time for bed [not a beyblade story]

Poll: do you like this story.

like it
14.29%
1
it's fine
42.86%
3
dislike it
42.86%
3
Total: 100% 7 vote(s)
long ago one small boy was asleep in his bed.
he was dreaming of being trapped in a solid cement room that was getting flooded with water.
he finally made it out or did he, no he did not make it out he woke up.

night 2 still to come but for now goodbye pepoles.

p.s please reply and tell me how I can improve my stories.
put a bey in it
thankyou, I will use this reply and put a bey in my stories.
night 2 is written tomorow
I see no point...
(Feb. 05, 2011  7:26 AM)Nano Wrote: I see no point...

what the ....
its tiny not going anywhere
i cannot write any more of this story.
This isn't even about beyblading. And if you can't write more, why did you make this in the first place?
Yeah Its fine. A story must be in complete meaning. For example a boy was asleep in his bed . You should post some better story with this title.
Yeah Its fine. A story must be in complete meaning. For example a boy was asleep in his bed . You should post some better story with this title.
Yeah Its fine. A story must be in complete meaning. For example a boy was asleep in his bed . You should post some better story with this title.
Yeah Its fine. A story must be in complete meaning. For example a boy was asleep in his bed . You should post some better story with this title.
Yeah Its fine. A story must be in complete meaning. For example a boy was asleep in his bed . You should post some better story with this title.