the wear wolf blader

[im not that good of a speller so bere with me] in the mountens of mt.rushmore rite in the sinter of it there was a lab were a mad sientice workt on bey blades tring to fuis them but as much as he tride he feled over and overe a gain there was not a nuff power "uug this is not working i must fined a beter power sorce" so lets leve the mad sientice so i can inter dous the hero nouw we go to usa fl there was a kid named hunter and he was part of a evil gang called the skiadzo gang you wonder how some one part of a evil groop can be a hero well look 4 the wear wolf blader part 2 [tell me what u thank about this story]
It's short, full of mistakes, cliché, boring and weird...

But hey, practice makes perfect. Keep working on it.
(Sep. 18, 2010  1:03 AM)REtread Wrote: Why are wolves so god dang popular?

why do people keep buying dark wolf as thier first bey?
My guess would be because of Jacob from Twilight.

Or maybe because they don't know that Dark Wolf sucks...
(Sep. 18, 2010  1:12 AM)Dude Wrote: My guess would be because of Jacob from Twilight.

Or maybe because they don't know that Dark Wolf sucks...

so what, did they expect thier dark wolf to turn into a person?
i dont like dark wolf that much if u read my next story yll understand
(Sep. 18, 2010  1:19 AM)Red_Eyes_Zombie Wrote: so what, did they expect thier dark wolf to turn into a person?


Who knows, the fangirls are incredibly weird...

By the way the story should be redone without all the mistakes, I can barely read it Uncertain
cool :3 i love werewolves(NOT TWLIGHT ONES THEY CAN DIE :3)
and putting beyblades and werewlves toghter would be cool

someone needs to make a werewolf beyblade Grin
nice story but you should use spell check Wink