a very nice and well written draft! the best one so far!
here are my suggestions
Quote: Drago II may be placed on Gravity, however this is not an intended use, nor is it effective in any known combination.
i know there isnt much, but you need to elaborate on this more. do you have a citation for this? also, say if L Drago II is compatabile with Lightning. Also say if these strange combinations still posses mode change/spin change, and then if possible, explain the uses of these customizations (if any at all)
Now for the Clear Wheel section, change "L Drago II" to " L Drago (II)" as the II shows that it is different from the original Ldrago wheel, but that the "II" is not present in the name, "Meteo L Drago LW105 LF"
Quote:L Drago II akin to L Drago, is exclusively left spin and also has the mode change function. These modes are Assault mode (in which the heads of L Drago II cover the gold jaws of Meteo) and Barrage mode(in which the heads of L Drago II cover the silver jaws of Meteo). Currently, there has been no noticeable difference in performance between Assault mode and Barrage mode.
here you must elaborate on the modes so much more. Rather than give brief descriptions of each mode in a run on sentence, seperate them. 1st, say there are 3 modes, and then name them. Then for each mode, create a sub paragraph for that specifc mode describing it physicaly and its current uses in the game.
The Meteo section could use a little more juice.
That is really it. No spelling or grammer errors from what i can see. I undertand that this bey has had little testing done to it, so i also understand that this information is relatively hard to elaborate on. And yet somehow, you made it work anyway.
Bravo to you Momiji! =D