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Beyblade Burst Spirit (Character Contest Over, Winners Announced)

Jul. 13, 2020  9:04 PM
 
Thanks for the comments everyone! When I start on this, I’ll be rewriting the first few chapters! The plot will be the same, just gonna revise it. Speaking of which, would y’all prefer a line space, or line indent for new paragraphs?

Example 1:
“Hi”

“Hello”

Example 2:
“Hi”
       “Hello”
Jul. 14, 2020  5:00 PM
 
indent! (adding random characters so I can send the message)
Jul. 14, 2020  7:57 PM
 
(Jul. 14, 2020  5:00 PM)N12N12 Wrote: indent! (adding random characters so I can send the message)

Mostly likely he won't accept character request
Jul. 14, 2020  8:07 PM
 
(Jul. 14, 2020  7:57 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Jul. 14, 2020  5:00 PM)N12N12 Wrote: indent! (adding random characters so I can send the message)

Mostly likely he won't accept character request

Most likely you didn’t read their post. He said he was adding random characters so that he could post, as the minimum amount of characters in a post is ten.
Jul. 15, 2020  12:53 AM
 
(Jul. 14, 2020  8:07 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Jul. 14, 2020  7:57 PM)kai edits Wrote: Mostly likely he won't accept character request

Most likely you didn’t read their post. He said he was adding random characters so that he could post, as the minimum amount of characters in a post is ten.

Nah I request a character by the way it's not shun kurenai
Jul. 15, 2020  12:57 AM
 
(Jul. 15, 2020  12:53 AM)kai edits Wrote:
(Jul. 14, 2020  8:07 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Most likely you didn’t read their post. He said he was adding random characters so that he could post, as the minimum amount of characters in a post is ten.

Nah I request a character by the way it's not shun kurenai

Well then who?
Jul. 15, 2020  1:00 AM
 
(Jul. 15, 2020  12:57 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Jul. 15, 2020  12:53 AM)kai edits Wrote: Nah I request a character by the way it's not shun kurenai

Well then who?

Akira kurenai
Jul. 15, 2020  1:01 AM
 
(Jul. 15, 2020  1:00 AM)kai edits Wrote:
(Jul. 15, 2020  12:57 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Well then who?

Akira kurenai
Isn’t that just Shun, but a different name? If not, please post details.
Jul. 15, 2020  1:02 AM
 
(Jul. 15, 2020  1:01 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Jul. 15, 2020  1:00 AM)kai edits Wrote: Akira kurenai
Isn’t that just Shun, but a different name? If not, please post details.

Nope the daughter of shun kurenai. Akira is completely different from shun
Jul. 15, 2020  1:04 AM
 
(Jul. 15, 2020  1:02 AM)kai edits Wrote:
(Jul. 15, 2020  1:01 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Isn’t that just Shun, but a different name? If not, please post details.

Nope the daughter of shun kurenai. Akira is completely different from shun

Well, that doesn’t tell me much. Character description?
Jul. 15, 2020  1:04 AM
 
(Jul. 15, 2020  1:04 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Jul. 15, 2020  1:02 AM)kai edits Wrote: Nope the daughter of shun kurenai. Akira is completely different from shun

Well, that doesn’t tell me much. Character description?

Wait, ur accepting characters?
Jul. 15, 2020  1:14 AM
 
(Jul. 15, 2020  1:04 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Jul. 15, 2020  1:04 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Well, that doesn’t tell me much. Character description?

Wait, ur accepting characters?

Yes sir.
Jul. 15, 2020  1:17 AM
 
(Jul. 15, 2020  1:04 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Jul. 15, 2020  1:02 AM)kai edits Wrote: Nope the daughter of shun kurenai. Akira is completely different from shun

Well, that doesn’t tell me much. Character description?

Akira kurenai
Gender female
Sex bisexual
Bey helios maiden
Personally just like shun kurenai but more nicer and hates valt,shu
Backstory after shun dies. Shun beyblade helios maiden was given to akira.(there is more but it won't fit in this fanfic)
Special moves
Maiden big bang
Maiden counter
Blazing turbo
Blazing inferno
True blazing rush
Helios slam
Blazing big bang
Launch techniques
Blazing shoot 
Blazing boost
Combo helios maiden burn inferno
Burn is a better version of jerk
Inferno is ultimate reboot but better it has more attack power and has more led.
Akira kurenai brother is free
Akira step brother is phi,delta
Akira has a scar on her left eye it's a scar similar like shu but it's a sword.
Akira has trouble controlling helios maiden.
Akira loves to destroy beys and loves to hang out with free.
I spend a lot of time on this.
You can put her in your fanfics with my permission
Jul. 17, 2020  3:01 AM
 
Would y’all prefer indents, or line spaces? I wanna make it easier for the readers lol.
Jul. 17, 2020  3:02 AM
 
(Jul. 17, 2020  3:01 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Would y’all prefer indents, or line spaces? I wanna make it easier for the readers lol.

Space line
Jul. 17, 2020  3:02 AM
 
(Jul. 17, 2020  3:02 AM)kai edits Wrote:
(Jul. 17, 2020  3:01 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Would y’all prefer indents, or line spaces? I wanna make it easier for the readers lol.

Space line
Alright. Two votes so far.
Jul. 17, 2020  5:55 AM
 
(Jul. 17, 2020  3:02 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Jul. 17, 2020  3:02 AM)kai edits Wrote: Space line
Alright. Two votes so far.

I think I'm gonna have to go with indents. it seems easier, but we'll see.
Jul. 17, 2020  5:55 AM
 
line space
easier for me
Jul. 17, 2020  5:47 PM
 
Alright. Four votes, and it’s tied lmao
Jul. 17, 2020  5:51 PM
 
(Jul. 17, 2020  5:47 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Alright. Four votes, and it’s tied lmao

Alright, I'll flip a coin from google

heads: line space

tails: indent

Spoiler (Click to View)
Jul. 17, 2020  5:52 PM
 
(Jul. 17, 2020  5:51 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Jul. 17, 2020  5:47 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Alright. Four votes, and it’s tied lmao

Alright, I'll flip a coin from google

heads: line space

tails: indent

Spoiler (Click to View)
Lmao should I even count this?
Jul. 17, 2020  5:53 PM
 
(Jul. 17, 2020  5:52 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Jul. 17, 2020  5:51 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Alright, I'll flip a coin from google

heads: line space

tails: indent

Spoiler (Click to View)
Lmao should I even count this?

Google is a.i it shouldn't count
Jul. 17, 2020  5:54 PM
 
(Jul. 17, 2020  5:52 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Jul. 17, 2020  5:51 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Alright, I'll flip a coin from google

heads: line space

tails: indent

Spoiler (Click to View)
Lmao should I even count this?

I am not ai, it should count.

Edit: I (NOT GOOGLE) officially vote for indent.
Jul. 17, 2020  5:55 PM
 
(Jul. 17, 2020  5:54 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Jul. 17, 2020  5:52 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Lmao should I even count this?

I am not ai, it should count.

Edit: I (NOT GOOGLE) officially vote for indent.

Okay
Jul. 17, 2020  5:55 PM
 
(Jul. 17, 2020  5:55 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Jul. 17, 2020  5:54 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: I am not ai, it should count.

Edit: I (NOT GOOGLE) officially vote for indent.

Okay

M'kay.
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