Beyblade Burst Aura (Allowing Character And Beyblade Requests)
Poll: Should I Reveal All The Characters And Beys
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| Yes |
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| Total: | 100% | 25 vote(s) |
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yeah? i guess? just cuz of youTHE DRAGON OF LIGHT
LIKE IF YOU WANT A SPOILER WHAT IT IS
the dragon of light
no one owns it and legends say it was fighting the dragon of dark for 50,000 years
it can become and bey and battle and destroy whoever tresspasses its cave
and the dragon of dark will break the tresspasser sbey and soul and he the tresspasser will fall into eternal darkness who ever tresspasses its cave
etc i dont want to spoil everything
EarthHelios
TakaraTheLord
no one owns it and legends say it was fighting the dragon of dark for 50,000 years
it can become and bey and battle and destroy whoever tresspasses its cave
and the dragon of dark will break the tresspasser sbey and soul and he the tresspasser will fall into eternal darkness who ever tresspasses its cave
etc i dont want to spoil everything
EarthHelios
TakaraTheLord
(Nov. 19, 2020 5:01 PM)BladerUmarWBO Wrote: the dragon of light
no one owns it and legends say it was fighting the dragon of dark for 50,000 years
it can become and bey and battle and destroy whoever tresspasses its cave
and the dragon of dark will break the tresspasser sbey and soul and he the tresspasser will fall into eternal darkness who ever tresspasses its cave
etc i dont want to spoil everything
EarthHelios
TakaraTheLord
noice
(Nov. 19, 2020 5:01 PM)BladerUmarWBO Wrote: the dragon of light
no one owns it and legends say it was fighting the dragon of dark for 50,000 years
it can become and bey and battle and destroy whoever tresspasses its cave
and the dragon of dark will break the tresspasser sbey and soul and he the tresspasser will fall into eternal darkness who ever tresspasses its cave
etc i dont want to spoil everything
EarthHelios
TakaraTheLord
Can I say that your writing is so terrible that I can barely understand anything?
(Nov. 19, 2020 5:08 PM)TakaraTheLord Wrote:(Nov. 19, 2020 5:01 PM)BladerUmarWBO Wrote: the dragon of light
no one owns it and legends say it was fighting the dragon of dark for 50,000 years
it can become and bey and battle and destroy whoever tresspasses its cave
and the dragon of dark will break the tresspasser sbey and soul and he the tresspasser will fall into eternal darkness who ever tresspasses its cave
etc i dont want to spoil everything
EarthHelios
TakaraTheLord
Can I say that your writing is so terrible that I can barely understand anything?
oof harsh
(Nov. 19, 2020 5:08 PM)TakaraTheLord Wrote:yup you can but the writing doesnt matter more than the stories and curently my stories are more interesting(Nov. 19, 2020 5:01 PM)BladerUmarWBO Wrote: the dragon of light
no one owns it and legends say it was fighting the dragon of dark for 50,000 years
it can become and bey and battle and destroy whoever tresspasses its cave
and the dragon of dark will break the tresspasser sbey and soul and he the tresspasser will fall into eternal darkness who ever tresspasses its cave
etc i dont want to spoil everything
EarthHelios
TakaraTheLord
Can I say that your writing is so terrible that I can barely understand anything?
even EarthHelios thinks that
When I do my fanfic I dont write it because the emotions dont run deep in my heart. So instead its like a predict thingy
No offense but you can't keep claiming you have one of the best fanfics out there. Nobody does that. Its pretty plot poor and characterization poor. Interesting Characters matter even more then an Interesting plot.
(Nov. 19, 2020 6:28 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: No offense but you can't keep claiming you have one of the best fanfics out there. Nobody does that. Its pretty plot poor and characterization poor. Interesting Characters matter even more then an Interesting plot.
i have intresting character 6 custom characters
(Nov. 19, 2020 6:30 PM)BladerUmarWBO Wrote:(Nov. 19, 2020 6:28 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: No offense but you can't keep claiming you have one of the best fanfics out there. Nobody does that. Its pretty plot poor and characterization poor. Interesting Characters matter even more then an Interesting plot.
i have intresting character 6 custom characters
Being an O.C. doesn't equal being interesting. Compared to other protagonists they don't stand out. Every protagonist in every beyblade story has been I LOVE BEYBLADE DADADADADA. Gingka and Aiga are different as they are both Literally beyblade saitama. The point is your protagonists need to be different. Don't make'em beytalk 24/7.
