What do you think of my story?

Bad
7.27%
Hero of Ooo, Jaems1, kai kai kai, ThePokeBlader 		4
Ok
23.64%
Bobmcdoogal, Earth Libra3, FangsoftheHeart, firebey12, kingdom blader, littletjparker, megablader9005, RagerBlade, storm pegusas5, TakasuMouce, TenshouTsubasa, Tmoney6911, Tris 		13
Awesome
69.09%
6Skittles9, Aerith, Arceus179, BeybladeChaos, BeybladerPotter, Beyboy25, blader3000, Blood, Boxy ID, BunkerBuster, C-Dub, Clonetos, CM Punk, Coyote Starrk, djam56, dragon-blader2, Drgnslyr208, emman798, EpicPwnage, Fang, galaxyunicorn, GM Judge, HorogiumX, Janstarblast, KCPJ, KoolCatCurtis, kyoa leone, MaDMuPPeT__, PegaMaster, Prince Blaze, PyroVampire21, Synth, TheBlayder, TwiztidBlader, venkai, Viral, Xlr8, zainx2 		38
Total: 100% 55 vote(s)