[Fan Fiction] Beyblade Burst: Kiwami!

LegendJustice · Aug. 28, 2021 12:51 AM

(Aug. 28, 2021 12:44 AM)Beykid2.0 Wrote:
(Aug. 28, 2021 12:23 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: I edited it to a Kawmi bey

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Yeah...

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Kiryu Kazuma · Aug. 28, 2021 12:03 PM

Chapter 5:

Plus I'm not gonna take entries anymore cuz I've planned the plot from start to finish.

Here are all the Beys which are gonna appear in Kiwami

Spoiler (Click to View)

(Aug. 27, 2021 7:31 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I'll let you choose the moves. But I can add them if you want.

Character:

Spoiler (Click to View)
Name: William Thompson
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Appearance: He has dark brown hair with purple on the end, green eyes and glasses (It's not a stereotype I promise). He wears a purple T-shirt with golden details, on the middle it has golden camera lens with the text "Smile! You're being watched." Under it. He also wears green jeans and purple shoes.
Personality: His social skills are really bad, but he's also very kind and loves blading. He is very obedient to the rules (of basically anything). He is very careful and can't do anything without a plan or instructions in mind. He tries to be away from people, but he doesn't mind being near them. He is so careful that he can't improvise even by a little. When he's battling, he always tries to surprise the opponents, making them lose focus and then increasing his winning chance. (kinda lazy bio, but that's what I can do for now. you can edit minor things to match your writing style or the plot)
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Bey:

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Kiwami Core - Wyvern: It has 3 medium teeth and 1 tall teeth at the beginning. The motif is the flying dragon, Wyvern.

Kiwami Weight - Tungsten (Tn): It's a Kiwami weight made entirely of Tungsten. It is hollowed but still can give a big amount of weight due to Tungsten density (I think). It gives CWD. Color: smae as Terrraria tungsten.

Kiwami Blade - Twister: A right spin, defense type blade. It features 8 blades that can free-spin, when the armor is inside, the blades lock up, increasing attack. Four out of these blades have rubber. Twister free spins to both sides, unlike Jet. Color: Purple, green and some gold.

Kiwami Armor - Wind: Wind is a average weight armor and features rubber around it and is only compatible with some Kiwami beys, including Twister Wyvern. When put outside, It gives the blade rubber (and on Twister, it makes the layer completely circular). When put inside, it makes friction with the disc tabs, improving burst resistance. Color: same as Terraria tungsten, with purple rubber.

Neo Discs - either Π or π : π is a Kiwami disc. It is one of the heaviest discs, having 44.95g. It shape is similar to Ring, except bulkier and supporting high and low mode. It has the biggest OWD in the beyblade meta.

Driver - Exact: Exact features a sharp tip (Like awakened Just) and a outer ring around it, akin to it's precessor Just. Unlike Just, the free-spinning ring has a bearing and has rubber. In theory, when it makes contact with the stadium, it would reduce stamina loss, increase LAD and make the bey more stationary. The sharp tip is made out of metal to minimize stamina loss. The bey cannot scrape and/or make disc contact with the floor, due to Exact plate diameter.

Overall performance: With Armor out: Can absorb attacks and can't spin equalize. Smashing is it's weakness.
With armor in: Can spin equalize (does not have rubber, but a round design) and Can't absorb attacks. Trying to burst it is useless, but you can try outspin it (if you have enough stamina) or hit from above when Exact tilts, making it lose more balance.

Ok I'll decide the moves, but can I change Tungsten weight's name to 10 or 14?

Hollowmind13 · Aug. 28, 2021 1:55 PM

(Aug. 28, 2021 12:03 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 15:

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Chapter 6: Thunderbolt! Starlight Zeus!

Ben: I'm gonna make you cry this time for sure!

Zeno (Came near the stadium): I wanna join in too.

Ben (Looks at Zeno): I'll take you on, when I bea-

Zeno: The battle would be more fun with three beys on the stadium... (Smiles) I wonder who'll steal the spotlight out of the three beys...

Watashi (Smirks): I guess you meant to say four!

Fubuki: A battle royale?

Ichiban (Smiles): That would be more fun!

Zeno (Shows his bey): This is... Starlight Zeus!

Ichiban (Gasps): A stamina type....

Ben (Takes his shoot stance): Belial is gonna make all of you cry!

Zeno (Flips his hair): Crying is for kids, shorty.

Ichiban: Icarus will send all of you flying!

Watashi (looks at Ben and switches to lower mode): (I won't let you get the better of me this time!)

Zeno: (Switches to Upper mode)

Fubuki: ALright then. Ready, set!

"3! 2! 1!"

Watashi: (Catches the launcher with his right hand)

"Go... Shoot!!"

(Zeus quickly takes the center)

Watashi: Awaken your inner demon! Wendigo!

(Wendigo rides along the edge of stadium and rams on Belial)

Ben: Belial!

(Belial counters by leaning it's driver with the help of V-gear)

Ben: Is that all you can do?

Watashi (with a stunned look): Tch!

Ichiban: Amaze Strike!!

(Icarus leans on it's driver, generating sparks and rushes towards Zeus)

Zeno (Smiles): That attack won't work on Zeus.

(Icarus hits Zeus with all it's force, but couldn't move Zeus from the center)

Ichiban (Gasps): It didn't even budged!

(Wendigo's driver hits the edge of the stadium)

Watashi: Moment Crash!

(Wendigo Crashes on Belial's Nexa disk)

Ben: None of your trick will work on Belial!

(Belial's uses it's disk and starts to absorb spin from Wendigo)

Watashi (Gasps): What the?!

Ben: (Laughs)

Ichiban: Icarus!

(Icarus crashes on Belial and moves both of them away)

(Wendigo hits Zeus and bursts, and moves it away from the center)

Watashi: No way...!

Zeno (Smiles): Time for the finishing blow!

Ben (Looks at Ichiban): Come at me with all you've got!

Ichiban (Smiles): You bet!

(Icarus and Belial rushes towards each other, while Zeus circles around the stadium)

(Both Ichiban and Ben screams at the same time)

- Aviate Slash!

- True Oni Bomber!

Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Blow them away, Zeus!

(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt shaped staff)

Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!

(Icarus and Belial were about to clash, but Zeus interupts and rams on both of them and sends them flying)

(Icarus bursts and Belial got knocked out of the stadium)

Ichiban (Makes a angry look): I can't believe thissssss!! (Fells down on the ground)

Fubuki (Stares at Belial): (Looks like the lock of the bey is more secure now...)

Fubuki: The winner of the battle royale is Zeno Syagrios!

Ben (Looks at Zeno): It was just a fluke, I would've burst Icarus if it weren't for you!

Zeno (Smiles): Then how about you take me on again?

Ben: This time I'm really gonna make ya cry! (Takes his shoot stance)

Zeno (Takes his shoot stance): You can't even move Zeus from the center.

Ichiban (Crosses his hands): I wanna battle too!!

Watashi (looks at Ichiban): He must have taken an interest on Belial...

Fubuki: Belial just have so many abilities... There's no one who won't be interested in this kind of bey.

Fubuki: Anyways, First Battle! Ready, Set!

"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"

(Zeus circles around the outer edge and quickly takes the center)

Ben (Covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!

(Belial lands a barrage of fierceful attacks but couldn't move Zeus from the center)

Zeno (Smiles): There's no way Belial can move Zeus even an inch!

Ben: Belial is just getting started!

(Belial's MD armor shines)

Ben: True Oni Bomber!

(Belial lands a devastating blow on Zeus and moves it away from the center)

Ichiban (Gasps): It moved?!

Zeno (Smirks and snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!

Ben: One more time! True Oni Bomber!

(Zeus and Ben clashes at the center and both gets blown away, both Belial and Zeus began to spin slower)

Ben: (Gasps)

Zeno: You can't beat Zeus in terms of stamina! Starlight Shoot!

(Starlight Blade's Metal balls moves outwards)

(Belial rans out of stamina and stops spinnng)

Ben: Tch!

Fubuki: Starlight Zeus! Spin finish, Zeno Syagrios earns one point!

Ben (Picks up Belial): It's not gonna happen again! (He Switches the Nexa Disk to Free Spin Mode)

Fubuki: Second Battle, Ready Set!

"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"

(Zeus circles around the outer edge and takes the center)

Ben: This time.. I'm gonna finish this with one blow! (His bright black aura erupts as he said these words)

Ben: Belial! (Belial appears from the bright black aura)

Ben: True Oni Bomber!!

Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Zeus!

(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt staff)

(Belial lands a powerful blow and knocks Zeus away from the stadium)

Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!

(Zeus circles around the stadium and hits Belial's Disk)

Ben: Nexa Spin!

(Belial counters the attack with his nexa disk and sends Zeus out of the stadium)

Zeno: (Gasps)

Fubuki: Oni Belial! Spin Finish, now the score is 1-1!

Ben (Laughs): You see? That's Belial's true power!

