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1st teaser for new series
Code name: Erupt
Stay tuned for more info
Code name: Erupt
Stay tuned for more info
Is there going to be a contest for this one like for explosion? Because I was going to enter into the Explosion contest but the threat got deleted.
(Dec. 30, 2022 5:57 PM)Li6yagami Wrote: Is there going to be a contest for this one like for explosion? Because I was going to enter into the Explosion contest but the threat got deleted.
Eventually yeah but It will probably be later in the series. Also explosion was canceled but I don’t plan on canceling this one so don’t worry. 😉 Also felt it was important to mention this but the series has only 26 episodes/chapters and will be a bit darker than most fanfics on wbo (not violent or even dark in tone (mostly) but in themes).
2nd teaser for Beyblade Burst Eruption:
New Bey
Erupt ???.Drive
Crazy ???.Twister
Level ???.Flip
Knight ???.Rush
Stay tuned for more info
3rd teaser for Beyblade Burst Eruption
System is gonna be hms like
Stay tuned for more info
3…2..1…Let it Rip!
Here’s what you should expect for my fanfics in 2023:
Beyblade Burst Eruption will be my first fanfic of 2023 and I will continue to focus on that (full reveal coming tomorrow). I hope to get 3 to 4 fanfics next year with Eruption being main focus for first part of year and later in the year another series will start. Keep in mind that plans can change.
Since this will probably be my last post of 2022
Happy New Year To Everyone!
System is gonna be hms like
Stay tuned for more info
3…2..1…Let it Rip!
Here’s what you should expect for my fanfics in 2023:
Beyblade Burst Eruption will be my first fanfic of 2023 and I will continue to focus on that (full reveal coming tomorrow). I hope to get 3 to 4 fanfics next year with Eruption being main focus for first part of year and later in the year another series will start. Keep in mind that plans can change.
Since this will probably be my last post of 2022
Happy New Year To Everyone!
Welcome to 2023!
Announcing new series!
Beyblade Burst Eruption!
Plot: A kid named Vick Demi comes from a somewhat poor family and Vick loves beyblade! But after being humiliated by his bully with his bey destroyed he meets a mysterious person who gives him a bey from a volcano and was sealed away many years for being too powerful! This bey is called Erupt Vulcan! With Vulcan in Vick’s hands a new era of Beyblade will begin!
Characters:
Vick Demi
Clara Saku
Lin Bi
Valt Aoi
Beys:
Erupt Vulcan.Drive
Crazy Corvus.Twister
Level Leviathan.Flip
Knight Valkyrie. Rush
The new system has the layer and disk combined and the layer having a lot of metal!
The first episode will come soon!
Please Stay tuned for more info!!!
3…2…1… Let It Rip!!!
And once again Happy New Year!
Announcing new series!
Beyblade Burst Eruption!
Plot: A kid named Vick Demi comes from a somewhat poor family and Vick loves beyblade! But after being humiliated by his bully with his bey destroyed he meets a mysterious person who gives him a bey from a volcano and was sealed away many years for being too powerful! This bey is called Erupt Vulcan! With Vulcan in Vick’s hands a new era of Beyblade will begin!
Characters:
Vick Demi
Clara Saku
Lin Bi
Valt Aoi
Beys:
Erupt Vulcan.Drive
Crazy Corvus.Twister
Level Leviathan.Flip
Knight Valkyrie. Rush
The new system has the layer and disk combined and the layer having a lot of metal!
The first episode will come soon!
Please Stay tuned for more info!!!
3…2…1… Let It Rip!!!
And once again Happy New Year!
In terms of the layer, will it be more similar to the way it works for Nightmare Longinus where it is just one single layer that can't be modified in anyway or say something like Sparking where you can remove the chips and go from say Rage Longinus to Rage Helios?
(Jan. 01, 2023 2:02 PM)greg8972 Wrote: In terms of the layer, will it be more similar to the way it works for Nightmare Longinus where it is just one single layer that can't be modified in anyway or say something like Sparking where you can remove the chips and go from say Rage Longinus to Rage Helios?.
Layer leaves it as non modifiable layers, because Layer is the whole upper part. Unless they accidentally named layer instead of Blade, it is like Nightmare Longinus
(Jan. 01, 2023 2:02 PM)greg8972 Wrote: In terms of the layer, will it be more similar to the way it works for Nightmare Longinus where it is just one single layer that can't be modified in anyway or say something like Sparking where you can remove the chips and go from say Rage Longinus to Rage Helios?
It will be more like nightmare Longinus.
Vick Demi character bio:
Age:13
Beyblade: Erupt Vulcan.Drive
Appearance: He wars a long sleeved red shirt and a yellow mini jacket that has a beyblade symbol on the back. He also wears black gloves. His eyes are blue with his hair being similar to Shu’s and it’s red.
Backstory: Vick comes from a somewhat poor family (not homeless but struggling) and Vick parents have been having trouble paying rent (they live in a apartment) despite this Vick always tries to keep a good attitude and look on the positive side of things. As long Vick has his family he’s happy.
The first few episode titles:
1. The Kid With A Blading Passion!
2. Burn! Erupt Vulcan!
3. Slice And Dice! Crazy Corvus!
Stay tuned for more info!
Valt Aoi Character Bio:
Age:16
Beyblade: knight Valkyrie. Rush
Appearance: Valt design for this series is basically the same as Db/Quad strike but he goes back to long sleeve (so basically just the sparking design).
Story: Valt is known as the legend of legend and for good reason to! He with his partner Ultimate Valkyrie are practically unstoppable but with the rise of the Eruption system something enlightens in Valt’s heart that leads him to evolve Valkyrie to Knight Valkyrie! Now with the new generation here Valt will have to keep his title as the strongest legend!
Clara Saku Character bio:
Age:12
Gender is female
Beyblade: Crazy Corvus. Twister
Backstory: She has always been a quiet person with not much friends but she loves beyblade and her goal is to one day beat Valt! After being inspired by the eruption system she makes her own bey Crazy Corvus!
Appearance: She wears a long sleeved light blue shirt and wears a aqua green jacket that has the beyblade logo on back.
Lin Bi character bio:
Beyblade: Level Leviathan.Flip
Backstory: Comes from a rich family who believes anyone poor is useless and worthless and he is included. Lin loves beyblade and after seeing how powerful the eruption system is he makes his own bey Level Leviathan!
Appearance: He wears a black and purple suit with a golden watch on his left hand plus he wears a purple hat.
Erupt Vulcan explained:
Erupt Vulcan: A 4 bladed attack type bey with a red,grey,and yellow color scheme. The bey has metal on the 4 contact points.
Drive: It like fusion but wider and it’s yellow.
Knight Valkyrie explained:
Knight Valkyrie: A 3 bladed attack type bey that has a blue and yellow color scheme with a bit of red. There is metal on the 3 winged contact points.
Rush: It is a combination between variable and evolution. It has red rubber on bottom of tip so eventually it will wear down making the bey more aggressive.
Crazy Corvus explained:
Crazy Corvus: A two bladed stamina type bey that has a light blue and white color scheme. The bey has two modes round mode and attack mode. Round mode the two wings on the bey lock into the rest of the layer but when the bey is halfway to bursting then the two wings pop out.
Twister: It basically revolve but shorter.
Level Leviathan explained:
Level Leviathan: A round bey with a purple and gold color scheme. The bey has metal almost everywhere on the bey except for middle.
Flip: It like moment except you can take the free spinning part off and flip around to change up the battle.
1st episode coming soon so stay tuned!
Beyblade Burst Eruption Episode 1
The Kid With A Blading Passion!
A kid woke up and got out of bed.
???: Hello world!
We see a montage of the kid going through his daily morning routine.
We then see the kid sitting at the table eating breakfast.
???: Your okay Vick?
Vick: Yep thanks for the good breakfast mom.
Vick Mom: No problem son!
Vick Dad comes out of a room and is about to go to work.
Vick Dad:Uh…. another day at restaurant.
Vick Mom: It’s okay honey!
Vick Dad: The pay is terrible and we are behind rent.
Vick Mom: Oh don’t be ridiculous!
They have a knock at the door.
Vick Dad: Oh carp…
Vick Dad opens the door.
Vick Dad: Uh hello… can. I help y-
Rent man: Where’s my rent!
Vick Dad: Listen I’m a bit behind but-
Rent man: Shut up! Listen you better get my money soon or I’ll
kick you out!
Vick Dad: Okay I’ll-
Rent man shuts door and Vick Dad sighs.
Vick: Don’t worry dad! Have a good day at work!
Vick Dad smiles and walks out the door.
Vick mom: So what’s your plan for today!
Vick: Beyblade!
Vick mom smiles
Vick Mom: Thought as much!
Vick finish his breakfast and rushes out with his launcher and bey.
Vick: Bye mom!
Vick leaves the apartment.
Vick Mom: He never changes!
Vick goes to the bey park where he sees a bully making fun of some kids.
Bully: Stupid kids!
Random kids: Stop!
Vick: Hey!
Everyone looks at Vick.
Vick: Stop messing with the kids would ya!?
Bully steps closer to Vick and clenches his fist.
Bully: And who are you?
Vick: My name is Vick and you need to stop.
Bully grins.
