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Beyblade Adventures! - Hero of Ooo - Oct. 14, 2010
Episode 1: Marco's Journey
Today a blader just entered the docks
Marco: Whooo man that sailor was angry right Wailine?
Then soon enough a mysterious figure apears!
Graze: Hey get out of the way!
Marco: Hey do u have a bey?
Graze: Well yea! You sayin you want to battle me?
Marco: Sure I guess?
Graze: Well lets bring it on!
To be continued...
well that was it how do you like it?
RE: Beyblade Adventures! - Night - Oct. 21, 2010
Cool.
RE: Beyblade Adventures! - earthleone234 - Oct. 21, 2010
it stead of making it episodes you should make it a book, well id write a book not episodes but its up to you
RE: Beyblade Adventures! - ArtBladerMarx - Nov. 11, 2010
Sounds like a play... I WANNA BE IN IT!!!
RE: Beyblade Adventures! - Hero of Ooo - Nov. 27, 2010
Episode 2: THE BATTLE
Marco: Lets do it!
3, 2 ,1 Let it rip!
Wailine hit Graze's Pheonix with a sharp attack!
What!???? Pheonix took in the attack!
Then Pheonix stricked back harder!
Graze: Yea you destroy em Pheonix!
Marco: GO WAILINE SPECIAL MOVE! OCEAN CORE!
What!!!!! THE STADIUM FLOODED AND WAILINE WINS!
Marco: Ha That was fun!
Graze: NO!! How could i lose!!!
To be continued...
Well that was my new episode how did you like it????
RE: Beyblade Adventures! - Night - Nov. 28, 2010
Kinda lacks creativity and episodes are too short. It's good but you just said
(Nov. 27, 2010 6:03 PM)DarkBull1234 Wrote: THE STADIUM FLOODED AND WAILINE WINS!
You could at least explain a bit more and make the battles a little bit longer.
RE: Beyblade Adventures! - Hero of Ooo - Nov. 29, 2010
oh ok maybe i could do a bit better...
and make the episodes longer