Zeno ('s phone makes a beep sound): (He checks his phone) Oh we're in South Korea right now.

Fubuki: No need to be worry. It's not our first destina-

Zeno (Picks up his bag): That's not it. I have to perform a song there.

Ichiban (Looks at Zeno): A song?

Ben (Screams): What about our battle?

Zeno: Sorry, shorty. But I'm in a bit of hurry.

(He climbs the railing of the air deck)

Zeno (Looks down at the stage): My destination is there.

Ichiban (Gasps): Aren't you gonna...

Watashi: Fell!?

Zeno (Smiles): That's the main reason I'm standing here. Bye Bye now!

(He jumps from the railing and fells down)

~ At The Concert ~

Random guy 1 (Looks at the entrance): I've waited for like 2 years for this moment! I'm finally gonna meet Zeno and shake his hand for sure!

Random guy 2: I want his autograph! And I'm gonna get it no matter what!

Random guy 1 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)

Random guy 2 (Looks at the other guy): What's the matter?

Random guy 1 (Points at the sky): L..look up!

Random guy 2 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)

Zeno (While wearing a parachute): Here I come everyone!

Zeno (Lands on the stage): (Makes a dab pose) Here I am!

Random guy 1 (Cries): My day... is ruined..

Random guy 2 (Looks on the ground): My autograph...

~At the air deck~

Ichiban (Looks at the Zeno): He's really an amazing guy!

Watashi: Or you could say crazy....

Fubuki (Smiles): It's not the first time since he pulled off a stunt like that.

Ben: That's not fair... He left before our battle could finish!

Fubuki (Smiles): You'll be able to battle him later.

Watashi: That's right! Kiwami League is gonna began in no time.

Fubuki: Let's get inside, it's getting dark.

(Everyone gets inside)

~Several hours later~

Fubuki: I guess you guys should sleep now. Tommorow is a big day. (He leaves)

Ichiban (Gets on his bed): What do ya think where will be our first destination?

Watashi (Gets on his bed): I don't know... sleep I'm very tired right now.

Ichiban (Looks at Ben): When are you planning to remove this mask?

Ben (While lying on his bed): ... Never!

Ichiban: This guy is really weird... (Looks at Watashi): What do you thi-

Watashi (while sleeping): (Snores)

Ichiban: Looks like I should sleep as well....

Ichiban (Picks up Icarus): I can't wait for tommorow, Icarus!

(Icarus shines)

[To Be Continued]

Next Chapter: Furious Blow! Noble Centaur!

Plus I'm not gonna take entries anymore cuz I've planned the plot from start to finish.

Here are all the Beys which are gonna appear in Kiwami

Spoiler (Click to View)

Aviate Icarus, Oni Belial, Ember Hyperion, Noble Centaur, Icicle Longinus (Attack)

Iris Mayura, Gloom Wendigo, Sovereign Lucifer, Twister Wyvern (Defense)

Starlight Zeus, Plasma Gilgamesh, Magenta Fafnir, Doomsday Ragnaruk (Stamina)

Mortal Spriggan, Legacy Dragon, Dual Yggdragon, Sovereign Astrios (Balance)

Evolutions:

Victory Icarus, Lightning Centaur and Star Astrios.

(Aug. 27, 2021 7:31 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I'll let you choose the moves. But I can add them if you want.

Character:

Spoiler (Click to View)
Name: William Thompson
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Appearance: He has dark brown hair with purple on the end, green eyes and glasses (It's not a stereotype I promise). He wears a purple T-shirt with golden details, on the middle it has golden camera lens with the text "Smile! You're being watched." Under it. He also wears green jeans and purple shoes.
Personality: His social skills are really bad, but he's also very kind and loves blading. He is very obedient to the rules (of basically anything). He is very careful and can't do anything without a plan or instructions in mind. He tries to be away from people, but he doesn't mind being near them. He is so careful that he can't improvise even by a little. When he's battling, he always tries to surprise the opponents, making them lose focus and then increasing his winning chance. (kinda lazy bio, but that's what I can do for now. you can edit minor things to match your writing style or the plot)
.
Bey:

Spoiler (Click to View)
Kiwami Core - Wyvern: It has 3 medium teeth and 1 tall teeth at the beginning. The motif is the flying dragon, Wyvern.

Kiwami Weight - Tungsten (Tn): It's a Kiwami weight made entirely of Tungsten. It is hollowed but still can give a big amount of weight due to Tungsten density (I think). It gives CWD. Color: smae as Terrraria tungsten.

Kiwami Blade - Twister: A right spin, defense type blade. It features 8 blades that can free-spin, when the armor is inside, the blades lock up, increasing attack. Four out of these blades have rubber. Twister free spins to both sides, unlike Jet. Color: Purple, green and some gold.

Kiwami Armor - Wind: Wind is a average weight armor and features rubber around it and is only compatible with some Kiwami beys, including Twister Wyvern. When put outside, It gives the blade rubber (and on Twister, it makes the layer completely circular). When put inside, it makes friction with the disc tabs, improving burst resistance. Color: same as Terraria tungsten, with purple rubber.

Neo Discs - either Π or π : π is a Kiwami disc. It is one of the heaviest discs, having 44.95g. It shape is similar to Ring, except bulkier and supporting high and low mode. It has the biggest OWD in the beyblade meta.

Driver - Exact: Exact features a sharp tip (Like awakened Just) and a outer ring around it, akin to it's precessor Just. Unlike Just, the free-spinning ring has a bearing and has rubber. In theory, when it makes contact with the stadium, it would reduce stamina loss, increase LAD and make the bey more stationary. The sharp tip is made out of metal to minimize stamina loss. The bey cannot scrape and/or make disc contact with the floor, due to Exact plate diameter.

Overall performance: With Armor out: Can absorb attacks and can't spin equalize. Smashing is it's weakness.
With armor in: Can spin equalize (does not have rubber, but a round design) and Can't absorb attacks. Trying to burst it is useless, but you can try outspin it (if you have enough stamina) or hit from above when Exact tilts, making it lose more balance.

Ok I'll decide the moves, but can I change Tungsten weight's name to 10 or 14?

Nice chapter, and sure. But it's whole gimmick is still the density? (It can be normal weighted, but i'd like if it was dense)

I'm the original creator of "Welcome to the WBO".
Rank 0 means I'm better than 1°

GenesisBlader · Aug. 28, 2021 2:10 PM

nice chapter! also cant wait for ichibans newfound rival to enter the stage!

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Kiryu Kazuma · Aug. 28, 2021 2:17 PM

(Aug. 28, 2021 2:10 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: nice chapter! also cant wait for ichibans newfound rival to enter the stage!

He's not a new rival lol

(Aug. 28, 2021 1:55 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Aug. 28, 2021 12:03 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 15:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Chapter 6: Thunderbolt! Starlight Zeus!

Ben: I'm gonna make you cry this time for sure!

Zeno (Came near the stadium): I wanna join in too.

Ben (Looks at Zeno): I'll take you on, when I bea-

Zeno: The battle would be more fun with three beys on the stadium... (Smiles) I wonder who'll steal the spotlight out of the three beys...

Watashi (Smirks): I guess you meant to say four!

Fubuki: A battle royale?

Ichiban (Smiles): That would be more fun!

Zeno (Shows his bey): This is... Starlight Zeus!

Ichiban (Gasps): A stamina type....

Ben (Takes his shoot stance): Belial is gonna make all of you cry!

Zeno (Flips his hair): Crying is for kids, shorty.

Ichiban: Icarus will send all of you flying!

Watashi (looks at Ben and switches to lower mode): (I won't let you get the better of me this time!)

Zeno: (Switches to Upper mode)

Fubuki: ALright then. Ready, set!

"3! 2! 1!"

Watashi: (Catches the launcher with his right hand)

"Go... Shoot!!"

(Zeus quickly takes the center)

Watashi: Awaken your inner demon! Wendigo!

(Wendigo rides along the edge of stadium and rams on Belial)

Ben: Belial!

(Belial counters by leaning it's driver with the help of V-gear)

Ben: Is that all you can do?

Watashi (with a stunned look): Tch!

Ichiban: Amaze Strike!!

(Icarus leans on it's driver, generating sparks and rushes towards Zeus)

Zeno (Smiles): That attack won't work on Zeus.

(Icarus hits Zeus with all it's force, but couldn't move Zeus from the center)

Ichiban (Gasps): It didn't even budged!

(Wendigo's driver hits the edge of the stadium)

Watashi: Moment Crash!

(Wendigo Crashes on Belial's Nexa disk)

Ben: None of your trick will work on Belial!

(Belial's uses it's disk and starts to absorb spin from Wendigo)

Watashi (Gasps): What the?!

Ben: (Laughs)

Ichiban: Icarus!

(Icarus crashes on Belial and moves both of them away)

(Wendigo hits Zeus and bursts, and moves it away from the center)

Watashi: No way...!

Zeno (Smiles): Time for the finishing blow!

Ben (Looks at Ichiban): Come at me with all you've got!

Ichiban (Smiles): You bet!

(Icarus and Belial rushes towards each other, while Zeus circles around the stadium)

(Both Ichiban and Ben screams at the same time)

- Aviate Slash!

- True Oni Bomber!

Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Blow them away, Zeus!

(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt shaped staff)

Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!

(Icarus and Belial were about to clash, but Zeus interupts and rams on both of them and sends them flying)

(Icarus bursts and Belial got knocked out of the stadium)

Ichiban (Makes a angry look): I can't believe thissssss!! (Fells down on the ground)

Fubuki (Stares at Belial): (Looks like the lock of the bey is more secure now...)

Fubuki: The winner of the battle royale is Zeno Syagrios!

Ben (Looks at Zeno): It was just a fluke, I would've burst Icarus if it weren't for you!

Zeno (Smiles): Then how about you take me on again?

Ben: This time I'm really gonna make ya cry! (Takes his shoot stance)

Zeno (Takes his shoot stance): You can't even move Zeus from the center.

Ichiban (Crosses his hands): I wanna battle too!!

Watashi (looks at Ichiban): He must have taken an interest on Belial...

Fubuki: Belial just have so many abilities... There's no one who won't be interested in this kind of bey.

Fubuki: Anyways, First Battle! Ready, Set!

"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"

(Zeus circles around the outer edge and quickly takes the center)

Ben (Covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!

(Belial lands a barrage of fierceful attacks but couldn't move Zeus from the center)

Zeno (Smiles): There's no way Belial can move Zeus even an inch!

Ben: Belial is just getting started!

(Belial's MD armor shines)

Ben: True Oni Bomber!

(Belial lands a devastating blow on Zeus and moves it away from the center)

Ichiban (Gasps): It moved?!

Zeno (Smirks and snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!

Ben: One more time! True Oni Bomber!

(Zeus and Ben clashes at the center and both gets blown away, both Belial and Zeus began to spin slower)

Ben: (Gasps)

Zeno: You can't beat Zeus in terms of stamina! Starlight Shoot!

(Starlight Blade's Metal balls moves outwards)

(Belial rans out of stamina and stops spinnng)

Ben: Tch!

Fubuki: Starlight Zeus! Spin finish, Zeno Syagrios earns one point!

Ben (Picks up Belial): It's not gonna happen again! (He Switches the Nexa Disk to Free Spin Mode)

Fubuki: Second Battle, Ready Set!

"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"

(Zeus circles around the outer edge and takes the center)

Ben: This time.. I'm gonna finish this with one blow! (His bright black aura erupts as he said these words)

Ben: Belial! (Belial appears from the bright black aura)

Ben: True Oni Bomber!!

Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Zeus!

(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt staff)

(Belial lands a powerful blow and knocks Zeus away from the stadium)

Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!

(Zeus circles around the stadium and hits Belial's Disk)

Ben: Nexa Spin!

(Belial counters the attack with his nexa disk and sends Zeus out of the stadium)

Zeno: (Gasps)

Fubuki: Oni Belial! Spin Finish, now the score is 1-1!

Ben (Laughs): You see? That's Belial's true power!

Zeno ('s phone makes a beep sound): (He checks his phone) Oh we're in South Korea right now.

Fubuki: No need to be worry. It's not our first destina-

Zeno (Picks up his bag): That's not it. I have to perform a song there.

Ichiban (Looks at Zeno): A song?

Ben (Screams): What about our battle?

Zeno: Sorry, shorty. But I'm in a bit of hurry.

(He climbs the railing of the air deck)

Zeno (Looks down at the stage): My destination is there.

Ichiban (Gasps): Aren't you gonna...

Watashi: Fell!?

Zeno (Smiles): That's the main reason I'm standing here. Bye Bye now!

(He jumps from the railing and fells down)

~ At The Concert ~

Random guy 1 (Looks at the entrance): I've waited for like 2 years for this moment! I'm finally gonna meet Zeno and shake his hand for sure!

Random guy 2: I want his autograph! And I'm gonna get it no matter what!

Random guy 1 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)

Random guy 2 (Looks at the other guy): What's the matter?

Random guy 1 (Points at the sky): L..look up!

Random guy 2 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)

Zeno (While wearing a parachute): Here I come everyone!

Zeno (Lands on the stage): (Makes a dab pose) Here I am!

Random guy 1 (Cries): My day... is ruined..

Random guy 2 (Looks on the ground): My autograph...

~At the air deck~

Ichiban (Looks at the Zeno): He's really an amazing guy!

Watashi: Or you could say crazy....

Fubuki (Smiles): It's not the first time since he pulled off a stunt like that.

Ben: That's not fair... He left before our battle could finish!

Fubuki (Smiles): You'll be able to battle him later.

Watashi: That's right! Kiwami League is gonna began in no time.

Fubuki: Let's get inside, it's getting dark.

(Everyone gets inside)

~Several hours later~

Fubuki: I guess you guys should sleep now. Tommorow is a big day. (He leaves)

Ichiban (Gets on his bed): What do ya think where will be our first destination?

Watashi (Gets on his bed): I don't know... sleep I'm very tired right now.

Ichiban (Looks at Ben): When are you planning to remove this mask?

Ben (While lying on his bed): ... Never!

Ichiban: This guy is really weird... (Looks at Watashi): What do you thi-

Watashi (while sleeping): (Snores)

Ichiban: Looks like I should sleep as well....

Ichiban (Picks up Icarus): I can't wait for tommorow, Icarus!

(Icarus shines)

[To Be Continued]

Next Chapter: Furious Blow! Noble Centaur!

Plus I'm not gonna take entries anymore cuz I've planned the plot from start to finish.

Here are all the Beys which are gonna appear in Kiwami

Spoiler (Click to View)

Aviate Icarus, Oni Belial, Ember Hyperion, Noble Centaur, Icicle Longinus (Attack)

Iris Mayura, Gloom Wendigo, Sovereign Lucifer, Twister Wyvern (Defense)

Starlight Zeus, Plasma Gilgamesh, Magenta Fafnir, Doomsday Ragnaruk (Stamina)

Mortal Spriggan, Legacy Dragon, Dual Yggdragon, Sovereign Astrios (Balance)

Evolutions:

Victory Icarus, Lightning Centaur and Star Astrios.

Ok I'll decide the moves, but can I change Tungsten weight's name to 10 or 14?
Nice chapter, and sure. But it's whole gimmick is still the density? (It can be normal weighted, but i'd like if it was dense)

I'm just changing the name. The gimmick will be the same.

GenesisBlader · Aug. 28, 2021 2:44 PM

(Aug. 28, 2021  2:17 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:
(Aug. 28, 2021  2:10 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: nice chapter! also cant wait for ichibans newfound rival to enter the stage!

He's not a new rival lol

(Aug. 28, 2021  1:55 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Nice chapter, and sure. But it's whole gimmick is still the density? (It can be normal weighted, but i'd like if it was dense)

I'm just changing the name. The gimmick will be the same.

lol i thought he was

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

i'm batman · Aug. 28, 2021 3:03 PM

How did I miss Chapter 4? No matter, reading two chapters in one sitting was almost worth the wait. I love that you inserted comedy btw, but I almost feel bad for the fanboys (keyword being almost).

DON'T CALL ME SHORT!1!!1!

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LegendJustice · Aug. 28, 2021 4:00 PM

When's chapter 5? Or did I already miss it lol

Anyways loved chapter 6!

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Kiryu Kazuma · Aug. 28, 2021 5:36 PM

(Aug. 28, 2021 4:00 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: When's chapter 5? Or did I already miss it lol

Anyways loved chapter 6!

It was chapter 5 (My bad... I typed 6 instead of 5)

GenesisBlader · Aug. 28, 2021 5:41 PM

dang the names are epic, cant wait for victory icar(i)us!

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Dark red · Aug. 28, 2021 9:30 PM

(Aug. 28, 2021 12:03 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 5:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Chapter 5: Thunderbolt! Starlight Zeus!

Ben: I'm gonna make you cry this time for sure!

Zeno (Came near the stadium): I wanna join in too.

Ben (Looks at Zeno): I'll take you on, when I bea-

Zeno: The battle would be more fun with three beys on the stadium... (Smiles) I wonder who'll steal the spotlight out of the three beys...

Watashi (Smirks): I guess you meant to say four!

Fubuki: A battle royale?

Ichiban (Smiles): That would be more fun!

Zeno (Shows his bey): This is... Starlight Zeus!

Ichiban (Gasps): A stamina type....

Ben (Takes his shoot stance): Belial is gonna make all of you cry!

Zeno (Flips his hair): Crying is for kids, shorty.

Ichiban: Icarus will send all of you flying!

Watashi (looks at Ben and switches to lower mode): (I won't let you get the better of me this time!)

Zeno: (Switches to Upper mode)

Fubuki: ALright then. Ready, set!

"3! 2! 1!"

Watashi: (Catches the launcher with his right hand)

"Go... Shoot!!"

(Zeus quickly takes the center)

Watashi: Awaken your inner demon! Wendigo!

(Wendigo rides along the edge of stadium and rams on Belial)

Ben: Belial!

(Belial counters by leaning it's driver with the help of V-gear)

Ben: Is that all you can do?

Watashi (with a stunned look): Tch!

Ichiban: Amaze Strike!!

(Icarus leans on it's driver, generating sparks and rushes towards Zeus)

Zeno (Smiles): That attack won't work on Zeus.

(Icarus hits Zeus with all it's force, but couldn't move Zeus from the center)

Ichiban (Gasps): It didn't even budged!

(Wendigo's driver hits the edge of the stadium)

Watashi: Moment Crash!

(Wendigo Crashes on Belial's Nexa disk)

Ben: None of your trick will work on Belial!

(Belial's uses it's disk and starts to absorb spin from Wendigo)

Watashi (Gasps): What the?!

Ben: (Laughs)

Ichiban: Icarus!

(Icarus crashes on Belial and moves both of them away)

(Wendigo hits Zeus and bursts, and moves it away from the center)

Watashi: No way...!

Zeno (Smiles): Time for the finishing blow!

Ben (Looks at Ichiban): Come at me with all you've got!

Ichiban (Smiles): You bet!

(Icarus and Belial rushes towards each other, while Zeus circles around the stadium)

(Both Ichiban and Ben screams at the same time)

- Aviate Slash!

- True Oni Bomber!

Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Blow them away, Zeus!

(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt shaped staff)

Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!

(Icarus and Belial were about to clash, but Zeus interupts and rams on both of them and sends them flying)

(Icarus bursts and Belial got knocked out of the stadium)

Ichiban (Makes a angry look): I can't believe thissssss!! (Fells down on the ground)

Fubuki (Stares at Belial): (Looks like the lock of the bey is more secure now...)

Fubuki: The winner of the battle royale is Zeno Syagrios!

Ben (Looks at Zeno): It was just a fluke, I would've burst Icarus if it weren't for you!

Zeno (Smiles): Then how about you take me on again?

Ben: This time I'm really gonna make ya cry! (Takes his shoot stance)

Zeno (Takes his shoot stance): You can't even move Zeus from the center.

Ichiban (Crosses his hands): I wanna battle too!!

Watashi (looks at Ichiban): He must have taken an interest on Belial...

Fubuki: Belial just have so many abilities... There's no one who won't be interested in this kind of bey.

Fubuki: Anyways, First Battle! Ready, Set!

"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"

(Zeus circles around the outer edge and quickly takes the center)

Ben (Covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!

(Belial lands a barrage of fierceful attacks but couldn't move Zeus from the center)

Zeno (Smiles): There's no way Belial can move Zeus even an inch!

Ben: Belial is just getting started!

(Belial's MD armor shines)

Ben: True Oni Bomber!

(Belial lands a devastating blow on Zeus and moves it away from the center)

Ichiban (Gasps): It moved?!

Zeno (Smirks and snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!

Ben: One more time! True Oni Bomber!

(Zeus and Ben clashes at the center and both gets blown away, both Belial and Zeus began to spin slower)

Ben: (Gasps)

Zeno: You can't beat Zeus in terms of stamina! Starlight Shoot!

(Starlight Blade's Metal balls moves outwards)

(Belial rans out of stamina and stops spinnng)

Ben: Tch!

Fubuki: Starlight Zeus! Spin finish, Zeno Syagrios earns one point!

Ben (Picks up Belial): It's not gonna happen again! (He Switches the Nexa Disk to Free Spin Mode)

Fubuki: Second Battle, Ready Set!

"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"

(Zeus circles around the outer edge and takes the center)

Ben: This time.. I'm gonna finish this with one blow! (His bright black aura erupts as he said these words)

Ben: Belial! (Belial appears from the bright black aura)

Ben: True Oni Bomber!!

Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Zeus!

(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt staff)

(Belial lands a powerful blow and knocks Zeus away from the stadium)

Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!

(Zeus circles around the stadium and hits Belial's Disk)

Ben: Nexa Spin!

(Belial counters the attack with his nexa disk and sends Zeus out of the stadium)

Zeno: (Gasps)

Fubuki: Oni Belial! Spin Finish, now the score is 1-1!

Ben (Laughs): You see? That's Belial's true power!

Zeno ('s phone makes a beep sound): (He checks his phone) Oh we're in South Korea right now.

Fubuki: No need to be worry. It's not our first destina-

Zeno (Picks up his bag): That's not it. I have to perform a song there.

Ichiban (Looks at Zeno): A song?

Ben (Screams): What about our battle?

Zeno: Sorry, shorty. But I'm in a bit of hurry.

(He climbs the railing of the air deck)

Zeno (Looks down at the stage): My destination is there.

Ichiban (Gasps): Aren't you gonna...

Watashi: Fell!?

Zeno (Smiles): That's the main reason I'm standing here. Bye Bye now!

(He jumps from the railing and fells down)

~ At The Concert ~

Random guy 1 (Looks at the entrance): I've waited for like 2 years for this moment! I'm finally gonna meet Zeno and shake his hand for sure!

Random guy 2: I want his autograph! And I'm gonna get it no matter what!

Random guy 1 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)

Random guy 2 (Looks at the other guy): What's the matter?

Random guy 1 (Points at the sky): L..look up!

Random guy 2 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)

Zeno (While wearing a parachute): Here I come everyone!

Zeno (Lands on the stage): (Makes a dab pose) Here I am!

Random guy 1 (Cries): My day... is ruined..

Random guy 2 (Looks on the ground): My autograph...

~At the air deck~

Ichiban (Looks at the Zeno): He's really an amazing guy!

Watashi: Or you could say crazy....

Fubuki (Smiles): It's not the first time since he pulled off a stunt like that.

Ben: That's not fair... He left before our battle could finish!

Fubuki (Smiles): You'll be able to battle him later.

Watashi: That's right! Kiwami League is gonna began in no time.

Fubuki: Let's get inside, it's getting dark.

(Everyone gets inside)

~Several hours later~

Fubuki: I guess you guys should sleep now. Tommorow is a big day. (He leaves)

Ichiban (Gets on his bed): What do ya think where will be our first destination?

Watashi (Gets on his bed): I don't know... sleep I'm very tired right now.

Ichiban (Looks at Ben): When are you planning to remove this mask?

Ben (While lying on his bed): ... Never!

Ichiban: This guy is really weird... (Looks at Watashi): What do you thi-

Watashi (while sleeping): (Snores)

Ichiban: Looks like I should sleep as well....

Ichiban (Picks up Icarus): I can't wait for tommorow, Icarus!

(Icarus shines)

[To Be Continued]

Next Chapter: Furious Blow! Noble Centaur!

Plus I'm not gonna take entries anymore cuz I've planned the plot from start to finish.

Here are all the Beys which are gonna appear in Kiwami

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Aviate Icarus, Oni Belial, Ember Hyperion, Noble Centaur, Icicle Longinus (Attack)

Iris Mayura, Gloom Wendigo, Sovereign Lucifer, Twister Wyvern (Defense)

Starlight Zeus, Plasma Gilgamesh, Magenta Fafnir, Doomsday Ragnaruk (Stamina)

Mortal Spriggan, Legacy Dragon, Dual Yggdragon, Sovereign Astrios (Balance)

Evolutions:

Victory Icarus, Lightning Centaur and Star Astrios.

(Aug. 27, 2021 7:31 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I'll let you choose the moves. But I can add them if you want.

Character:

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Name: William Thompson
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Appearance: He has dark brown hair with purple on the end, green eyes and glasses (It's not a stereotype I promise). He wears a purple T-shirt with golden details, on the middle it has golden camera lens with the text "Smile! You're being watched." Under it. He also wears green jeans and purple shoes.
Personality: His social skills are really bad, but he's also very kind and loves blading. He is very obedient to the rules (of basically anything). He is very careful and can't do anything without a plan or instructions in mind. He tries to be away from people, but he doesn't mind being near them. He is so careful that he can't improvise even by a little. When he's battling, he always tries to surprise the opponents, making them lose focus and then increasing his winning chance. (kinda lazy bio, but that's what I can do for now. you can edit minor things to match your writing style or the plot)
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Bey:

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Kiwami Core - Wyvern: It has 3 medium teeth and 1 tall teeth at the beginning. The motif is the flying dragon, Wyvern.

Kiwami Weight - Tungsten (Tn): It's a Kiwami weight made entirely of Tungsten. It is hollowed but still can give a big amount of weight due to Tungsten density (I think). It gives CWD. Color: smae as Terrraria tungsten.

Kiwami Blade - Twister: A right spin, defense type blade. It features 8 blades that can free-spin, when the armor is inside, the blades lock up, increasing attack. Four out of these blades have rubber. Twister free spins to both sides, unlike Jet. Color: Purple, green and some gold.

Kiwami Armor - Wind: Wind is a average weight armor and features rubber around it and is only compatible with some Kiwami beys, including Twister Wyvern. When put outside, It gives the blade rubber (and on Twister, it makes the layer completely circular). When put inside, it makes friction with the disc tabs, improving burst resistance. Color: same as Terraria tungsten, with purple rubber.

Neo Discs - either Π or π : π is a Kiwami disc. It is one of the heaviest discs, having 44.95g. It shape is similar to Ring, except bulkier and supporting high and low mode. It has the biggest OWD in the beyblade meta.

Driver - Exact: Exact features a sharp tip (Like awakened Just) and a outer ring around it, akin to it's precessor Just. Unlike Just, the free-spinning ring has a bearing and has rubber. In theory, when it makes contact with the stadium, it would reduce stamina loss, increase LAD and make the bey more stationary. The sharp tip is made out of metal to minimize stamina loss. The bey cannot scrape and/or make disc contact with the floor, due to Exact plate diameter.

Overall performance: With Armor out: Can absorb attacks and can't spin equalize. Smashing is it's weakness.
With armor in: Can spin equalize (does not have rubber, but a round design) and Can't absorb attacks. Trying to burst it is useless, but you can try outspin it (if you have enough stamina) or hit from above when Exact tilts, making it lose more balance.

Ok I'll decide the moves, but can I change Tungsten weight's name to 10 or 14?

Yes sir, we got 4 Stamina-Types in these story not just 2 or 3. I love to see it when Stamina-Types get some love too. It reminds me how awesome Stamina-Types were in the Metal Fight Saga.

Kiryu Kazuma · Aug. 31, 2021 11:42 AM

Chapter 6 Summary:

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Demon Belial · Sep. 01, 2021 6:42 AM

(Aug. 28, 2021 12:03 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 5:

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Chapter 5: Thunderbolt! Starlight Zeus!

Ben: I'm gonna make you cry this time for sure!

Zeno (Came near the stadium): I wanna join in too.

Ben (Looks at Zeno): I'll take you on, when I bea-

Zeno: The battle would be more fun with three beys on the stadium... (Smiles) I wonder who'll steal the spotlight out of the three beys...

Watashi (Smirks): I guess you meant to say four!

Fubuki: A battle royale?

Ichiban (Smiles): That would be more fun!

Zeno (Shows his bey): This is... Starlight Zeus!

Ichiban (Gasps): A stamina type....

Ben (Takes his shoot stance): Belial is gonna make all of you cry!

Zeno (Flips his hair): Crying is for kids, shorty.

Ichiban: Icarus will send all of you flying!

Watashi (looks at Ben and switches to lower mode): (I won't let you get the better of me this time!)

Zeno: (Switches to Upper mode)

Fubuki: ALright then. Ready, set!

"3! 2! 1!"

Watashi: (Catches the launcher with his right hand)

"Go... Shoot!!"

(Zeus quickly takes the center)

Watashi: Awaken your inner demon! Wendigo!

(Wendigo rides along the edge of stadium and rams on Belial)

Ben: Belial!

(Belial counters by leaning it's driver with the help of V-gear)

Ben: Is that all you can do?

Watashi (with a stunned look): Tch!

Ichiban: Amaze Strike!!

(Icarus leans on it's driver, generating sparks and rushes towards Zeus)

Zeno (Smiles): That attack won't work on Zeus.

(Icarus hits Zeus with all it's force, but couldn't move Zeus from the center)

Ichiban (Gasps): It didn't even budged!

(Wendigo's driver hits the edge of the stadium)

Watashi: Moment Crash!

(Wendigo Crashes on Belial's Nexa disk)

Ben: None of your trick will work on Belial!

(Belial's uses it's disk and starts to absorb spin from Wendigo)

Watashi (Gasps): What the?!

Ben: (Laughs)

Ichiban: Icarus!

(Icarus crashes on Belial and moves both of them away)

(Wendigo hits Zeus and bursts, and moves it away from the center)

Watashi: No way...!

Zeno (Smiles): Time for the finishing blow!

Ben (Looks at Ichiban): Come at me with all you've got!

Ichiban (Smiles): You bet!

(Icarus and Belial rushes towards each other, while Zeus circles around the stadium)

(Both Ichiban and Ben screams at the same time)

- Aviate Slash!

- True Oni Bomber!

Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Blow them away, Zeus!

(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt shaped staff)

Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!

(Icarus and Belial were about to clash, but Zeus interupts and rams on both of them and sends them flying)

(Icarus bursts and Belial got knocked out of the stadium)

Ichiban (Makes a angry look): I can't believe thissssss!! (Fells down on the ground)

Fubuki (Stares at Belial): (Looks like the lock of the bey is more secure now...)

Fubuki: The winner of the battle royale is Zeno Syagrios!

Ben (Looks at Zeno): It was just a fluke, I would've burst Icarus if it weren't for you!

Zeno (Smiles): Then how about you take me on again?

Ben: This time I'm really gonna make ya cry! (Takes his shoot stance)

Zeno (Takes his shoot stance): You can't even move Zeus from the center.

Ichiban (Crosses his hands): I wanna battle too!!

Watashi (looks at Ichiban): He must have taken an interest on Belial...

Fubuki: Belial just have so many abilities... There's no one who won't be interested in this kind of bey.

Fubuki: Anyways, First Battle! Ready, Set!

"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"

(Zeus circles around the outer edge and quickly takes the center)

Ben (Covers himself with his cape): Venture Shoot!

(Belial lands a barrage of fierceful attacks but couldn't move Zeus from the center)

Zeno (Smiles): There's no way Belial can move Zeus even an inch!

Ben: Belial is just getting started!

(Belial's MD armor shines)

Ben: True Oni Bomber!

(Belial lands a devastating blow on Zeus and moves it away from the center)

Ichiban (Gasps): It moved?!

Zeno (Smirks and snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!

Ben: One more time! True Oni Bomber!

(Zeus and Ben clashes at the center and both gets blown away, both Belial and Zeus began to spin slower)

Ben: (Gasps)

Zeno: You can't beat Zeus in terms of stamina! Starlight Shoot!

(Starlight Blade's Metal balls moves outwards)

(Belial rans out of stamina and stops spinnng)

Ben: Tch!

Fubuki: Starlight Zeus! Spin finish, Zeno Syagrios earns one point!

Ben (Picks up Belial): It's not gonna happen again! (He Switches the Nexa Disk to Free Spin Mode)

Fubuki: Second Battle, Ready Set!

"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"

(Zeus circles around the outer edge and takes the center)

Ben: This time.. I'm gonna finish this with one blow! (His bright black aura erupts as he said these words)

Ben: Belial! (Belial appears from the bright black aura)

Ben: True Oni Bomber!!

Zeno (Unleashes his sparkling gold aura): Zeus!

(Zeus appears from the aura, swinging his thunderbolt staff)

(Belial lands a powerful blow and knocks Zeus away from the stadium)

Zeno (Snaps his finger): Starlight Smash!

(Zeus circles around the stadium and hits Belial's Disk)

Ben: Nexa Spin!

(Belial counters the attack with his nexa disk and sends Zeus out of the stadium)

Zeno: (Gasps)

Fubuki: Oni Belial! Spin Finish, now the score is 1-1!

Ben (Laughs): You see? That's Belial's true power!

Zeno ('s phone makes a beep sound): (He checks his phone) Oh we're in South Korea right now.

Fubuki: No need to be worry. It's not our first destina-

Zeno (Picks up his bag): That's not it. I have to perform a song there.

Ichiban (Looks at Zeno): A song?

Ben (Screams): What about our battle?

Zeno: Sorry, shorty. But I'm in a bit of hurry.

(He climbs the railing of the air deck)

Zeno (Looks down at the stage): My destination is there.

Ichiban (Gasps): Aren't you gonna...

Watashi: Fell!?

Zeno (Smiles): That's the main reason I'm standing here. Bye Bye now!

(He jumps from the railing and fells down)

~ At The Concert ~

Random guy 1 (Looks at the entrance): I've waited for like 2 years for this moment! I'm finally gonna meet Zeno and shake his hand for sure!

Random guy 2: I want his autograph! And I'm gonna get it no matter what!

Random guy 1 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)

Random guy 2 (Looks at the other guy): What's the matter?

Random guy 1 (Points at the sky): L..look up!

Random guy 2 (Looks at the sky): (Gasps)

Zeno (While wearing a parachute): Here I come everyone!

Zeno (Lands on the stage): (Makes a dab pose) Here I am!

Random guy 1 (Cries): My day... is ruined..

Random guy 2 (Looks on the ground): My autograph...

~At the air deck~

Ichiban (Looks at the Zeno): He's really an amazing guy!

Watashi: Or you could say crazy....

Fubuki (Smiles): It's not the first time since he pulled off a stunt like that.

Ben: That's not fair... He left before our battle could finish!

Fubuki (Smiles): You'll be able to battle him later.

Watashi: That's right! Kiwami League is gonna began in no time.

Fubuki: Let's get inside, it's getting dark.

(Everyone gets inside)

~Several hours later~

Fubuki: I guess you guys should sleep now. Tommorow is a big day. (He leaves)

Ichiban (Gets on his bed): What do ya think where will be our first destination?

Watashi (Gets on his bed): I don't know... sleep I'm very tired right now.

Ichiban (Looks at Ben): When are you planning to remove this mask?

Ben (While lying on his bed): ... Never!

Ichiban: This guy is really weird... (Looks at Watashi): What do you thi-

Watashi (while sleeping): (Snores)

Ichiban: Looks like I should sleep as well....

Ichiban (Picks up Icarus): I can't wait for tommorow, Icarus!

(Icarus shines)

[To Be Continued]

Next Chapter: Furious Blow! Noble Centaur!

Plus I'm not gonna take entries anymore cuz I've planned the plot from start to finish.

Here are all the Beys which are gonna appear in Kiwami

Spoiler (Click to View)

Aviate Icarus, Oni Belial, Ember Hyperion, Noble Centaur, Icicle Longinus (Attack)

Iris Mayura, Gloom Wendigo, Sovereign Lucifer, Twister Wyvern (Defense)

Starlight Zeus, Plasma Gilgamesh, Magenta Fafnir, Doomsday Ragnaruk (Stamina)

Mortal Spriggan, Legacy Dragon, Dual Yggdragon, Sovereign Astrios (Balance)

Evolutions:

Victory Icarus, Lightning Centaur and Star Astrios.

(Aug. 27, 2021 7:31 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I'll let you choose the moves. But I can add them if you want.

Character:

Spoiler (Click to View)
Name: William Thompson
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Appearance: He has dark brown hair with purple on the end, green eyes and glasses (It's not a stereotype I promise). He wears a purple T-shirt with golden details, on the middle it has golden camera lens with the text "Smile! You're being watched." Under it. He also wears green jeans and purple shoes.
Personality: His social skills are really bad, but he's also very kind and loves blading. He is very obedient to the rules (of basically anything). He is very careful and can't do anything without a plan or instructions in mind. He tries to be away from people, but he doesn't mind being near them. He is so careful that he can't improvise even by a little. When he's battling, he always tries to surprise the opponents, making them lose focus and then increasing his winning chance. (kinda lazy bio, but that's what I can do for now. you can edit minor things to match your writing style or the plot)
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Bey:

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Kiwami Core - Wyvern: It has 3 medium teeth and 1 tall teeth at the beginning. The motif is the flying dragon, Wyvern.

Kiwami Weight - Tungsten (Tn): It's a Kiwami weight made entirely of Tungsten. It is hollowed but still can give a big amount of weight due to Tungsten density (I think). It gives CWD. Color: smae as Terrraria tungsten.

Kiwami Blade - Twister: A right spin, defense type blade. It features 8 blades that can free-spin, when the armor is inside, the blades lock up, increasing attack. Four out of these blades have rubber. Twister free spins to both sides, unlike Jet. Color: Purple, green and some gold.

Kiwami Armor - Wind: Wind is a average weight armor and features rubber around it and is only compatible with some Kiwami beys, including Twister Wyvern. When put outside, It gives the blade rubber (and on Twister, it makes the layer completely circular). When put inside, it makes friction with the disc tabs, improving burst resistance. Color: same as Terraria tungsten, with purple rubber.

Neo Discs - either Π or π : π is a Kiwami disc. It is one of the heaviest discs, having 44.95g. It shape is similar to Ring, except bulkier and supporting high and low mode. It has the biggest OWD in the beyblade meta.

Driver - Exact: Exact features a sharp tip (Like awakened Just) and a outer ring around it, akin to it's precessor Just. Unlike Just, the free-spinning ring has a bearing and has rubber. In theory, when it makes contact with the stadium, it would reduce stamina loss, increase LAD and make the bey more stationary. The sharp tip is made out of metal to minimize stamina loss. The bey cannot scrape and/or make disc contact with the floor, due to Exact plate diameter.

Overall performance: With Armor out: Can absorb attacks and can't spin equalize. Smashing is it's weakness.
With armor in: Can spin equalize (does not have rubber, but a round design) and Can't absorb attacks. Trying to burst it is useless, but you can try outspin it (if you have enough stamina) or hit from above when Exact tilts, making it lose more balance.

Ok I'll decide the moves, but can I change Tungsten weight's name to 10 or 14?

No Valtryek??

Kiryu Kazuma · Sep. 02, 2021 3:41 PM

Levi Winters (Guilty/Icicle Longinus)

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Hollowmind13 · Sep. 02, 2021 4:04 PM

(Sep. 02, 2021 3:41 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Levi Winters (Guilty/Icicle Longinus)

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Appearance:

Attire: He wears an unzipped white jacket, a black shirt with golden buttons, White gloves, Black jeans with a L shaped belt and White shoes with Gold Stripes, he also has sharp teeth just like Lui.

Hair Color: White

Eye Color: Sky Blue

Personality: He's as agressive and intense like Lui, he thinks he's unbeatable and didn't upgrade Longinus cuz he didn't wanted to make it different as it was Lui's bey. He wants to become better than Lui and wanna be the best wielder of Longinus.

Beyblades:

Guilty Longinus Karma Metal Destroy -2: He trained under Lui. Lui got impressed by his skills and also likes how he admires Longinus' strength so he gave Longinus to Levi.

Icicle Longinus .1 Torpedo Shatter -Metal Dragon (He'll upgrade it in second or third arc),

Kiwami Core: Longinus, The Spear of Ruin. The core has one huge dragon dead in the middle. and two more normal sized dragon heads on the wings. The outer core is in black color and the dragon heads are gold and wings are white.

Kiwami Blade: Icicle, It has two spear shaped blades having one metal dragon each on them. The metal dragons are different than any other longinus, it have a side view of dragon breathing fire. The main color scheme of this blade is black, the color of dragon heads is in gold color and the fire is blue in color.

Neo Disk: Torpedo, It's shape is just like the Icicle layer, and has a frame fused into it, the frame has two small sized dragon heads. The middle part of the disk is black and the dragon heads are gold and the frame is blue in color. (It's an evolution of Drake Disk, the blades allign with each other when the lock moves on).

Driver: Shatter, It's a fusion of Spiral, Jolt and Destroy. It has ring around the tip, with six metal spikes (shaped like dragon heads but are extremely small) protruding outwards and towards the right and can be tilted just like the ring around Kick driver. The tip is in the shape of spiral.

Kiwami Armor: Metal Dragon, It's just like the L-Gear and it's exclusive to Belial snd Longinus only.

Kiwami Weight: 1, It has a heavy metal point on the one side and the other side is lighter, it makes the bey unbalanced but increases the attack potential.

Some more details about Longinus:

1) Longinus' avatar color scheme has been completly changed. The color scheme of the avatar is black and the head and the heads on the wings (wings are white) are gold. And it's tail burns in gold flame.

2) Icicle Longinus reuses some parts,

Metal Dragon Armor of Oni Belial and 1 Weight from Avaite Icarus.

3) It has 10 dragon heads including the MD armor. If you also count the heads from driver then it has... 16 heads.

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And I'm working on Chapter 6, gonna release it tommorow (It's gonna have 4 or 5 battles and might be longer than my usual chapters)

Really nice, that's surely a really cool Longinus evo. Now, something that I don't understand is: If Shatter (cool driver name ngl) is a fusion between Destroy, Spiral and Jolt, why it doesn't have rubber? I mean, Jolt (imo) is a rubber Spiral.

I am not trying to offend you by any means and I respecct if you say "no", but these are my suggestions for the driver (on the spoiler). If you feel like Shatter is already perfect, then I'd reccomend not to open the spoiler.

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Anyways, looking forward to the chapter. (sorry if I was somehow rude by questioning your decisions on the driver, sharing thoughts on the internet is hard)

I'm the original creator of "Welcome to the WBO".
Rank 0 means I'm better than 1°

Kiryu Kazuma · Sep. 02, 2021 4:11 PM

(Sep. 02, 2021 4:04 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Sep. 02, 2021 3:41 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Levi Winters (Guilty/Icicle Longinus)

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Appearance:

Attire: He wears an unzipped white jacket, a black shirt with golden buttons, White gloves, Black jeans with a L shaped belt and White shoes with Gold Stripes, he also has sharp teeth just like Lui.

Hair Color: White

Eye Color: Sky Blue

Personality: He's as agressive and intense like Lui, he thinks he's unbeatable and didn't upgrade Longinus cuz he didn't wanted to make it different as it was Lui's bey. He wants to become better than Lui and wanna be the best wielder of Longinus.

Beyblades:

Guilty Longinus Karma Metal Destroy -2: He trained under Lui. Lui got impressed by his skills and also likes how he admires Longinus' strength so he gave Longinus to Levi.

Icicle Longinus .1 Torpedo Shatter -Metal Dragon (He'll upgrade it in second or third arc),

Kiwami Core: Longinus, The Spear of Ruin. The core has one huge dragon dead in the middle. and two more normal sized dragon heads on the wings. The outer core is in black color and the dragon heads are gold and wings are white.

Kiwami Blade: Icicle, It has two spear shaped blades having one metal dragon each on them. The metal dragons are different than any other longinus, it have a side view of dragon breathing fire. The main color scheme of this blade is black, the color of dragon heads is in gold color and the fire is blue in color.

Neo Disk: Torpedo, It's shape is just like the Icicle layer, and has a frame fused into it, the frame has two small sized dragon heads. The middle part of the disk is black and the dragon heads are gold and the frame is blue in color. (It's an evolution of Drake Disk, the blades allign with each other when the lock moves on).

Driver: Shatter, It's a fusion of Spiral, Jolt and Destroy. It has ring around the tip, with six metal spikes (shaped like dragon heads but are extremely small) protruding outwards and towards the right and can be tilted just like the ring around Kick driver. The tip is in the shape of spiral.

Kiwami Armor: Metal Dragon, It's just like the L-Gear and it's exclusive to Belial snd Longinus only.

Kiwami Weight: 1, It has a heavy metal point on the one side and the other side is lighter, it makes the bey unbalanced but increases the attack potential.

Some more details about Longinus:

1) Longinus' avatar color scheme has been completly changed. The color scheme of the avatar is black and the head and the heads on the wings (wings are white) are gold. And it's tail burns in gold flame.

2) Icicle Longinus reuses some parts,

Metal Dragon Armor of Oni Belial and 1 Weight from Avaite Icarus.

3) It has 10 dragon heads including the MD armor. If you also count the heads from driver then it has... 16 heads.

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And I'm working on Chapter 6, gonna release it tommorow (It's gonna have 4 or 5 battles and might be longer than my usual chapters)

Really nice, that's surely a really cool Longinus evo. Now, something that I don't understand is: If Shatter (cool driver name ngl) is a fusion between Destroy, Spiral and Jolt, why it doesn't have rubber? I mean, Jolt (imo) is a rubber Spiral.

I am not trying to offend you by any means and I respecct if you say "no", but these are my suggestions for the driver (on the spoiler). If you feel like Shatter is already perfect, then I'd reccomend not to open the spoiler.

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My opinion (don't kill me) : You could either add Jolt's tip onto the driver or at least add some rubber around like Merge or even making the ring lockable (like absorb) and having a rubber perimeter on the disc could do better for counter attacks and speed and... Longinus stuff.

Shatter does have a cool concept, but for me it fells like Destroy with Spiral tip and Kick gimmick.
Anyways, looking forward to the chapter. (sorry if I was somehow rude by questioning your decisions on the driver, sharing thoughts on the internet is hard)

No prob and it's my fault lol, Actually I was gonna include rubber in the driver not metal. But it was a sudden change. So yeah it's my fault that it doesn't have rubber lol. And I might change the driver's gimmick cuz I too thought it's somewhat weird (The kick ring one was just an excuse to add on two small dragon heads though).

@Hollowmind8 I edited it a little bit.

Kiryu Kazuma · Sep. 03, 2021 10:01 AM

Chapter 6: (1,808 words including the spoiler text lol)

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Demon Belial · Sep. 03, 2021 11:33 AM

Noise, but you atleast completed that battle.

Kiryu Kazuma · Sep. 03, 2021 12:17 PM

(Sep. 03, 2021 11:33 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: Noise, but you atleast completed that battle.

I got lazy in the end lol, It will continue in the next chapter (It's an excuse to make the next chapter longer too).

Kiryu Kazuma · Sep. 04, 2021 12:13 PM

Chapter 7 Summary:

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Kiwami league participants

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And a little update:

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Tell me, does the first arc feel like DB rip off? (If it does then I had no choice lol, This was a better way to introduce characters).

GenesisBlader · Sep. 04, 2021 2:09 PM

(Sep. 04, 2021 12:13 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 7 Summary:

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The Battle between Ichiban and Chikara Continues! After that Fiona takes on Watashi and Ben at the same time. Ichiban will be the last one to battle Fiona, at El Santo's big arena, Is Fafnir really the best bey in the world?

Kiwami league participants

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1) Ichiban

2) Ben

3) Zeno

4) Chikara

5) Fiona

6) Griffin

7) Himaki

8) Maru

9) Shin

10) Dax

11) Yael

12) Light

And a little update:

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At the end of Arc 1 Ichiban is going to make a new blade, inspired by the bladers he fought till now.

Trinity Blade: A three bladed blade, The three blades have different colors, (Red, Yellow and Dark Blue). The Blade Red Blade is shaped like an axe, the yellow one has rubber on it and the dark blue one is shaped like a peacock feather). And the shape of the blade is just like Valkyrie.

And there's gonna be a helios too (Cuz Hyperion and Lucifer are there too lol)
Tell me, does the first arc feel like DB rip off? (If it does then I had no choice lol, This was a better way to introduce characters).

no way, to me it feels pretty unique

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Sep. 04, 2021 3:57 PM

(Sep. 04, 2021 12:13 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 7 Summary:

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The Battle between Ichiban and Chikara Continues! After that Fiona takes on Watashi and Ben at the same time. Ichiban will be the last one to battle Fiona, at El Santo's big arena, Is Fafnir really the best bey in the world?

Kiwami league participants

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1) Ichiban

2) Ben

3) Zeno

4) Chikara

5) Fiona

6) Griffin

7) Himaki

8) Maru

9) Shin

10) Dax

11) Yael

12) Light

And a little update:

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At the end of Arc 1 Ichiban is going to make a new blade, inspired by the bladers he fought till now.

Trinity Blade: A three bladed blade, The three blades have different colors, (Red, Yellow and Dark Blue). The Blade Red Blade is shaped like an axe, the yellow one has rubber on it and the dark blue one is shaped like a peacock feather). And the shape of the blade is just like Valkyrie.

And there's gonna be a helios too (Cuz Hyperion and Lucifer are there too lol)
Tell me, does the first arc feel like DB rip off? (If it does then I had no choice lol, This was a better way to introduce characters).

Nah, Itw unique and I'm excited for Chapter 7 (Dax you better win)

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Kiryu Kazuma · Sep. 13, 2021 1:47 PM

Chapter 7: (I know it took me very long, I just couldn't find the words to write)

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Hollowmind13 · Sep. 13, 2021 3:28 PM

(Sep. 13, 2021 1:47 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 7: (I know it took me very long, I just couldn't find the words to write)

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Chapter 7: The Sparkling Dragon! Magenta Fafnir!

Ichiban (takes his shoot stance): I'm gonna win this match, Chikara!

Chikara (takes his shoot stance): Sorry... but I refuse to lose against you!!

Drone: Third Battle! Ready... Set!

"3! 2! 1! Go.... Shoot!"

Chikara: Attack, Centaur!!

(As soon as Centaur landed it begans to hits Icarus' blade with sheer force)

Ichiban ('s hand shines with a white glow as he makes a fist): Aviate Slash!!

(Icarus' blade lit up and counters Centaur's attack)

Chikara (unleashes his bright gold aura): Argh.. Centaur!!

(Centaur appears from the erupting gold aura)

Ichiban (unleashes his bright white aura): Send it flying, Icarus!!

(Icarus appears from the bright white aura)

(Icarus and Chikara crosses each other with insane speed at the center)

Ichiban (Smiles): Let's finish this!

(Icarus rides along the edge of the stadium and unleashed sparks as it rides rapidly)

Chikara (Smirks): (That's what I was waiting for....)

(Centaur leans towards it's ambush driver and heads towards the stadium wall, not Icarus)

Watashi: What the heck is he doing? Is he gonna self burst himself..?

Fiona (while looking at the stadium): He saw through Icarus' movement.

Fubuki (Looks at Fiona): You mean...

Chikara ('s hand shines gold as he makes a fist and makes a slash gesture): Noble Spear!!

(Centaur heads towards the wall but in a slight second Icarus came there)

Ichiban (Gasps): Seriously!?

(Centaur's pins Icarus between it's shining blade and the stadium creating a damage of pincer attack)

(Sparks flew from both of the beys and a purple beam light surges upwards from the stadium)

(Icarus couldn't withstand that attack and bursts)

Drone: Noble Centaur, Burst Finish! Chikara Arami wins with the score of 3-1!

Ichiban (Picks up Icarus and assembles it): I won't lose next time!

Fiona (walks up to the stadium): (Looks at Watashi and Ben) You two...

Watashi/Ben: What?

Fiona (holds Fafnir on her hand): I have decided, I'll battle both of you together.

Watashi (makes an angry look): Are you looking down on me!?

Fiona: Call it a test of power.

Ichiban: Then what about me?

Fiona: I'll save you for the last. (Smiles) You've proved your worth to me.

Watashi (holds Wendigo on his hand): Wendigo will put you on your place!

Fubuki: Fafnir's blade is completely made up of rubber, it helps to absorb spin from right-spinning beys.

Watashi (Smiles): Fafnir can't absorb Wendigo's stamina.

Ben (holds Belial on his hand): Belial has rubber too, So I'll just drain Fafnir's spin.

(Ben and Watashi walks up to the stadium)

Watashi (takes out his launcher): Wendigo's gonna win this match!

Fiona (takes out her launcher): Fine then.

Drone: Ready... Set!

"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!" (Ben and Fiona launched their beys lightly and Watashi shoots with his left hand)

(Fafnir and Belial clashes at the center and starts to drain each other's stamina)

Fiona (Smiles): So that's your strategy?

(Wendigo leans on the edge of the stadium and heads towards Fafnir)

Watashi: Moment Crash!!

Fiona: This isn't gonna work on Fafnir.

(Wendigo crashes down on Fafnir's drain disk, Fafnir evades the attack by the free-spinning disk and drain's Wendigo's stamina)

(Wendigo's trajectory got changed and it got knocked out of the stadium)

Watashi (Gasps): What!?

Ichiban: The disk is free-spining?

Chikara: There's more into it than it seems to meet the eye.....

(Belial absorbed enough spin and starts to accelarate on the stadium, Fafnir spins on the stadium with extremely low stamina)

Ben: Time to finish this! Oni Bomber!!

(Belial's blades lits up and with the help of V gear it crashes onto Fafnir's Drain disk with a immense slash attack)

Fiona (In a calm voice): Drain Counter.

(Fafnir's disk lits up and bursts Belial)

(Belial's parts flew up in the sky)

Ben (Gasps): No...

Drone: Fiona Dela Hoya is the winner!

Fiona (Smiles and looks at Watashi): You cannot best Fafnir even in your wildest dreams.

Watashi: Tch.. I won't let you get away with this...

Ichiban (Looks at Chikara): That's what you meant?

Chikara (Nods): Fafnir's rubber disk is free-spinning to left-spinning opponents, but to right-spinning opponents, it's fixed so that it could drain the spin.

Fubuki (Looks at Fiona): This explains why she's believed to be the world's number one blader...

Fiona (Walks up to Ichiban): I'll wait for you at El Santo's beyblsde arena. Don't disappoint me.

Ichiban: Yeah... I won't lose against you!

(Fiona walks away)

Chikara (Looks at Ichiban): If I were you, I would've start practicing as you have enough time to do so.

Ichiban (Nods): I will.

Watashi: She already looked through Icarus' movement, you need to be more careful.

Ichiban: She's not only one to see through my techniques! I too have noticed a little bit...

Fubuki (Smiles): It will be your very first official match, don't lose your cool when you see the audience.

Ichiban: I won't.

Chikara: Alright then, let's go.

~At El Santo~

Chikara (Looks at the rope): You know... you shouldn't practice with your bey alone, you should train your body too.

(He gets onto the rope)

Chikara (Looks at Ichiban): Do you think you can launch while standing on this rope?

Ichiban: I can do it, it sounds easy!

(Ichiban gets onto the second rope)

Ichiban (Takes out his launcher): Let's try it then. Go... Shoot!

(Ichiban fells on the ground as soon as he launched)

Ichiban (Gets up): Seriously? I didn't knew it was that hard...

Chikara (Gets onto the rope): Go... Shoot!!

(Chikara launched perfectly and didn't fell on the ground)

Ichiban (Gets back onto the rope): This time I'll do it for sure! Go... Shoot!!

(He launched perfectly and didn't fall)

Ichiban: I di-

(The rope broke off)

(Ichiban fells on the ground)

Ichiban: Argh... At least I did it right, right?

Chikara (Smiles): You did it correctly, the rope was weak to withstand your power.

Ichiban (Takes a deep sigh): Great...

Fubuki: Your match is about to start. You should be on the arena now.

Ichiban (Gets up): Alright then, (Looks at Chikara) look carefully I'll win!

Chikara: (Nods while smiling)

~At The Arena~

Hanami: Okay! Boys and Girls! A Fierce battle is about to begin!

(The crowd screams wildy)

Hanami: It's going to be an exciting battle, Valt Aoi's son. At the red corner, Ichiban Aoi makes his first appearance to the world!

Ichiban (Looks at the crowd with a nervous look): I didn't knew there'll so many people....

Hanami: And in the blue corner. It's the number 1 ranked blader, Fiona Dela Hoya!

(Both of them walks up to the stadium)

Ichiban (Switches to Upper mode): We're gonna win this thing!

Fiona (Switches to Upper mode): Is that so..?

Ref: First Battle! Ready... Set!

"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot" (Fiona pulled the launcher string slowly)

(Fafnir reached to the center slowly)

Ichiban: Blow him away!

(Icarus attacks Fafnir, but Fafnir aborbed Icarus' spin)

Ichiban: It didn't worked....

Fiona: You won't beat Fafnir with that...

Chikara: At this rate... He's going to lose..

Ichiban: We won't give up, Attack again!

(Icarus unleashed a barrage of attacks at Fafnir, but Fafnir absorbs every impact)

Hanami: Wow!! Fafnir is still standing still and Icarus isn't giving up too!

Watashi: What is he up to? Like this Icarus' is going to lose all it's stamina.

(Icarus hits at Fafnir's disc with full force)

Fiona (In a calm voice): Drain Counter.

(Fafnir sends Icarus flying)

Hanami: Icarus is blown away!!

(Icarus hits the ground)

Ref: Magenta Fafnir with an over finish, the score is 1-0!

Ichiban: (Does Fafnir has no weakness...?)

Fiona (Holds Fafnir on her hand): You're not worthy to battle me and I'll prove it now.

Ichiban (Gasps): What?

Chikara (with a nervous look): He cannot win...

Fubuki (Smiles): At least he should've learned something from the last round.

Ichiban (Looks at Icarus): Icarus...

(Suddenly Ichiban's surroundings turned white and Icarus' avatar appeared in front of him)

Icarus: What's wrong?

Ichiban (With a sad look): I feel like.. I can't win this match...

Icarus: You think Fafnir has no weakness?

Ichiban: It doesn't have one.

Icarus: Is Fafnir really made up of 100% rubber?

Ichiban: Huh?

Icarus ('s eyes shines): Find it's weak spot and defeat Fiona, we can defeat her. Just believe in yourself.

(Ichiban's surroundings turned back to normal)

(Ichiban's aura starts to erupt within himself as he opens his eyes)

Ichiban: This time... things will be different!

Fiona: Heh, even if you do your best. You cannot beat Fafnir.

Ref: Second Battle, Ready... Set!

"3! 2! 1! Go... Shoot!!" (Fiona launched with less effort)

Hanami: Fiona again did a woobly shoot! While Icarus is speeding up around the stadium!

Ichiban: (The weak spot...)

(Fafnir reaches the center slowly)

Ichiban (Looks at Fafnir's core): The core...

Ichiban (unleashes his bright white aura): Found it! Do it Icarus!!

(Icarus' avatar appears from the white aura)

Ichiban: Let's go!!

(Icarus hits the wall and jumps, and reaches Fafnir's core)

Chikara: Is he aiming on the core?

Fiona: The core... huh.

Ichiban ('s hand shines and did a slash like gesture): Aviate Slash!!

Hanami: Icarus just landed a finishing blow!!

(Icarus hits onto Fafnir's core, but Fafnir gets pushed down on it's driver)

Fiona (unleashes her glowing yellow aura): Knock him away, Fafnir.

(Fafnir's avatar appears from the yellow aura)

(Fafnir sends Icarus flying and gains immense speed which makes it go agressive on the stadium)

Hanami: Wait.. what! It didn't worked!

Ichiban: (Makes a stunned look)

Fiona: Dragon Break!!

(Icarus reaches down on the stadium and Fafnir strikes on Icarus' core which makes it burst in a single strike)

Hanami: Fafnir just oblierated Icarus in a single strike!!

Ref: Magenta Fafnir! Burst Finish! With the score of 3-0, Fiona Dela is the winner!

Hanami: That incredible power just shows how powerful the number 1 blader is!

Ichiban: (Looks at Icarus' part silently then looks at Fiona)

Fiona (Smiles): I told you at the start didn't I?

[To Be Continued]

Ah Magenta, the strongest color.
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Nice chapter.

I'm the original creator of "Welcome to the WBO".
Rank 0 means I'm better than 1°

MasterofDerp · Sep. 14, 2021 5:47 PM

Mind if I join? I’ll send in my OC pretty soon. One thing: They are not related to any canon(Biologically), though do wield a recurring bey(Bahamut)

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Rip I just saw the announcement on the no more entries. Nvm

Tho (This is def a far stretch), do feel free to use the Bahamut idea in case you need it.