Bully: Maybe if you beat me in a bey battle!
Vick smiles
Vick: Deal!
We cut to Vick and the bully at the stadium.
Bully holds up bey.
Bully: This is my bey! Roar Fafnir!
Vick holds up his bey.
Vick: And this is my bey! Guilty Spriggan!
Bully laughs.
Bully: Stupid bey.
Random kid: First battle!
Vick and bully get ready.
Random kid: Ready set!
Everyone: 3 2 1 let it rip!!!
Vick and his bully launch their beys.
Fafnir takes center while Spriggan speeds around stadium..
Bully: Crush it!
Vick: Go!
Spriggan clashes with Fafnir.
Bully: Really? This is it?
Fafnir knocks Spriggan back.
Vick: Ahhh!
Spriggan hits wall hard and has a little crack also it starts to wobble.
Vick: Come on…
Bully: Finish this.
Fafnir goes from center and hits Spriggan so hard that Spriggan snaps in half.
Vick shows shocked faces and goes on knees.
Bully gives evil smile.
Bully: Worthless just like your family.
Vick get mad and runs to the bully nearly punching him.
???:Stop!
Vick and the bully turn their heads.
Vick mom: We’re going home.
Bully: Yeah go home you little baby.
All the kids around begin laughing and Vick eyes starts to tear up.
Vick: This isn’t fair!
Vick runs off.
Vick mom: Sweetie!
To be continued…
Beyblade Burst Eruption Episode 2
Burn! Erupt Vulcan!
Ratings would be highly appreciated
Beyblade Burst Eruption Episode 2
Burn! Erupt Vulcan!
Vick runs far from everyone and eventually stops
Vick pants.
Vick: Why do I have to be such a loser?
???: Because you just are!
Vick turns around and see a hooded man
Vick: Ahhh! Please don’t hurt me!
???: Shut up! I won’t hurt you I’ll just give you something.
The hooded man pulls out a bey.
???: This bey was made 10000 years ago from a volcano and was sealed away for being too strong.
Vick: Then how did you get it?
???: That’s not what’s important! I want to give this bey to you.
Vick: Um ok?
Vick takes the bey
Vick: What is it called?
???: Erupt Vulcan apart of eruption system.
Vick: Eruption system?
???: The layer has the disk integrated into it and the bey has a lot and I mean a lot of metal.
Vick continues to stare at the bey and begins to bond with it.
Vick then is taking into a red void and when he opens his eyes he sees a big avatar in front of him.
Vick: What it the!?
Vulcan: Hello it is me Vulcan!
Vick: Um… where the hell am I!?
Vulcan: Relax you’re fine!
Vick: I better be!
Vulcan: I’m your partner! Together we’re going to be the strongest!
Vick: The strongest…
Vick smiles
Vick: I like the sound of that!
Vick is then taking out of the void and the hooded man is gone.
Vick: Dang…
Vick goes back to his apartment and his parents are inside.
Vick Dad: Vick.. where were you?
Vick: Listen dad-
Vick Dad: Where were you!!!!
Vick: I have a new Bey!
Vick Mom: What?
Vick: Erupt Vulcan!
Vick Dad: Where did you get it from?
Vick: Umm… I made it!
Vick Mom: Fair enough.
Vick Dad: Look I won’t ground you but please never scare us like that again or run off again okay!
Vick: Alright!
Vick mom: Good now go to bed!
The next day
In the bey park…
Bully: You’re all weak!
Vick comes
Vick: Hey you!
Vick holds up Vulcan.
Bully: What the…
A girl named Clara was watching from a distance.
Clara: Interesting…
Vick: This is my bey Erupt Vulcan an eruption bey!
Bully: Doesn't matter can’t beat me!
Vick: Well suit yourself.
Vick and bully goes up to stadium.
Random Kid: First Battle! Ready Set!
3 2 1 let it rip!
Vulcan speeds around stadium and Fafnir stays in center.
Bully: Come on!
Vick smiles
Vulcan goes for an attack and Fafnir flips in the air and lands.
Bully: Uh oh….
Vulcan goes for a barrage of attacks.
Vick: Okay let do this! Vulcan!
Vick starts showing a red aurora.
Vick: Goooo now!
Vulcan avatar appears
Vick: Burst it!
Vulcan burst Fafnir
Bully: Nooo!
Bully goes on knees and everyone starts cheering.
Random kid: Vick with a burst finish! 2 points winner is Vick!
Vick: Just like I thought!
Clara walks up to Vick.
Clara: Hey.
Vick: Um..hi.
Clara: That was a really good battle.
Vick: Thanks! What’s your name?
Clara: Clara. How about yours?
Vick smiles
Vick: Vick.
Clara: Hope we meet again.
Vick: Same.
Clara walks off and Vick looks at Vulcan
Vick: Thanks buddy!
Vulcan glows
Next Episode:
Slice and Dice! Crazy Corvus!
Announcing Character Contest here’s how it will work:
Character Name
Age
Birthday
Appearance
Personality
Beyblade Name
Eruption Layer
Eruption Driver
No disk
The character and bey must be completely new no older motifs or characters.
If I like your post that means you got into the top 3 and eventually whoever to me is the best I will announce the winner!
The Contest starts today January 2 and goes on till January 16!
Good Luck!
A few other updates
- Episode count has been extended from 26 to 52 episodes
- Expect more characters to be introduced soon
-Expect more beys to be introduced soon
- The fanfic will last longer due to more episodes so depending on speed on new episodes it could be the only fanfic of the year (which isn’t necessarily bad)
Stay tuned for more updates
New Product Listings (1) For Beyblade Burst Eruption:
March
B 01 Erupt Vulcan Starter
B 02 Crazy Corvus Booster
B 03 Level Leviathan Booster
B 04 Eruption Launcher
B 05 Eruption Battle Set
April
B 06 Knight Valkyrie Booster
Beyblade Burst Eruption Episode 3
Slice and Dice! Crazy Corvus!
Clara was laying on her bed thinking about the Eruption system.
Clara: Hmmm…
Clara then gets up and goes to the nearby workshop to make a bey.
Clara (thoughts): I’ll make a powerful bey in the new system!
3 hours later
Clara holds up her bey.
Clara: It’s done! Crazy Corvus!
The next day…
Vick: Common Vulcan!
Random kid: Burst!
Vulcan burst random bey
Random kid: Ahhh!
Vick smiles
Vick: Alright who’s next!
Clara screams
Clara:ME!
Vick: Umm.. okay let’s do this.
Vick and Clara walk up to stadium.
Random kid: First battle!
Clara realizes Vick has a new launcher
Clara: What is that launcher?
Vick: The Eruption launcher to do the eruption shoot!
Clara (thoughts): Eruption shoot?
Random kid: Ready set!
3..2..1..Let it rip!
Vick does his launcher and flames come out of his launcher
Clara makes a shocked face
Vulcan speeds around stadium then tries to go for the center
Clara: I don’t think so!
Corvus In it’s round mode knocks Vulcan back
Vick: Really?
Corvus keeps holding down the center while Vulcan keeps attacking
Vick:Ok! Let heat things up! Vulcan!
Vulcan avatar appears
Vick: Now burst! Erupt Slash!
Vulcan hits Corvus but instead of Corvus bursting two wings pop out
Vick: What the!?
Clara smiles
Vick (thoughts): Wait I get it now! Whenever halfway to bursting the two wings pop out making it more aggressive!
Clara: THIS IS WHAT ATTACK MODE CAN DO!!!
Vick: Oh hot mama…
Clara: Corvus!
Clara starts showing a green aurora
Corvus avatar appears
Vick: We’re not done yet! Erupt Crush!
Clara: Crazy Swish!
Vulcan charges at Corvus
Vick and Clara: Ahhhhh!
Vulcan and Corvus are clashing
Vick and Clara: Burst finish!
Vulcan burst Corvus
Clara makes shocked face
Random kid: Vick Demi with a burst finish! With 2 points Vick is the winner!
Vick:Yes!!!
Clara picks up her bey pieces with a sad face
Vick looks at Clara
Vick:Hey it’s okay you did a good job!
Clara: I know what your secret was.
Vick gets creeped out for a second
Vick: Uh to what?…
Clara: How You won! You did the eruption launch!
Vick smiles sheepishly
Vick:Oh yeah…..
Clara: Think You can help me do it?
Vick: I don’t know I-
Clara gets all close up to Vick
Clara: Please…
Vick starts feeling warm all inside
Vick: Alright I’ll help you!
Clara smiles
Meanwhile a kid was secretly recording the whole battle
Random kid: I definitely uploading this!
Meanwhile in bc sol
A bey burst
Random kid: No way!
Valt: Nice! Valkyrie!
Valt picks up Ultimate Valkyrie
Random kid runs up to Valt with his phone
Random kid: Valt look at this!!!
Random kid shows Valt video
Valt: Eruption system huh?
Valt smiles
Valt looks at Ultimate Valkyrie
Valt: I don’t think we’re done yet!
Cuts to shot of Ultimate Valkyrie
Valt: Partner!
The End
Next Episode
Explosive Launch! Erupt!
Ratings would be highly appreciated
Beyblade Burst Eruption Upcoming Episode Titles:
4. Explosive Launch! Erupt!
5. Lin’s Challenge!
6. Hero Sword! Knight Valkyrie!
7. Valt Vs Vick!
Stay tuned for more updates!
Remember Character Contest Is Ongoing!
Hey Hollowmind13 you don’t mind rating my first 3 episodes don’t ya?
Beyblade Burst Eruption Episode 4
Explosive Launch! Erupt!
Vick woke up a bit early in the morning to try and meet Clara in a bey gym
Later…
Vick enters the gym and sees Clara sitting down pretty disappointed
Clara: Your late.
Vick: By a minute!
Clara: Doesn’t change the fact that your still late.
Vick: Look it’s really not that deep okay!
Clara gets up from the chair
Clara: So your gonna help teach me that!?
Vick smiles
Vick: Of course!
Clara smiles
20 minutes later
Clara: Let it rip!
Clara tries to make a launch but no flames come out.
Vick: Um that didn’t work… wanna retry that?
Clara does about 20-30 more attempts and none of it works.
Clara: Uh! This isn’t working!
Vick: You know what I have an idea.
Vick takes Clara to another part of the bey gym and shows her a rope.
Clara: Um Vick What is this?
Vick: This is a similar rope that Shu use to help teach Lane how to launch properly!
Clara: First of all I can launch launch properly! I just can do a eruption launch and second! We’re talking about Lane that guy that screams flare all the time!
Vick: Yeah but he does have that little cute hedgehog.
Clara: Awwww! Harry that little adorable thing!
Vick: I really wish I could pet it an- oh carp I’m loosing focus!
Clara: Oh yeah I forgot.
Vick helps Clara get up on the rope Clara actually is able to keep her self balance quite well.
Vick: Ya good!
Clara: Yeah I-
Clara then falls but Vick catches her.
Vick: Geeze your light just like me.
Vick then gets that good feeling again
Clara: Um thanks! Mind getting me back on the rope!
Someone walks in
???: Sad just sad…
Vick puts Clara down and they both turn around.
Lin: My name is Lin Bi! The richest person her!
Vick looks at Lin design with his purple suit ,Golden glasses, and even a golden watch.
Clara: Yeah we can see that!
Lin: Well anyway’s I need you poor peasants out of here as I buying the building!
Vick: You’re what!
Lin: Are you stupid or something I said I am buying the building!
Clara: You can’t take away this bey gym it’s special to many people!
Lin: Oh I’m also buying the bey park as well!
Vick: Ok I really don’t like this guy!
Vick then sparks an idea
Vick: I’ll battle you and If I win you can’t buy the park or gym! But if you win it’s all yours.
Lin: I am extremely rich man why should I even think o-
Vick: Na!Na! You see I know a big tough dude that can really mess you up!
Lin gets chills then sighs
Lin: Fine
Lin and Vick walks up to the stadium
Vick holds up his bey
Vick: Erupt Vulc-
Lin yawns
Lin holds up his bey
Lin: Level Leviathan!
Then Lin pulls out a golden launcher
Clara: Okay first battle ready set!
Everyone: 3..2..1.. let it rip!
Vulcan and Leviathan both go on the e offensive
Lin: Show these poor people who we are!
Vick: Go for it!
Vulcan hits Leviathan then gets knocked up into the air a burst
Vick: Nooooo…
Lin: Weak and poor! Never could be me! Don’t even know how your family or parents can sleep at night.
Lin starts laughing and tears starts coming down Vick eyes feeling totally humiliated.
Clara sighs
Clara: Leviathan gets burst finish Lin is winner!!
Lin continues to laugh.
Lin: Maybe if you were rich like me and strong like me your life would be a hole lot better!
Vick: Shut up! Just shut up! Not everything in life is about money!
Lin punches Vick
Lin: Never ever talk to me that way!
Clara pushes Lin
Clara: Leave Vick alone
Then all the sudden Clara gets an idea in her idea
Clara: Battle me!
Lin: What!? Bu-
Clara: You never said that it could only be one person!
Lin sighs
Lin: Fine but it’s getting late can we do this tomorrow?
Clara: Fine whatever.
Lin leaves building
Vick: Clara you didn’t have to…
Clara: I never let people mess with my friends!
Vick smiles
The End
Next Episode:
Lin’s Challenge!
Note that character contest is ongoing and I really want ratings for my episodes so I know what I need to improve on!
Explosive Launch! Erupt!
Vick woke up a bit early in the morning to try and meet Clara in a bey gym
Later…
Vick enters the gym and sees Clara sitting down pretty disappointed
Clara: Your late.
Vick: By a minute!
Clara: Doesn’t change the fact that your still late.
Vick: Look it’s really not that deep okay!
Clara gets up from the chair
Clara: So your gonna help teach me that!?
Vick smiles
Vick: Of course!
Clara smiles
20 minutes later
Clara: Let it rip!
Clara tries to make a launch but no flames come out.
Vick: Um that didn’t work… wanna retry that?
Clara does about 20-30 more attempts and none of it works.
Clara: Uh! This isn’t working!
Vick: You know what I have an idea.
Vick takes Clara to another part of the bey gym and shows her a rope.
Clara: Um Vick What is this?
Vick: This is a similar rope that Shu use to help teach Lane how to launch properly!
Clara: First of all I can launch launch properly! I just can do a eruption launch and second! We’re talking about Lane that guy that screams flare all the time!
Vick: Yeah but he does have that little cute hedgehog.
Clara: Awwww! Harry that little adorable thing!
Vick: I really wish I could pet it an- oh carp I’m loosing focus!
Clara: Oh yeah I forgot.
Vick helps Clara get up on the rope Clara actually is able to keep her self balance quite well.
Vick: Ya good!
Clara: Yeah I-
Clara then falls but Vick catches her.
Vick: Geeze your light just like me.
Vick then gets that good feeling again
Clara: Um thanks! Mind getting me back on the rope!
Someone walks in
???: Sad just sad…
Vick puts Clara down and they both turn around.
Lin: My name is Lin Bi! The richest person her!
Vick looks at Lin design with his purple suit ,Golden glasses, and even a golden watch.
Clara: Yeah we can see that!
Lin: Well anyway’s I need you poor peasants out of here as I buying the building!
Vick: You’re what!
Lin: Are you stupid or something I said I am buying the building!
Clara: You can’t take away this bey gym it’s special to many people!
Lin: Oh I’m also buying the bey park as well!
Vick: Ok I really don’t like this guy!
Vick then sparks an idea
Vick: I’ll battle you and If I win you can’t buy the park or gym! But if you win it’s all yours.
Lin: I am extremely rich man why should I even think o-
Vick: Na!Na! You see I know a big tough dude that can really mess you up!
Lin gets chills then sighs
Lin: Fine
Lin and Vick walks up to the stadium
Vick holds up his bey
Vick: Erupt Vulc-
Lin yawns
Lin holds up his bey
Lin: Level Leviathan!
Then Lin pulls out a golden launcher
Clara: Okay first battle ready set!
Everyone: 3..2..1.. let it rip!
Vulcan and Leviathan both go on the e offensive
Lin: Show these poor people who we are!
Vick: Go for it!
Vulcan hits Leviathan then gets knocked up into the air a burst
Vick: Nooooo…
Lin: Weak and poor! Never could be me! Don’t even know how your family or parents can sleep at night.
Lin starts laughing and tears starts coming down Vick eyes feeling totally humiliated.
Clara sighs
Clara: Leviathan gets burst finish Lin is winner!!
Lin continues to laugh.
Lin: Maybe if you were rich like me and strong like me your life would be a hole lot better!
Vick: Shut up! Just shut up! Not everything in life is about money!
Lin punches Vick
Lin: Never ever talk to me that way!
Clara pushes Lin
Clara: Leave Vick alone
Then all the sudden Clara gets an idea in her idea
Clara: Battle me!
Lin: What!? Bu-
Clara: You never said that it could only be one person!
Lin sighs
Lin: Fine but it’s getting late can we do this tomorrow?
Clara: Fine whatever.
Lin leaves building
Vick: Clara you didn’t have to…
Clara: I never let people mess with my friends!
Vick smiles
The End
Next Episode:
Lin’s Challenge!
Note that character contest is ongoing and I really want ratings for my episodes so I know what I need to improve on!
Character Submission:
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Character Name
Orion Escobedo (Normally)
El Mejor Corona (Music name)
Age
18
Birthday
October 1st
Appearance
As Orion: Short yellow hair (hair style similar to Chris from Metal Fight). Has purple eyes and fairly noticeable eye-bags. Sports a white unzipped sweatshirt with a yellow turtleneck underneath along side white sweatpants and yellow tennis shoes. Has yellow aura during battles.
As "El Mejor Corona"
Long purple hair with pink streaks (hair length like Phi's). Wears a visor completely obstructing his eyes to everyone else. Has fairly light skin, but darker compared to most cast members. Sports a long purple unbuttoned trench coat with pink stripes. Along side a pink shirt and purple dress pants and pink dress shoes. Has purple aura during battles.
Personality
"El Mejor Corona": Overall very condescending and overly arrogant yet unpredictable, typically even insulting his opponent before matches. The unpredictable nature of him comes in his launching style, changing every battle, further emphasized by the jumping nature of his bey Eratos.
As "Orion": Typically very tired and talks as if nothing is to be taken seriously, notably yawning during conversation, likely due to a lack of sleep. When not tired, Orion is seen to be very honest and commanding. In team settings, he is seen attempting to be the leader in most scenarios due to his career as a music producer.
Beyblade Name (well, names here...)
Musical Orpheus Bolt'
Wreath Eratos Neo Quake
Eruption Layer(s)
Musical Orpheus: A yellow right spin Eruption Layer featuring 3 large protrusion points with high recoil with metal on the wings similar to Knight Valkyrie, making it excellent for smash attacks. (Literally just blitz unicorno)
Wreath Eratos: A purple right spin Eruption Layer featuring 7 protrusions, 2 of the 7 featuring more metal compared to the rest of the points, causing the layer to be unbalanced, making it great for attack.
Eruption Driver(s)
Bolt': Basically just Jolt but backwards (so yes, R2F from Metal Fight)
Neo Quake: Literally just a combination of Operate and Quake (yes, literally just storm capricorn's tip from mfb)
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Character Name
Orion Escobedo (Normally)
El Mejor Corona (Music name)
Age
18
Birthday
October 1st
Appearance
As Orion: Short yellow hair (hair style similar to Chris from Metal Fight). Has purple eyes and fairly noticeable eye-bags. Sports a white unzipped sweatshirt with a yellow turtleneck underneath along side white sweatpants and yellow tennis shoes. Has yellow aura during battles.
As "El Mejor Corona"
Long purple hair with pink streaks (hair length like Phi's). Wears a visor completely obstructing his eyes to everyone else. Has fairly light skin, but darker compared to most cast members. Sports a long purple unbuttoned trench coat with pink stripes. Along side a pink shirt and purple dress pants and pink dress shoes. Has purple aura during battles.
Personality
"El Mejor Corona": Overall very condescending and overly arrogant yet unpredictable, typically even insulting his opponent before matches. The unpredictable nature of him comes in his launching style, changing every battle, further emphasized by the jumping nature of his bey Eratos.
As "Orion": Typically very tired and talks as if nothing is to be taken seriously, notably yawning during conversation, likely due to a lack of sleep. When not tired, Orion is seen to be very honest and commanding. In team settings, he is seen attempting to be the leader in most scenarios due to his career as a music producer.
Beyblade Name (well, names here...)
Musical Orpheus Bolt'
Wreath Eratos Neo Quake
Eruption Layer(s)
Musical Orpheus: A yellow right spin Eruption Layer featuring 3 large protrusion points with high recoil with metal on the wings similar to Knight Valkyrie, making it excellent for smash attacks. (Literally just blitz unicorno)
Wreath Eratos: A purple right spin Eruption Layer featuring 7 protrusions, 2 of the 7 featuring more metal compared to the rest of the points, causing the layer to be unbalanced, making it great for attack.
Eruption Driver(s)
Bolt': Basically just Jolt but backwards (so yes, R2F from Metal Fight)
Neo Quake: Literally just a combination of Operate and Quake (yes, literally just storm capricorn's tip from mfb)
(Jan. 03, 2023 2:44 PM)greg8972 Wrote: Character Submission:Your in the top 3 also can you please give my newest episode a rating
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Character Name
Orion Escobedo (Normally)
El Mejor Corona (Music name)
Age
18
Birthday
October 1st
Appearance
As Orion: Short yellow hair (hair style similar to Chris from Metal Fight). Has purple eyes and fairly noticeable eye-bags. Sports a white unzipped sweatshirt with a yellow turtleneck underneath along side white sweatpants and yellow tennis shoes. Has yellow aura during battles.
As "El Mejor Corona"
Long purple hair with pink streaks (hair length like Phi's). Wears a visor completely obstructing his eyes to everyone else. Has fairly light skin, but darker compared to most cast members. Sports a long purple unbuttoned trench coat with pink stripes. Along side a pink shirt and purple dress pants and pink dress shoes. Has purple aura during battles.
Personality
"El Mejor Corona": Overall very condescending and overly arrogant yet unpredictable, typically even insulting his opponent before matches. The unpredictable nature of him comes in his launching style, changing every battle, further emphasized by the jumping nature of his bey Eratos.
As "Orion": Typically very tired and talks as if nothing is to be taken seriously, notably yawning during conversation, likely due to a lack of sleep. When not tired, Orion is seen to be very honest and commanding. In team settings, he is seen attempting to be the leader in most scenarios due to his career as a music producer.
Beyblade Name (well, names here...)
Musical Orpheus Bolt'
Wreath Eratos Neo Quake
Eruption Layer(s)
Musical Orpheus: A yellow right spin Eruption Layer featuring 3 large protrusion points with high recoil with metal on the wings similar to Knight Valkyrie, making it excellent for smash attacks. (Literally just blitz unicorno)
Wreath Eratos: A purple right spin Eruption Layer featuring 7 protrusions, 2 of the 7 featuring more metal compared to the rest of the points, causing the layer to be unbalanced, making it great for attack.
Eruption Driver(s)
Bolt': Basically just Jolt but backwards (so yes, R2F from Metal Fight)
Neo Quake: Literally just a combination of Operate and Quake (yes, literally just storm capricorn's tip from mfb)
(Jan. 03, 2023 3:01 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Your in the top 3 also can you please give my newest episode a ratingSure! Overall I'd give the episode a good 8/10. Aside some spelling mistakes, Lin feels very stereotypical for a rich kid, although it does bring some good conflict between Vick and him. I don't really got a whole lot to say about it really!
Major Confirmation: Free, Lui, and Shu will all return with new eruption evolution to their beys. I will reveal the new Fafnir, Longinus and Spriggan soon.
Beyblade Burst Eruption Products Listings (2)
May
B 07 RBV 1 ( Mystic Fafnir)
June
B 08 Smash Longinus Booster
B 09 Left Eruption Launcher
July
B 10 Inferno Spriggan Starter
Beyblade Burst Eruption Episode 5
Lin’s Challenge!
Clara is in her pajamas laying down on her bed thinking about how to defeat Lin
Clara: Hmmmm..
The next day
Clara walks in bey gym but Vick and Lin are already in there both arguing
Vick: You stupid idiot have a heart!
Lin: Say one more word and I’ll sue you!
Clara: Guys!
Vick and Lin stop arguing and look at Clara
Clara: Ya ready Lin!
Clara holds up Corvus
Lin smirks
Lin: Oh yeah…
Both Clara and Lin walk up to stadium
Vick: I’ll be the ref first battle!
Clara (thoughts): Level Leviathan is super heavy which means less stamina.
Lin changes something on Leviathan driver
Clara (Thoughts): What in the!?
Vick: Ready set!
3…2…1…Let it rip!!!
Clara finally does eruption launch
Vick: You did it!
Corvus and Leviathan both go for center
Lin: He he…
Leviathan starts going everywhere
Clara: What the!?
Leviathan hits Corvus knocking it back then Corvus hits wall and is halfway to bursting
Clara: Think you forgot something…
Lin makes a confused face
Corvus wings pop out
Vick: Here we go…
Clara aurora appears and her hair goes crazy
Lin: Ahhh!
Clara: Now! Corvus!
Corvus avatar appears
Lin stomps his leg
Lin: How dare you try to beat me! Leviathan!
Lin starts showing a purple aurora
Leviathan avatar appears
Lin: Now shows these peasants who we are! Level Clash!
Leviathan layer begins to glow
Vick (thoughts): When in comes to Leviathan thanks to the flip driver the little spikes on bottom help change up performance not bad!
Clara: Now! Crazy Slash!
Clara does this effect where she takes her fingers then she swishes it
Lin does this effect where when he is moving his hand their is a smear frame.
Corvus and Leviathan clash
Clara and Lin: Ahhhh!
Both bey go up in the air but Leviathan burst right before Corvus
Clara makes shocked face
Clara: I won…
Lin makes shocked face
Lin: I lost… THIS IS SO DUMB!!!!
Vick: Corvus with a burst finish! With Clara having 2 points she is the winner!
Clara squeals
Clara: Yes! Now you can’t buy this place!
Lin: Jerks!
Vick: You’re the one who bullies people who are less rich than you!
Lin: My parents make me okay!
The room is silent for a few seconds
Vick: what?
Lin: My parents make me do it…. they never have time for me so I guess I started to become like them.
Clara: I actually feel kinda bad for you…
???: What is going on here!!!
Everyone turns around
Lin: Dad!?
Lin’s Dad: Why are you hanging out with these poor peasants and losers.
Clara: Actually I’m average.
Vick makes annoyed face
Vick: Really?
Clara: What I ain’t gonna lie.
Lin’s Dad: Lin come with me now!
Lin thinks for a second
Lin: No!
Lin’s Dad: What did you just say to me!?
Lin: You never have any time for me all you care about is your money!
Lin’s Dad thinks for a second
Lin’s Dad: Wow I’m so sorry….
Lin: I’ll forgive you I guess.
Lin’s Dad calls his work
Lin’s Dad: Thank you.
Lin: Is there a problem?
Lin’s Dad: I’m taking a few days off work to spend time with you!
Lin: Really thanks!!!
Lin hugs his dad
Clara: Awwwwww…
Lin and his Dad: Hush. Your irrelevant.
Clara mocks them secretly
Vick smiles
A week later
Vick, Clara, and Lin are all training.
Vick: You ain’t got nothing against me!
Clara: Knock Em out!
Lin: Leviathan!
Vulcan, Corvus, and Leviathan all clash in the center and all burst at the same time
Vick: Hard luck.
???: Yo!
All three bladers turn around
Lin: Is that!?
Clara: It can’t be!?
Vick: V- Valt Aoi!!!!!?
We see Valt standing
Valt: Hey guys!
Vick: You don’t understand how much I have always wanted to meet you!
Valt: Well happy that dream came true!
Lin: Why are you here anyways
Valt holds up his bey
Valt: Meet Knight Valkyrie!
Clara: Looks sick!
Vick (thoughts): Seems like there’s no rubber on this one but metal wings! Now that’s sick!
Valt: So who wants to be my first opponent!
Lin: Me!!!!
Valt: alright your up!
Clara: First Battle!
Lin (thoughts) : We have to play defense if we want to win Leviathan!
Valt (thoughts): Let’s see if these bladers are that strong!
Clara: Ready set!
3…2…1..Let it rip!
Valkyrie speeds around stadium
Valt: Now Flash Launch!
Valkyrie goes on red line (what do they call it?) and speeds up meanwhile Leviathan is in the center
Valt: Now Rush Launch
Valkyrie hits Leviathan then gives Leviathan a barrage of attacks
Lin (thoughts): Valt’s so strong!
Lin: Stand your ground Leviat-
Valkyrie hits Leviathan so hard Leviathan burst
Lin makes goofy face
Lin: Ahhhhhhh!
Clara: Valkyrie with a burst finish! With 2 points Valt Is the winner!
Vick: Oh man…
Next Episode
Holy Sword! Knight Valkyrie!
Ratings would be highly appreciated and character contest continues!
Free Character Bio:
Age:17
Beyblade: Mystic Fafnir. Absorb
Design: Free wears same clothes from dB
Story: Free is a chill powerful blader and will do anything to become the strongest (well as long as it doesn’t involve dark power)
Lui Shirosogi bio:
Age:16
Beyblade: Smash Longinus. Destroy Dash
Story: Hard core blader who will only respect you if you win against him
Shu Kurienei Bio:
Age:16
Beyblade: Inferno Spriggan. Quattro Dash
Story: Helpful serious powerful blader who will help. anyone get out of the darkness
Mystic Fafnir: Left spinning stamina type that has lots a metal and rubber (basically it is vanish Fafnir with more metal and and more red)
Smash Longinus: Left Spinning attack type that has more metal than it predecessor with a purple be white color scheme
(Basically Rage Longinus except more beefed up)
Inferno Spriggan: Dual spinning balance type that has a red and gold color scheme plus it has rubber on its axes and metal on it other contact points. You change its spin by sliding the teeth changing its rotation. Very similar in style and design to Cho Z Spriggan
HUGE INFO: My peak of how many beyblade fanfics I can make at once is probably 2. So I will be teasing my other fanfic soon.
Stay tuned for more info soon!!!
Beyblade Burst Eruption Products Listings (2)
May
B 07 RBV 1 ( Mystic Fafnir)
June
B 08 Smash Longinus Booster
B 09 Left Eruption Launcher
July
B 10 Inferno Spriggan Starter
Beyblade Burst Eruption Episode 5
Lin’s Challenge!
Clara is in her pajamas laying down on her bed thinking about how to defeat Lin
Clara: Hmmmm..
The next day
Clara walks in bey gym but Vick and Lin are already in there both arguing
Vick: You stupid idiot have a heart!
Lin: Say one more word and I’ll sue you!
Clara: Guys!
Vick and Lin stop arguing and look at Clara
Clara: Ya ready Lin!
Clara holds up Corvus
Lin smirks
Lin: Oh yeah…
Both Clara and Lin walk up to stadium
Vick: I’ll be the ref first battle!
Clara (thoughts): Level Leviathan is super heavy which means less stamina.
Lin changes something on Leviathan driver
Clara (Thoughts): What in the!?
Vick: Ready set!
3…2…1…Let it rip!!!
Clara finally does eruption launch
Vick: You did it!
Corvus and Leviathan both go for center
Lin: He he…
Leviathan starts going everywhere
Clara: What the!?
Leviathan hits Corvus knocking it back then Corvus hits wall and is halfway to bursting
Clara: Think you forgot something…
Lin makes a confused face
Corvus wings pop out
Vick: Here we go…
Clara aurora appears and her hair goes crazy
Lin: Ahhh!
Clara: Now! Corvus!
Corvus avatar appears
Lin stomps his leg
Lin: How dare you try to beat me! Leviathan!
Lin starts showing a purple aurora
Leviathan avatar appears
Lin: Now shows these peasants who we are! Level Clash!
Leviathan layer begins to glow
Vick (thoughts): When in comes to Leviathan thanks to the flip driver the little spikes on bottom help change up performance not bad!
Clara: Now! Crazy Slash!
Clara does this effect where she takes her fingers then she swishes it
Lin does this effect where when he is moving his hand their is a smear frame.
Corvus and Leviathan clash
Clara and Lin: Ahhhh!
Both bey go up in the air but Leviathan burst right before Corvus
Clara makes shocked face
Clara: I won…
Lin makes shocked face
Lin: I lost… THIS IS SO DUMB!!!!
Vick: Corvus with a burst finish! With Clara having 2 points she is the winner!
Clara squeals
Clara: Yes! Now you can’t buy this place!
Lin: Jerks!
Vick: You’re the one who bullies people who are less rich than you!
Lin: My parents make me okay!
The room is silent for a few seconds
Vick: what?
Lin: My parents make me do it…. they never have time for me so I guess I started to become like them.
Clara: I actually feel kinda bad for you…
???: What is going on here!!!
Everyone turns around
Lin: Dad!?
Lin’s Dad: Why are you hanging out with these poor peasants and losers.
Clara: Actually I’m average.
Vick makes annoyed face
Vick: Really?
Clara: What I ain’t gonna lie.
Lin’s Dad: Lin come with me now!
Lin thinks for a second
Lin: No!
Lin’s Dad: What did you just say to me!?
Lin: You never have any time for me all you care about is your money!
Lin’s Dad thinks for a second
Lin’s Dad: Wow I’m so sorry….
Lin: I’ll forgive you I guess.
Lin’s Dad calls his work
Lin’s Dad: Thank you.
Lin: Is there a problem?
Lin’s Dad: I’m taking a few days off work to spend time with you!
Lin: Really thanks!!!
Lin hugs his dad
Clara: Awwwwww…
Lin and his Dad: Hush. Your irrelevant.
Clara mocks them secretly
Vick smiles
A week later
Vick, Clara, and Lin are all training.
Vick: You ain’t got nothing against me!
Clara: Knock Em out!
Lin: Leviathan!
Vulcan, Corvus, and Leviathan all clash in the center and all burst at the same time
Vick: Hard luck.
???: Yo!
All three bladers turn around
Lin: Is that!?
Clara: It can’t be!?
Vick: V- Valt Aoi!!!!!?
We see Valt standing
Valt: Hey guys!
Vick: You don’t understand how much I have always wanted to meet you!
Valt: Well happy that dream came true!
Lin: Why are you here anyways
Valt holds up his bey
Valt: Meet Knight Valkyrie!
Clara: Looks sick!
Vick (thoughts): Seems like there’s no rubber on this one but metal wings! Now that’s sick!
Valt: So who wants to be my first opponent!
Lin: Me!!!!
Valt: alright your up!
Clara: First Battle!
Lin (thoughts) : We have to play defense if we want to win Leviathan!
Valt (thoughts): Let’s see if these bladers are that strong!
Clara: Ready set!
3…2…1..Let it rip!
Valkyrie speeds around stadium
Valt: Now Flash Launch!
Valkyrie goes on red line (what do they call it?) and speeds up meanwhile Leviathan is in the center
Valt: Now Rush Launch
Valkyrie hits Leviathan then gives Leviathan a barrage of attacks
Lin (thoughts): Valt’s so strong!
Lin: Stand your ground Leviat-
Valkyrie hits Leviathan so hard Leviathan burst
Lin makes goofy face
Lin: Ahhhhhhh!
Clara: Valkyrie with a burst finish! With 2 points Valt Is the winner!
Vick: Oh man…
Next Episode
Holy Sword! Knight Valkyrie!
Ratings would be highly appreciated and character contest continues!
Free Character Bio:
Age:17
Beyblade: Mystic Fafnir. Absorb
Design: Free wears same clothes from dB
Story: Free is a chill powerful blader and will do anything to become the strongest (well as long as it doesn’t involve dark power)
Lui Shirosogi bio:
Age:16
Beyblade: Smash Longinus. Destroy Dash
Story: Hard core blader who will only respect you if you win against him
Shu Kurienei Bio:
Age:16
Beyblade: Inferno Spriggan. Quattro Dash
Story: Helpful serious powerful blader who will help. anyone get out of the darkness
Mystic Fafnir: Left spinning stamina type that has lots a metal and rubber (basically it is vanish Fafnir with more metal and and more red)
Smash Longinus: Left Spinning attack type that has more metal than it predecessor with a purple be white color scheme
(Basically Rage Longinus except more beefed up)
Inferno Spriggan: Dual spinning balance type that has a red and gold color scheme plus it has rubber on its axes and metal on it other contact points. You change its spin by sliding the teeth changing its rotation. Very similar in style and design to Cho Z Spriggan
HUGE INFO: My peak of how many beyblade fanfics I can make at once is probably 2. So I will be teasing my other fanfic soon.
Stay tuned for more info soon!!!
Character Name: Josephine King
Age: 15
Birthday: July 1st
Appearance: Josephine has purple hair which is short in length with the hair in the front being split with a long piece of hair going downwards where her nose is while the rest of the hair stays away from her face. She also has blue eyes but those eyes will change to red with the white part of the eye being black when her aura appears. Josephine is usually seen wearing a green button up shirt under a blue zip up jacket with black shorts and black boots with red socks.
Personality: Josephine is a kind child who lives with her grandpa due to the death of her parents. Though because of the trauma she is known to have outbursts of anger though she's working on fixing that problem. Though her anger issues is reflected in his aura as it causes her eyes to change colors and her bey to change into a state similar to black turbo. Josephine really likes coffee, nature, and books as well with her having a pet rabbit which inspired her bey.
Beyblade Name: Know Jackalope Ghoul
Know Jackalope: Know Jackalope is a blue, right spinning, stamina type layer which is shaped similarly to Valkyrie with three main contact points though unlike Valkyrie the gaps between the attack points are filled with a red rubber. The middle of the layer has a blue rabbit with red eyes and red horns as the avatar.
Ghoul: A blue stamina type driver with very low friction spin rotation, due to a free spinning sharp tip and the smooth support provided by the plastic surrounding it, similarly to Never.
Special Moves:
Know Destruction: If Jackalope is spinning at high speeds and a opponents bey attacks it, Jackalope can channel its energy into contact points causing massive damage and when used in conjunction with the rubber on the layer this move can almost guarantee a burst.
Know Defense: Using the rubber on the Know layer, Jackalope is able tank most attacks from a right spinning bey.
Know Spin: Using the rubber on the Know layer, Jackalope is able to absorb attacks from a left spinning bey.
Age: 15
Birthday: July 1st
Appearance: Josephine has purple hair which is short in length with the hair in the front being split with a long piece of hair going downwards where her nose is while the rest of the hair stays away from her face. She also has blue eyes but those eyes will change to red with the white part of the eye being black when her aura appears. Josephine is usually seen wearing a green button up shirt under a blue zip up jacket with black shorts and black boots with red socks.
Personality: Josephine is a kind child who lives with her grandpa due to the death of her parents. Though because of the trauma she is known to have outbursts of anger though she's working on fixing that problem. Though her anger issues is reflected in his aura as it causes her eyes to change colors and her bey to change into a state similar to black turbo. Josephine really likes coffee, nature, and books as well with her having a pet rabbit which inspired her bey.
Beyblade Name: Know Jackalope Ghoul
Know Jackalope: Know Jackalope is a blue, right spinning, stamina type layer which is shaped similarly to Valkyrie with three main contact points though unlike Valkyrie the gaps between the attack points are filled with a red rubber. The middle of the layer has a blue rabbit with red eyes and red horns as the avatar.
Ghoul: A blue stamina type driver with very low friction spin rotation, due to a free spinning sharp tip and the smooth support provided by the plastic surrounding it, similarly to Never.
Special Moves:
Know Destruction: If Jackalope is spinning at high speeds and a opponents bey attacks it, Jackalope can channel its energy into contact points causing massive damage and when used in conjunction with the rubber on the layer this move can almost guarantee a burst.
Know Defense: Using the rubber on the Know layer, Jackalope is able tank most attacks from a right spinning bey.
Know Spin: Using the rubber on the Know layer, Jackalope is able to absorb attacks from a left spinning bey.
Ed and Greg you both are currently in the contest ( and top 3) after that there only one more person that will make it so if you plan on joining makes sure to really do a good job.
Also wanted to reveal that I gonna start slowing down on the content so I can simply make it better expect new episodes to come at a slightly lower rate. This is simply because I want to do quality over quantity. Thanks for your understanding remember character contest is still going!
Also here’s title of 2nd fanfic:
Beyblade Burst: TimeWarp
The series will begin in February or March
I’ll be doing full announcement tonight.
Also wanted to reveal that I gonna start slowing down on the content so I can simply make it better expect new episodes to come at a slightly lower rate. This is simply because I want to do quality over quantity. Thanks for your understanding remember character contest is still going!
Also here’s title of 2nd fanfic:
Beyblade Burst: TimeWarp
The series will begin in February or March
I’ll be doing full announcement tonight.
Character Name: Henry Graham
Age: 15
Birthday: October 12
Appearance: Henry has black hair and blue eyes though that will change when he uses his resonance because similarly to Aiga his hair will rise upward but unlike Aiga instead of his hair glowing red it instead glows yellow. His casual outfit consists of a white t shirt, orange and black jacket, green pants with a brown belt, and brown sneakers. His blading outfit though consists of a blue t shirt under an orange jumpsuit which has a blue long piece of cloth tied at the waste and blue boots.
Personality: Henry is a nice kid who grew up with his grandpa due to the death of his father and mother. Henry's goal is to become the strongest blader and to complete that goal he'll usually be seen training. He also has a great group of friends that he trains and hangs out with due to their common goal of wanting to be the strongest.
Beyblade Name: Entry Hanuman Art
Entry Hanuman: A orange right spinning stamina Type Beyblade that's fully round but contains three blue blades that can extend like Ragnaruk. The avatar is Hanuman with him having his legs crossed and his right hand up while his left hand holds a mallet. Hanuman's entire skin is yellow which when Henry uses his resonance the yellow from Hanuman will spread, covering the entire bey like gold turbo. Hanuman's mallet is also blue and the crown he wears also being blue and the cloth at his waste also being blue and he also has an orange bracelet on his left wrist.
Art: A orange stamina type driver that features a sharp tip surrounded by a downward facing plate that is not free spinning similarly to Rise.
Special Moves:
Entry Whirlwind: When rotating at high speeds, Hanuman is able to release the blades out and use the blades to generate an upward force similarly to a tornado.
Whirlwind Release: When Hanuman is at even higher speeds compared to what is needed for Entry Whirlwind, Hanuman is able to release the blades and push the wind around it back causing any other bey in the arena to be hit by a gush of wind.
Entry Counter: If attacked Hanuman is able to lean onto the Art driver and drift in a circle around the stadium gaining speed and power till it hits its opponents bey.
Entry Barrier: When rotating at high speeds, Hanuman is able to release its blades and create a barrier of wind that surrounds Hanuman and creates a defense that possibly no bey can get past.
Age: 15
Birthday: October 12
Appearance: Henry has black hair and blue eyes though that will change when he uses his resonance because similarly to Aiga his hair will rise upward but unlike Aiga instead of his hair glowing red it instead glows yellow. His casual outfit consists of a white t shirt, orange and black jacket, green pants with a brown belt, and brown sneakers. His blading outfit though consists of a blue t shirt under an orange jumpsuit which has a blue long piece of cloth tied at the waste and blue boots.
Personality: Henry is a nice kid who grew up with his grandpa due to the death of his father and mother. Henry's goal is to become the strongest blader and to complete that goal he'll usually be seen training. He also has a great group of friends that he trains and hangs out with due to their common goal of wanting to be the strongest.
Beyblade Name: Entry Hanuman Art
Entry Hanuman: A orange right spinning stamina Type Beyblade that's fully round but contains three blue blades that can extend like Ragnaruk. The avatar is Hanuman with him having his legs crossed and his right hand up while his left hand holds a mallet. Hanuman's entire skin is yellow which when Henry uses his resonance the yellow from Hanuman will spread, covering the entire bey like gold turbo. Hanuman's mallet is also blue and the crown he wears also being blue and the cloth at his waste also being blue and he also has an orange bracelet on his left wrist.
Art: A orange stamina type driver that features a sharp tip surrounded by a downward facing plate that is not free spinning similarly to Rise.
Special Moves:
Entry Whirlwind: When rotating at high speeds, Hanuman is able to release the blades out and use the blades to generate an upward force similarly to a tornado.
Whirlwind Release: When Hanuman is at even higher speeds compared to what is needed for Entry Whirlwind, Hanuman is able to release the blades and push the wind around it back causing any other bey in the arena to be hit by a gush of wind.
Entry Counter: If attacked Hanuman is able to lean onto the Art driver and drift in a circle around the stadium gaining speed and power till it hits its opponents bey.
Entry Barrier: When rotating at high speeds, Hanuman is able to release its blades and create a barrier of wind that surrounds Hanuman and creates a defense that possibly no bey can get past.
Introducing 2nd series!
Beyblade Burst TimeWarp!
Plot: In follows siblings Kali and Conner who love beyblade but their parents were always against them. Eventually after getting kicked out of the house they begin having a beyblade apocalypse! But thanks to a very old bey doctor they are able to find beys Time Kratos and Warp Chronos ( no cuza) that have time powers! Now it’s up to the siblings to go back in time to stop the great beyblade apocalypse and protect the timeline!!!
Characters:
Kali Bond
Conner Bond
Kilo Misorui
Under Kumbsha
Beyblades:
Time Kratos Flash Perfect
Warp Chronos Turn Max
Protect Kerbeus Pom Yard Metal
Universal Uranus Match Work
This is series is 26 episodes long and Eruption has also been lowered back to 26 episodes so I am making huge changes and I will announce some of the changes later.
Until then let it rip!
Beyblade Burst TimeWarp!
Plot: In follows siblings Kali and Conner who love beyblade but their parents were always against them. Eventually after getting kicked out of the house they begin having a beyblade apocalypse! But thanks to a very old bey doctor they are able to find beys Time Kratos and Warp Chronos ( no cuza) that have time powers! Now it’s up to the siblings to go back in time to stop the great beyblade apocalypse and protect the timeline!!!
Characters:
Kali Bond
Conner Bond
Kilo Misorui
Under Kumbsha
Beyblades:
Time Kratos Flash Perfect
Warp Chronos Turn Max
Protect Kerbeus Pom Yard Metal
Universal Uranus Match Work
This is series is 26 episodes long and Eruption has also been lowered back to 26 episodes so I am making huge changes and I will announce some of the changes later.
Until then let it rip!
Beyblade Burst Eruption Episode 6
Holy Sword! Knight Valkyrie!
Valt laughs
Valt: That was a fun battle Lin!
Lin rolls his eyes
Lin: Yeah whatever…
Valt: So who wants to battle me next?
Clara: I do!
Clara holds up Corvus
Valt smiles
Vick: I’ll be the ref this time!
Lin (thoughts): If I lost there’s no way Clara will be able to beat Valt it’s over…
Clara (Thoughts): Leviathan was more defensive but Valt’s strong so I’ll have to go offensive!
Vick: Ready set!
3..2…1… Let It Rip!
Valkyrie hits the floor hard and then uses tornado ridge to go faster while Corvus also hits tornado ridge and chases Valkyrie
Valt smiles
Clara: Okay Corvus! Knock em out!
Corvus gets close behind Valkyrie
Vick(thoughts): She really isn’t trying to play defense is she!?
Clara: Go Corvus!
Corvus flares out
Corvus avatar appears
Corvus leaves ridge and hits the wall to enter attack mode
Clara: Go!
Corvus charges Valkyrie
Valt: Dodge!
Valkyrie uses rush driver to be able to sort of go opposite spin (basically what Valt did to Bell in 7 dB episode)
Lin: Dang! Valt crossed you up and broke them ankles
Clara face turns red and starts steaming
Afterwards Clara looks at Lin away from battle
Clara: Shut up!!!
Valt: Now It’s time Holy Sword!!!
Clara turns back to look at stadium
Clara: Huh?
Valkyrie slashes Corvus bursting Corvus
Clara makes shocked face
Vick: Knight Valkyrie with a burst finish! 2 points to Valt Aoi! Valt is the winner!
Lin: Well that sucks….for you.
Clara: Why you little!?
Clara and Lin starts arguing while Vick and Valt are just smiling.
Next Episode
Valt Vs Vick!
Ratings would be highly appreciated! (Hopefully I improved a little on this chapter Hollowmind13)
Also for now on I’ll be having only 1 Eruption episode a day.
Holy Sword! Knight Valkyrie!
Valt laughs
Valt: That was a fun battle Lin!
Lin rolls his eyes
Lin: Yeah whatever…
Valt: So who wants to battle me next?
Clara: I do!
Clara holds up Corvus
Valt smiles
Vick: I’ll be the ref this time!
Lin (thoughts): If I lost there’s no way Clara will be able to beat Valt it’s over…
Clara (Thoughts): Leviathan was more defensive but Valt’s strong so I’ll have to go offensive!
Vick: Ready set!
3..2…1… Let It Rip!
Valkyrie hits the floor hard and then uses tornado ridge to go faster while Corvus also hits tornado ridge and chases Valkyrie
Valt smiles
Clara: Okay Corvus! Knock em out!
Corvus gets close behind Valkyrie
Vick(thoughts): She really isn’t trying to play defense is she!?
Clara: Go Corvus!
Corvus flares out
Corvus avatar appears
Corvus leaves ridge and hits the wall to enter attack mode
Clara: Go!
Corvus charges Valkyrie
Valt: Dodge!
Valkyrie uses rush driver to be able to sort of go opposite spin (basically what Valt did to Bell in 7 dB episode)
Lin: Dang! Valt crossed you up and broke them ankles
Clara face turns red and starts steaming
Afterwards Clara looks at Lin away from battle
Clara: Shut up!!!
Valt: Now It’s time Holy Sword!!!
Clara turns back to look at stadium
Clara: Huh?
Valkyrie slashes Corvus bursting Corvus
Clara makes shocked face
Vick: Knight Valkyrie with a burst finish! 2 points to Valt Aoi! Valt is the winner!
Lin: Well that sucks….for you.
Clara: Why you little!?
Clara and Lin starts arguing while Vick and Valt are just smiling.
Next Episode
Valt Vs Vick!
Ratings would be highly appreciated! (Hopefully I improved a little on this chapter Hollowmind13)
Also for now on I’ll be having only 1 Eruption episode a day.
Aki Takeba or Xero
Age: 19
Birthday: August 9th
Height: 5' 9"
Appearance: Somewhat short to medium length black hair, similar to that of Haise Sasaki(Ken Kaneki)'s first hairstyle. Wears glasses due to somewhat bad closer sight problems, usually wears a white shirt with a grenade pictured on it, black or gray sweatpants and a black jacket that reaches a bit higher then his knees. He wears black and red high tops, and has a lip ring on the edge of right side of his mouth, a black stud ear piercing on his left ear and a skeleton hand tattoo on his right hand.
Personality: Depends on his personality.
Aki: Kind and caring to his friends and tries to help them, and will go out of the way to make their lives easier even if his is worse due to that.
Xero/Haise: If Aki feel weak or powerless, his inner struggles force him to become Xero. When he is like this, he only works for himself and is cold to most people. Sometimes even deliberately making their lives worse.
Backstory: Aki lived a normal childhood with his father, mother and older sister, but at the age of 6, his parents got divorced and he got scared and life was tougher for him. Whenever he visited his father, he would get drunk at night and hit them both and do worse to his sister, whilst his mother worked in the mornings but brought new guys home every night, the events would traumatize Aki and his "imaginary friend" Haise would comfort Aki during these tough times, eventually this would cause Aki and Haise to merge becoming Xero, which was the persona for Aki to let his anger out. By the age of 15, Aki's life went back to semi-normal, his mother got remarried and had a new child, while his father got into good trades and became a successful business man, but Aki was different he began using his Xero persona to fight biker gangs in the streets of Tokyo. He became the cold One Eyed King, starting his own biker gang. He once nearly beat a opposing biker leader to death.
Champion Ares: A Attack Type Layer features three hugs blades similar in shape to Savior Valkyrie. It has rubber that is in between the three main blades, it also has a decent amount of metal placed evenly around the entire blade. It also features a gimmick, if you unlock the layer you can twist a metal burst stopper out but due to it, it unevenly moves metal placed within the layer. It has three hard locks similar to that of the ValkyrieII DB Core.
Vurn': A shorter height attack type driver, that features a soft rubber star in the shape of Merge's rubber or R2F. It, like most dash drivers, features a gold spring and red cap that makes the clicks tougher.
Aki owns a Honda CBR250RR Sports Bike, and currently runs the Xero Biker Gang.
Age: 19
Birthday: August 9th
Height: 5' 9"
Appearance: Somewhat short to medium length black hair, similar to that of Haise Sasaki(Ken Kaneki)'s first hairstyle. Wears glasses due to somewhat bad closer sight problems, usually wears a white shirt with a grenade pictured on it, black or gray sweatpants and a black jacket that reaches a bit higher then his knees. He wears black and red high tops, and has a lip ring on the edge of right side of his mouth, a black stud ear piercing on his left ear and a skeleton hand tattoo on his right hand.
Personality: Depends on his personality.
Aki: Kind and caring to his friends and tries to help them, and will go out of the way to make their lives easier even if his is worse due to that.
Xero/Haise: If Aki feel weak or powerless, his inner struggles force him to become Xero. When he is like this, he only works for himself and is cold to most people. Sometimes even deliberately making their lives worse.
Backstory: Aki lived a normal childhood with his father, mother and older sister, but at the age of 6, his parents got divorced and he got scared and life was tougher for him. Whenever he visited his father, he would get drunk at night and hit them both and do worse to his sister, whilst his mother worked in the mornings but brought new guys home every night, the events would traumatize Aki and his "imaginary friend" Haise would comfort Aki during these tough times, eventually this would cause Aki and Haise to merge becoming Xero, which was the persona for Aki to let his anger out. By the age of 15, Aki's life went back to semi-normal, his mother got remarried and had a new child, while his father got into good trades and became a successful business man, but Aki was different he began using his Xero persona to fight biker gangs in the streets of Tokyo. He became the cold One Eyed King, starting his own biker gang. He once nearly beat a opposing biker leader to death.
