Beyblade Adventures!

Episode 1: Marco's Journey
Today a blader just entered the docks
Marco: Whooo man that sailor was angry right Wailine?
Then soon enough a mysterious figure apears!
Graze: Hey get out of the way!
Marco: Hey do u have a bey?
Graze: Well yea! You sayin you want to battle me?
Marco: Sure I guess?
Graze: Well lets bring it on!

To be continued...

well that was it how do you like it?
it stead of making it episodes you should make it a book, well id write a book not episodes but its up to you
Episode 2: THE BATTLE

Marco: Lets do it!

3, 2 ,1 Let it rip!

Wailine hit Graze's Pheonix with a sharp attack!

What!???? Pheonix took in the attack!

Then Pheonix stricked back harder!

Graze: Yea you destroy em Pheonix!
Marco: GO WAILINE SPECIAL MOVE! OCEAN CORE!

What!!!!! THE STADIUM FLOODED AND WAILINE WINS!

Marco: Ha That was fun!
Graze: NO!! How could i lose!!!

To be continued...

Well that was my new episode how did you like it????
Kinda lacks creativity and episodes are too short. It's good but you just said
(Nov. 27, 2010  6:03 PM)DarkBull1234 Wrote: THE STADIUM FLOODED AND WAILINE WINS!

You could at least explain a bit more and make the battles a little bit longer.
oh ok maybe i could do a bit better...
and make the episodes longer