In my opinion thats where most fanfics fail. So please try having character development.
Episode 5: Dragonis VS Dragon!
Kei: Dante get up!
Dante: What... Zzz....
Kei: Its time for breakfast
Dante: Can I Eat Later..
Kei: Fine I'll Go!
Dante: Wait!!
Kei: You're up finally!
Kei and Dante go to the cafeteria
Kei: I'm eating uh churros!
Dante: I'm eating everything
Fubuki: Time for team rankings!
Both: Right when we start eating
Fubuki: The Beigoma Academy Solo Rankings (bp usally means bey points but here bp means beigoma points)
1. Fubuki Sumiye 5908 BP
2. Suoh Genji 5907 BP
3. Toko Aoi 5700 BP
4. Kei Asaki 23 BP
5. Dante Asaki 21
Kei: My ranking is so low!
Dante: Mine too!
Fubuki: Then do battles
Dante: Kei lets do 1 battle and then i'm going to sleep
Kei: Yes!
Both: 3 2 1 Go Shoot!
Kei: Dragonis! Zone Shoot!
Dante: Counter!!
Both beys clash
Kei: AHHHHHHH!
Dante: Dragon!
Dragon is knocked into the craters!
Dante: Speed up! Dragon! AHHHHHH!
![[Image: Aura-Dragon-Avatar.png]](https://i.postimg.cc/Kjvvng9s/Aura-Dragon-Avatar.png)
Kei: What?!
Dante: Go in for the attack!
Kei: Dragonis! Now! Aura zone shield!
![[Image: Aura-Dragonis-Avatar.png]](https://i.postimg.cc/8zNQ9dTj/Aura-Dragonis-Avatar.png)
Both beys clash!
Dragonis bursts but a second after dragon bursts!
Fubuki: Dante wins!
Dante: Yes!
Fubuki: Now Dante has 120 BP!
Kei: No!!!!1
Fubuki: You can get more Bp later Kei!
Kei: I can! Dante let's go
Fubuki: What?!
Kei: Seriously! You're sleeping!
Dante: Zzz....
Kei picks Dante up and drops him when they get to their rooms
Kei: You know you're so heavy!
Dante: Zzz...
Kei smiles
Kei: I guess i'll sleep too
End Of Episode 5
Kei: Dante get up!
Dante: What... Zzz....
Kei: Its time for breakfast
Dante: Can I Eat Later..
Kei: Fine I'll Go!
Dante: Wait!!
Kei: You're up finally!
Kei and Dante go to the cafeteria
Kei: I'm eating uh churros!
Dante: I'm eating everything
Fubuki: Time for team rankings!
Both: Right when we start eating
Fubuki: The Beigoma Academy Solo Rankings (bp usally means bey points but here bp means beigoma points)
1. Fubuki Sumiye 5908 BP
2. Suoh Genji 5907 BP
3. Toko Aoi 5700 BP
4. Kei Asaki 23 BP
5. Dante Asaki 21
Kei: My ranking is so low!
Dante: Mine too!
Fubuki: Then do battles
Dante: Kei lets do 1 battle and then i'm going to sleep
Kei: Yes!
Both: 3 2 1 Go Shoot!
Kei: Dragonis! Zone Shoot!
Dante: Counter!!
Both beys clash
Kei: AHHHHHHH!
Dante: Dragon!
Dragon is knocked into the craters!
Dante: Speed up! Dragon! AHHHHHH!
Kei: What?!
Dante: Go in for the attack!
Kei: Dragonis! Now! Aura zone shield!
Both beys clash!
Dragonis bursts but a second after dragon bursts!
Fubuki: Dante wins!
Dante: Yes!
Fubuki: Now Dante has 120 BP!
Kei: No!!!!1
Fubuki: You can get more Bp later Kei!
Kei: I can! Dante let's go
Fubuki: What?!
Kei: Seriously! You're sleeping!
Dante: Zzz....
Kei picks Dante up and drops him when they get to their rooms
Kei: You know you're so heavy!
Dante: Zzz...
Kei smiles
Kei: I guess i'll sleep too
End Of Episode 5