Champion Ares: A Attack Type Layer features three hugs blades similar in shape to Savior Valkyrie. It has rubber that is in between the three main blades, it also has a decent amount of metal placed evenly around the entire blade. It also features a gimmick, if you unlock the layer you can twist a metal burst stopper out but due to it, it unevenly moves metal placed within the layer. It has three hard locks similar to that of the ValkyrieII DB Core.
Vurn': A shorter height attack type driver, that features a soft rubber star in the shape of Merge's rubber or R2F. It, like most dash drivers, features a gold spring and red cap that makes the clicks tougher.
Aki owns a Honda CBR250RR Sports Bike, and currently runs the Xero Biker Gang.
Here’s the system for Beyblade Burst Time warp
Time Layer: Has electric gimmicks
Disk: Self explanatory
Driver: Self Explanatory
This series will debut soon and will run alongside Beyblade Burst Eruption.
Beyblade Burst Timewarp Episode 1
Time Out! Birth Of The Heroes!
It is the year 2070 and everywhere is literally destroyed
Kali: Oh my goodness!
Conner: I can’t believe this our parents kicked us out of the house into this!?
Random Dude comes up to the siblings
Random Dude: Hey girl boy give me your money
Conner: But we don’t have-
Kali: Relax I got this…
Kali: Our money is over there
Kali points to a destroyed building
Random Dude: Wait what!?
The robber looks at the building and the moment he turns back the kid’s are gone.
Random Dude: Where those idiots go!?
Kali and Conner are running
Kali: KEEP RUNNING!!!
Conner: I’m trying…
Conner stops
Conner: I can’t go further!
Kali rolls eyes
Kali: This is why I play sports and you don’t!
Conner: Oh shut up sis! We have bigger things to worry about right now!
???: Hey!!!
The siblings scream then turn around
Oldy: My name is Oldy and great bey doctor! I know what’s going on to the world!
Kali: Why is this the world like this now!?
Oldy: An evil organization began an apocalypse thanks to their beys.
Conner: Seriously! Beyblade did this!? No wonder our parents hate it…
Oldy: But I have created the beys of time travel! Use these beys Time Kratos and Warp Chronos the. Timewarp system beys
The man pulls them out of his pockets
Kali: Why is!?
???: HEY WHO’S THERE!!!!
Oldy: No time!!!!
Oldy gives Kali and Conner the beys and portal appears behind them.
Conner: What!
Oldy pushes Kali and Conner into the portal
The siblings: Noooooooo!!!!!!!!!
Next Episode:
Timewarp! Kratos and Chronos!
Ratings would be highly appreciated
Remember eruption character contest is still going!
Time Layer: Has electric gimmicks
Disk: Self explanatory
Driver: Self Explanatory
This series will debut soon and will run alongside Beyblade Burst Eruption.
Beyblade Burst Timewarp Episode 1
Time Out! Birth Of The Heroes!
It is the year 2070 and everywhere is literally destroyed
Kali: Oh my goodness!
Conner: I can’t believe this our parents kicked us out of the house into this!?
Random Dude comes up to the siblings
Random Dude: Hey girl boy give me your money
Conner: But we don’t have-
Kali: Relax I got this…
Kali: Our money is over there
Kali points to a destroyed building
Random Dude: Wait what!?
The robber looks at the building and the moment he turns back the kid’s are gone.
Random Dude: Where those idiots go!?
Kali and Conner are running
Kali: KEEP RUNNING!!!
Conner: I’m trying…
Conner stops
Conner: I can’t go further!
Kali rolls eyes
Kali: This is why I play sports and you don’t!
Conner: Oh shut up sis! We have bigger things to worry about right now!
???: Hey!!!
The siblings scream then turn around
Oldy: My name is Oldy and great bey doctor! I know what’s going on to the world!
Kali: Why is this the world like this now!?
Oldy: An evil organization began an apocalypse thanks to their beys.
Conner: Seriously! Beyblade did this!? No wonder our parents hate it…
Oldy: But I have created the beys of time travel! Use these beys Time Kratos and Warp Chronos the. Timewarp system beys
The man pulls them out of his pockets
Kali: Why is!?
???: HEY WHO’S THERE!!!!
Oldy: No time!!!!
Oldy gives Kali and Conner the beys and portal appears behind them.
Conner: What!
Oldy pushes Kali and Conner into the portal
The siblings: Noooooooo!!!!!!!!!
Next Episode:
Timewarp! Kratos and Chronos!
Ratings would be highly appreciated
Remember eruption character contest is still going!
Here’s the schedule for new beyblade burst eruption and Timewarp episodes: Eruption and Timewarp will flip flop back and forth for new episodes so Eruption will have episode 7 then Timewarp will have episode 2.
Beyblade Burst Eruption Episode 7
Valt vs Vick!
Valt: Okay! Since I battled Clara And Lin it’s my turn to battle you!
Vick smiles
Vick: Yeah no problem
Lin: I guess I’ll be ref or whatever!
Lin: First Battle!
Vick (thoughts): I have to think of a way to conquer Valkyrie!
Valt(thoughts): Let’s see what you got Vick!
Lin: Ready set!
3..2…1.. Let it rip!
Vulcan and Valkyrie both enter stadium then both go straight for a head on collision.
Vick: Okay Let’s Go! Erupt Crush!
Valt: Knight Slash!
Both Valkyrie and Vulcan crash and are both knocked back
Vick makes shocked face
Valt blue aurora appears
Valt: Ahhh! Valkyrie!
Valkyrie flares out
Valkyrie avatar appears
Vick: Let’s Do This! Vulcan!
Vulcan flares out
Vulcan avatar appears
Vick begins showing and red aurora
Vick: Let’s try this one more time! Erupt Crush!
Vick does animation where he takes both of his hands that make blue trial and takes puts them together
Valt: Knight Slash!
Valt does animation where he takes his hands and does a slash effect
Vulcan and Valkyrie clash in center of stadium with full force.
Valt and Vick: Ahhhhhhhh!
Valkyrie knocks Vulcan in air
Vick: Nooo…
Vulcan bursts
Lin: Valkyrie with a burst finish! Valt’s the winner 2 points!
Clara: I don’t think that’s how you say-
Lin: Shut up I know what I’m doing.
Vick takes Vulcan parts disappointed
Valt: Hey don’t be sad you did a great job.
Vick does a lot smile
Valt: I know what would cheer you up let’s go to bc sol!
Vick begins to smile
Vick: Really!
Valt smiles
Valt: Up!
Clara: Can we go to!?
Valt: Of course!
Lin: Haha! This is gonna be awesome!!!!
Next Episode
Free Returns!
Ratings would be highly appreciated and character contest still continues!
Beyblade Burst Eruption Future Episode Titles
8. Free Returns!
9. Magical! Mystic Fafnir!
10. Lin vs Free!
Beyblade Burst Timewarp Future Episode Titles
2. Timewarp! Kratos and Chronos!
3. King Of Defense! Protect Kerbeus!
4. Uranus Awakens!
Beyblade Burst Eruption Episode 7
Valt vs Vick!
Valt: Okay! Since I battled Clara And Lin it’s my turn to battle you!
Vick smiles
Vick: Yeah no problem
Lin: I guess I’ll be ref or whatever!
Lin: First Battle!
Vick (thoughts): I have to think of a way to conquer Valkyrie!
Valt(thoughts): Let’s see what you got Vick!
Lin: Ready set!
3..2…1.. Let it rip!
Vulcan and Valkyrie both enter stadium then both go straight for a head on collision.
Vick: Okay Let’s Go! Erupt Crush!
Valt: Knight Slash!
Both Valkyrie and Vulcan crash and are both knocked back
Vick makes shocked face
Valt blue aurora appears
Valt: Ahhh! Valkyrie!
Valkyrie flares out
Valkyrie avatar appears
Vick: Let’s Do This! Vulcan!
Vulcan flares out
Vulcan avatar appears
Vick begins showing and red aurora
Vick: Let’s try this one more time! Erupt Crush!
Vick does animation where he takes both of his hands that make blue trial and takes puts them together
Valt: Knight Slash!
Valt does animation where he takes his hands and does a slash effect
Vulcan and Valkyrie clash in center of stadium with full force.
Valt and Vick: Ahhhhhhhh!
Valkyrie knocks Vulcan in air
Vick: Nooo…
Vulcan bursts
Lin: Valkyrie with a burst finish! Valt’s the winner 2 points!
Clara: I don’t think that’s how you say-
Lin: Shut up I know what I’m doing.
Vick takes Vulcan parts disappointed
Valt: Hey don’t be sad you did a great job.
Vick does a lot smile
Valt: I know what would cheer you up let’s go to bc sol!
Vick begins to smile
Vick: Really!
Valt smiles
Valt: Up!
Clara: Can we go to!?
Valt: Of course!
Lin: Haha! This is gonna be awesome!!!!
Next Episode
Free Returns!
Ratings would be highly appreciated and character contest still continues!
Beyblade Burst Eruption Future Episode Titles
8. Free Returns!
9. Magical! Mystic Fafnir!
10. Lin vs Free!
Beyblade Burst Timewarp Future Episode Titles
2. Timewarp! Kratos and Chronos!
3. King Of Defense! Protect Kerbeus!
4. Uranus Awakens!
Has the final member of the top 3 been decided or are you waiting for someone to post something top 3 worthy?