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Bey Strike Episode 1: New Challenge. - Flames150 - Oct. 27, 2010

NOTE: Before I start this story, special moves and beyblades are changed so they won't be exactly the same as th anime moves and anime. Enjoy!

Part 1

Josh: XD Saggitario Killer Claw!
Little kid: Gasp Whoa your strong!
Josh: Tongue_out_wink Thanks, you to!
???: Gasp Hey, Josh there is a new Blader.
Josh: Stupid Where is he Cian?
Cian: Gasp He is at the harbour.
Josh: Eee Ok I can't wait to battle him! *Runs off*.
Cian: Gasp Be careful he beat ten bladers at once! Tired Who cares....

*At Harbour*

Josh: :\ Where is he?
???: Wink You looking for me?
Josh: Gasp Whoa who are you?
???: Stupid The name is Ace. Nice to meet you!
Josh: Pinching_eyes_2 Well I came here to have a battle with you!
Ace: Tongue_out_wink I accept.
Josh: XD Three!
Ace: Wink Two!
Both: One! LET IT RIP!
Crowd: Pinching_eyes_2 *Shows up*. GO JOSH!
Josh: Pinching_eyes_2 Attack Saggitario with full power!
Ace: Eee Pegasus! Grind down and attack from behind!
Josh: Gasp Saggitario!
Ace: Wink Pegasus, knock him out!
*Saggitario gets knocked out up into the sky*
Josh: Gasp Saggitario get on the side of the stadium!
*Saggitario lands on the side of the stadium*
Ace: XD Your lucky!
Josh: Tired Phew...
Ace: Wink Attack Pegasus!
*Pegasus does sliding shoot technic*
Josh: Angry Dodge them all Saggitario!
*Saggitario dodges all of Pegasus's attacks*
Ace: Tongue_out_wink Your good!
Josh: Pinching_eyes This isn't my full power yet! Saggitario Killer Claw!
*Saggitario hits Pegasus up to the sky*
Josh: Gasp Whoa I thought you would be more of a fight!
Ace: XD I'm not done!!!
Josh: Tired You gotta be joking!
Ace: Wink
Josh: Gasp
Ace: XD Pegasus Windblast Attack!
*Saggitario gets hit out of the stadium*
Josh: Gasp Whoa...
Crowd: Chocked_2
Ace: Stupid Unexpected huh?


RE: Bey Strike Episode 1: New Challenge. - Night - Oct. 27, 2010

I like this.


RE: Bey Strike Episode 1: New Challenge. - Flames150 - Oct. 27, 2010

(Oct. 27, 2010  1:02 PM)Night Wrote: I like this.
Thanks!


RE: Bey Strike Episode 1: New Challenge. - blah - Oct. 27, 2010

*Pegasus does sliding shoot technic*
Haha, the sliding shoot is a launching technique. ^^
Also a bit too short.

But otherwise, not bad.
Also, what was with all the emoticons ? =P


RE: Bey Strike Episode 1: New Challenge. - Flames150 - Oct. 27, 2010

Part 2

Josh: Gasp I-I can't believe I lost...
Cian: Confused Well I told you to be careful.
Josh: :\ What?
Cian: Speechless
Josh: Whats with the face?
???: *Girl pops up*. *Looks at Saggitario*.
Josh: Chocked_2 What are you doing!?!
???: Wut!? I'm reserching your Bey.
Josh: Chocked_2 You could have just asked!
Cian: :\ Say, whats your-
???: Cute Kate!
Cian: Tired Mind reader...
Kate: Eee Why don't you show up at my shop? *Gives card*. See ya! *Goes off*.
Cian: Confused That girl has got to lay off the sugar.
Josh: Tired Agreed...

*At Josh's house*

Josh: :\ Cian, I just noticed you don't use your Earth Leone anymore.
Cian: Speechless Josh thats another story why don't we just go to Kate's shop.
Josh: Confused *Sighs*. Ok but if she steps on my Bey your in trouble!

*At Kate's shop*

Kate: Speechless Hmmm. Killer Saggitario C145FS, nice combo.
Josh: Angry I didn't pay you to jugde Saggitario, I paid for fixing him!
Kate: Gasp Ok, don't poop in your pants!
Cian: XD You got pwned by a girl! If she was wearing glasses and in a wheelchair you would be gone wait if she was a baby with-
Josh: Pinching_eyes Shut up Cian!
*Minutes later*
Kate: Stupid He is as good as new.
Josh: Tired Thanks.
Kate: :\ So who is that guy that bet you?
Josh: Unhappy *Sighs*. Ace.
Kate: Gasp Never heard of him.
Josh: Unhappy Its because he is new.
Kate: Gasp Oh. Anyway does Cian have a Bey?
Cian: :\ Nope he doesn't. Wait why is the room bouncy?
Kate: Eee *Makes hands like bunny ears*. CARAMELLDANSEN!
Josh & Cian: Tired
Cian: Confused Do you have this crazyness diesease or something?
*Music stops*
Kate: Angry NO! THE DOCTOR TOLD ME TO REALESE MY EXCITEMENT FOR MY HEALTH!
Cian: Gasp Ok ok! Sheesh!
(Oct. 27, 2010  1:18 PM)blah Wrote: *Pegasus does sliding shoot technic*
Haha, the sliding shoot is a launching technique. ^^
Also a bit too short.

But otherwise, not bad.
Also, what was with all the emoticons ? =P
The emoticons are for their expressions. Thanks


RE: Bey Strike Episode 1: New Challenge. - Yu Tendou - Oct. 29, 2010

Nice Story! I Love it


RE: Bey Strike Episode 1: New Challenge. - Dude - Oct. 29, 2010

Kate doesn't sound anything like Madoka...

It's decent, though...


RE: Bey Strike Episode 1: New Challenge. - ScottPilgrimWBO - Oct. 29, 2010

It's cool but can you add my character Zatch with his Earth Aqurio 145ED HF?


RE: Bey Strike Episode 1: New Challenge. - Shadow shine 22 - Oct. 29, 2010

and mine later with flame leone df145ms
name James


RE: Bey Strike Episode 1: New Challenge. - Flames150 - Oct. 29, 2010

ScottPilgramWBO and Shadow shine 22, ok but can you tell me how they act like first?


RE: Bey Strike Episode 1: New Challenge. - ScottPilgrimWBO - Oct. 29, 2010

Okay so mine is a traveling blader.
He treats his Bey like a peice of crud.
He has a launcher with a String launcher with a bepointer attached.
He wears a cape and is very mysterios.
He hates every thing but you main charater's cheerfulness makes him leave your village saying I'll Be back then he has a smile on his face and he comes back a changed man.


RE: Bey Strike Episode 1: New Challenge. - Flames150 - Oct. 30, 2010

(Oct. 29, 2010  10:20 PM)ScottPilgrimWBO Wrote: Okay so mine is a traveling blader.
He treats his Bey like a peice of crud.
He has a launcher with a String launcher with a bepointer attached.
He wears a cape and is very mysterios.
He hates every thing but you main charater's cheerfulness makes him leave your village saying I'll Be back then he has a smile on his face and he comes back a changed man.
Good description, he'll be in the next part.


RE: Bey Strike Episode 1: New Challenge. - ScottPilgrimWBO - Oct. 31, 2010

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