NOTE: Before I start this story, special moves and beyblades are changed so they won't be exactly the same as th anime moves and anime. Enjoy!

Part 1

Josh: XD Saggitario Killer Claw!
Little kid: Whoa your strong!
Josh: Thanks, you to!
???: Hey, Josh there is a new Blader.
Josh: Where is he Cian?
Cian: He is at the harbour.
Josh: Ok I can't wait to battle him! *Runs off*.
Cian: Be careful he beat ten bladers at once! Who cares....

*At Harbour*

Josh: :\ Where is he?
???: You looking for me?
Josh: Whoa who are you?
???: The name is Ace. Nice to meet you!
Josh: Well I came here to have a battle with you!
Ace: I accept.
Josh: XD Three!
Ace: Two!
Both: One! LET IT RIP!
Crowd: *Shows up*. GO JOSH!
Josh: Attack Saggitario with full power!
Ace: Pegasus! Grind down and attack from behind!
Josh: Saggitario!
Ace: Pegasus, knock him out!
*Saggitario gets knocked out up into the sky*
Josh: Saggitario get on the side of the stadium!
*Saggitario lands on the side of the stadium*
Ace: XD Your lucky!
Josh: Phew...
Ace: Attack Pegasus!
*Pegasus does sliding shoot technic*
Josh: Dodge them all Saggitario!
*Saggitario dodges all of Pegasus's attacks*
Ace: Your good!
Josh: This isn't my full power yet! Saggitario Killer Claw!
*Saggitario hits Pegasus up to the sky*
Josh: Whoa I thought you would be more of a fight!
Ace: XD I'm not done!!!
Josh: You gotta be joking!
Ace:
Josh:
Ace: XD Pegasus Windblast Attack!
*Saggitario gets hit out of the stadium*
Josh: Whoa...
Crowd:
Ace: Unexpected huh?

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4 TIMES!!!!!!!!!!! NOW STOP BEING SUCH A BOSSY McWATERMELON,ALL YOU!!!!!!!!! ITS A GOOD COMBO! TRY IT OUT!!!! WHY DONCHA JUST SHUT THE F..........ront door. its wide open. =/

I like this.

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Thanks!

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4 TIMES!!!!!!!!!!! NOW STOP BEING SUCH A BOSSY McWATERMELON,ALL YOU!!!!!!!!! ITS A GOOD COMBO! TRY IT OUT!!!! WHY DONCHA JUST SHUT THE F..........ront door. its wide open. =/

*Pegasus does sliding shoot technic*
Haha, the sliding shoot is a launching technique. ^^
Also a bit too short.

But otherwise, not bad.
Also, what was with all the emoticons ? =P

Part 2

Josh: I-I can't believe I lost...
Cian: Well I told you to be careful.
Josh: :\ What?
Cian:
Josh: Whats with the face?
???: *Girl pops up*. *Looks at Saggitario*.
Josh: What are you doing!?!
???: I'm reserching your Bey.
Josh: You could have just asked!
Cian: :\ Say, whats your-
???: Kate!
Cian: Mind reader...
Kate: Why don't you show up at my shop? *Gives card*. See ya! *Goes off*.
Cian: That girl has got to lay off the sugar.
Josh: Agreed...

*At Josh's house*

Josh: :\ Cian, I just noticed you don't use your Earth Leone anymore.
Cian: Josh thats another story why don't we just go to Kate's shop.
Josh: *Sighs*. Ok but if she steps on my Bey your in trouble!

*At Kate's shop*

Kate: Hmmm. Killer Saggitario C145FS, nice combo.
Josh: I didn't pay you to jugde Saggitario, I paid for fixing him!
Kate: Ok, don't poop in your pants!
Cian: XD You got pwned by a girl! If she was wearing glasses and in a wheelchair you would be gone wait if she was a baby with-
Josh: Shut up Cian!
*Minutes later*
Kate: He is as good as new.
Josh: Thanks.
Kate: :\ So who is that guy that bet you?
Josh: *Sighs*. Ace.
Kate: Never heard of him.
Josh: Its because he is new.
Kate: Oh. Anyway does Cian have a Bey?
Cian: :\ Nope he doesn't. Wait why is the room bouncy?
Kate: *Makes hands like bunny ears*. CARAMELLDANSEN!
Josh & Cian:
Cian: Do you have this crazyness diesease or something?
*Music stops*
Kate: NO! THE DOCTOR TOLD ME TO REALESE MY EXCITEMENT FOR MY HEALTH!
Cian: Ok ok! Sheesh!

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*Pegasus does sliding shoot technic*
Haha, the sliding shoot is a launching technique. ^^
Also a bit too short.

But otherwise, not bad.
Also, what was with all the emoticons ? =P

The emoticons are for their expressions. Thanks

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4 TIMES!!!!!!!!!!! NOW STOP BEING SUCH A BOSSY McWATERMELON,ALL YOU!!!!!!!!! ITS A GOOD COMBO! TRY IT OUT!!!! WHY DONCHA JUST SHUT THE F..........ront door. its wide open. =/

Nice Story! I Love it

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Chuck Norris is Ginga.

Kate doesn't sound anything like Madoka...

It's decent, though...

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It's cool but can you add my character Zatch with his Earth Aqurio 145ED HF?

and mine later with flame leone df145ms
name James

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ScottPilgramWBO and Shadow shine 22, ok but can you tell me how they act like first?

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4 TIMES!!!!!!!!!!! NOW STOP BEING SUCH A BOSSY McWATERMELON,ALL YOU!!!!!!!!! ITS A GOOD COMBO! TRY IT OUT!!!! WHY DONCHA JUST SHUT THE F..........ront door. its wide open. =/

Okay so mine is a traveling blader.
He treats his Bey like a peice of crud.
He has a launcher with a String launcher with a bepointer attached.
He wears a cape and is very mysterios.
He hates every thing but you main charater's cheerfulness makes him leave your village saying I'll Be back then he has a smile on his face and he comes back a changed man.

Okay so mine is a traveling blader.
He treats his Bey like a peice of crud.
He has a launcher with a String launcher with a bepointer attached.
He wears a cape and is very mysterios.
He hates every thing but you main charater's cheerfulness makes him leave your village saying I'll Be back then he has a smile on his face and he comes back a changed man.

Good description, he'll be in the next part.

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4 TIMES!!!!!!!!!!! NOW STOP BEING SUCH A BOSSY McWATERMELON,ALL YOU!!!!!!!!! ITS A GOOD COMBO! TRY IT OUT!!!! WHY DONCHA JUST SHUT THE F..........ront door. its wide open. =/

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