BeyBlade fanfic: Beyblade Heart's Blade

Poll: So, what dya think

Pegasis_Wink epic
14.29%
1
Andrew pretty good.
14.29%
1
meh.
42.86%
3
Smithicide
28.57%
2
Total: 100% 7 vote(s)
Hey guys whats up This is my fan-fic. I am actually working on a manga that corresponds to this story line! So enjoy
Chapter two
Chapter three (in progress)

Ha its not too bad, you should check out jinbees thread, though the episodes are in different pages, but its good! He also makes beyblade mods for the series as well.

Dual has great story writing so check them both!
Its not bad, there just needs more development, though its not bad.
(Nov. 26, 2014  9:45 AM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: Its not bad, there just needs more development, though its not bad.
thanks. If you guys see anything that isn't right like a typo or anything let me know.
Im rlly sorry about few updates. im busy with midterms coming up and stuff. Ill try really hard over christmas. I have all the ideas done, i just need to put them in pixels!
Accepting Character requests, and I MIGHT want some help writing different POVs.