where the opponent bey is attacked and causing it to burst. (This move is basically a mix of Dead Hades' Dead Gravity as the wall is created around, and Flame Libra's Inferno Blast since the bey is forced closer to Hydra.

Hex Destruction - Hydra's Blades go in Attack Mode as Hydra throws a barrage of attacks at the opponent, also because of the Destroy' Driver could cause the opponent's bey to destabilize.

Hex Guard - Hydra's Blades go in Defense/Stamina Mode as it defends itself from coming attacks and makes sure it stays up.

Hex Drive - normally used in Defense/Stamina Mode, Hydra glides around the stadium gaining more/maintaining Stamina.

pls add me

Alright, I’ll add you into the story. :SmileWelcome aboard!

List of Beys: