What needs to be fixed?
| Nothing. Its Perfect! |
|
11 |
| Dialogue. It seems bland. |
|
3 |
| Narration. Give more details! |
|
4 |
| Narration. Give less details. |
|
0 |
| Everything. This story stinks. |
|
0 |
| Total: | 100% | 18 vote(s) |