[Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests]

Poll: Is my story good?

Masterpiece!
38.46%
5
Epic!
30.77%
4
Okay
30.77%
4
Meh
0%
0
Disgusting
0%
0
Total: 100% 13 vote(s)
Hey this is my story!
Chapter 1, A Victor's Beginning (Click to View)
Chapter 2/Shadow's Power (Click to View)
Chapter 3/Teamwork (Click to View)
A New Friend, and a New Opponent!/Chapter 4 (Click to View)
Ruki's Spirit/Chapter 5 (Click to View)
Told from Mike's point of view
Chapter 7/ Aime's Wrath (Click to View)

Chapter 8/The Golem's Power (Click to View)
Here it is!
Chapter 9!
Chapter 9/Emerge! Dark Knight's Attack! (Click to View)

Chapter 10/ The Greek Team (Click to View)

Chapter 11/ The Special Match (Click to View)
This Chapter is told in Ruki's point of view
Chapter 12/Ireland's Team (Click to View)
Chapter 13/ Mike's Potential (Click to View)
Chapter 14/Striker's Illusions (Click to View)
Chapter 15/Ireland's Last Clash (Click to View)
Chapter 16/ The Dark Nova Association (Click to View)
Chapter 17/The Darkness Emerges (Click to View)
This Chapter is told in Ruki's point of View
Chapter 18/Locked Up (Click to View)
Still in Ruki
Chapter 19/ Corrupted Souls (Click to View)
Told in Mike's POF
The Sacrifice/Chapter 20 (Click to View)






Format for Requests:
Name:
Gender:
Looks:
Personality:
Bey:
Type:
Special Move:


Leave feedback bros!
*Brofist*
Eh, could use some work, but I like the storyline right off the bat. Here's my Character!!

Name: Adrian Berdych (Male)

Appearance: A white Shirt, blue jeans, White sneakers, and bushy Brown Hair. Also wearing an expensive watch...

Personality: Is very cocky, and gets agitated when thing don't go his way...

Bey: Orojya Killerken AD145SB (Defense)

Special Moves: Flaming Serpent Strike, Attack of the Cracken
Interesting... 1 thing.
If it's gonna be Dragooon, wouldn't it be Ifraid Dragooon and not Dragooon Ifraid? Lol.

Character Request
Name: Ruki Takanori
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Appearance: He has white, spiky hair, with black streaks, and blue eyes. He is wearing a white, long sleeve shirt with a coller, a black, sleeveless jacket, black skinny jeans, and black tennis shoes. He also has a piercing on his left ear.
Personality: He is an over all nice person, but has a dark side. He enjoys metal music and anything that's goth or emo. He loves to battle and is the number 3 blader in Japan, his homeland. He also enjoys singing metal music. You can sometimes find him playing his electric guitar. His favorite band is The Gazette.
Bey: Gryph Gargole E230CS
Type: Balance
Special Move: Upper Wind Burst (A stream of air surrounds his bey. The bey attacks and throws the bey into the air, causing it to fly out of the stadium.), Clawing Assult (Bey attacks oposing bey with a very fast barrage attack, draining opposing bey's spin.)

Brofist! Grin You got that from me! XD
I have a lot of time, here's chapter 2
Chapter 2/Shadow's Power (Click to View)
Sorry for short chapter

Name:Zeo crown (real name:Zeo ray lotus)
bey:phoenic Gryph SA165 BMF
age:13
type:attack
appearence: where blue jeams with yellow lines going up and down and black sneakers and a white and black short sleeve button shirt with a blue t shirt
personality:He appear to be a nice and calm person but when his calcuations he change his battle style from attacking to barrage attacking and can be furious
special move:Time destroyer(there are more than 50 gryph and all the gryphs go into the sky and dive onto the opponent) and death claw (a speed attack so fast it is faster than time)
Name: Freud Emprunte (His last name is power in French)
Gender: Male
Looks: Blonde, wavy hair. Light blue eyes. Wears a red robe, decorated with jewels and badges (not too many though, just enough to look noble).
Personality: Very proud and intelligent. He has a short temper, but is smart enough not to "jump the gun". When in a battle, he is furious, even by evil's standards.
Bey: Dark Knight Pheonic S130 LRF
Type: Attack
Special Move: Boundless Rage, Dark Impale
I hope your story become successful

Chapter 3 Bros!
Chapter 3/Teamwork (Click to View)
Sweet! I'd love if Ruki appears more times through out the story!
(Jul. 23, 2012  9:06 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: Sweet! I'd love if Ruki appears more times through out the story!

He will, he will..
Mwahahahahahaha!

Chapter 4
A New Friend, and a New Opponent!/Chapter 4 (Click to View)
Sorry for shortness bros
Sorry for double post
Chapter 5
Ruki's Spirit/Chapter 5 (Click to View)
Heh I was kinda expecting the battle would last longer and im thinking zeo lost on purpose since he didnt use his special move but I hope and I can see zeo in more chapters and goodluck
I edited my post about zeo to give him a better description.

P.S Zeo real name is Zeo ray lotus.
He will be on (Don't look unless you want a sneak peek)
YEAH! RUKI! Confusedmug:
Name: Keenan Arcadia
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Looks: Keenan has long black hair which reaches up to his waist and covers half of his face showing to green eyes.Mostly wears White and Black hoodies/tracksuit also wears Black converses he also has siIver ring on index finger with KA carved into it.
Personality: Curious, very distinctive happy-go-lucky also when he gets mocked he gets very angry.
Bey: Sphere Orion 125 SR
Type: Defence
Special Move: Time Sphere *Orion switches from right spin to left spin but speeds up time for the beys making Orion go faster and stronger while other bey gets slower and weaker *
Immense Defence *Orion goes straight into the middle of the stadium and glows a Black and White aura any bey that attacks it gets blown back to the edge of the stadium*

By The Way Will Keenan Be On A Team?
Chapter 6
Chapter 6/ The Beginning of The Vanquishers (Click to View)
Confusing Frence names... Gah... My brain! @_@
Jkz. I liked this chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter!
how come Keenan isn't on yet but aside from that very good story so far loved it and again will Keenan
be on a team?
Keenan will be on when I want to, be patient bro, if not, get out
Chapter 7!!!!!
Told from Mike's point of view
Chapter 7/ Aime's Wrath (Click to View)
ChinaBlade can please force or ask people to post, what ever way you want to do it. Serious
Chapter 8!
Chapter 8/The Golem's Power (Click to View)
Sorry for dubble post
Epic! Ruki's awesome. Confusedmug:
How did you know I wanted to be on the French team? lemonkeyface.jpg Hah, but seriously, Freud is awesome.