really good drawing of zeo from the original beyblade

hey everyone check it out i drew zeo from the original beyblade so tell me what you think
just let me post it so just hold up a minute
ok so here it is
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just copy and past that in your browser and it should take you to it

http://s977.photobucket.com/albums/ae252...g&newest=1
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ok never mind that didnt work either so just follow the link and tell me what you think
Hm, I think one shouldn't be too cocky about their drawing abilities cause it'll only provoke people and ultimately lead to disappointment.

The drawing is fine, but if you practice it'll get better.
(Feb. 21, 2010  11:10 PM)Rocky Wrote: Hm, I think one shouldn't be too cocky about their drawing abilities cause it'll only provoke people and ultimately lead to disappointment.

The drawing is fine, but if you practice it'll get better.

yeah i just didnt know what to title this but yeah i try to practice alot because i want to be a manga artist someday
hmm, the drawing is good, im making comparisons to your beyblade drawings and mine
also, try drawing as slow as possible and make repetitive strokes to make a line
(Feb. 22, 2010  8:52 PM)MetalFightKai Wrote: hmm, the drawing is good, im making comparisons to your beyblade drawings and mine
also, try drawing as slow as possible and make repetitive strokes to make a line

i do make repetative strokes but i do it lightly then go over it in a darker pencil
Good, but I feel the head is slightly out of proportion.
Also, some colour or shading might be nice.
One more thing, I think its an awkward angle to see if it definitely is Zeo because, to be honest, it looks like any Manga character with long hair. This is how it should look to be Zeo (as close to a front on as I could get):

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y195/ni...Zeo/23.jpg


Apart from that, a really good drawing Wink
its good..but itd oesn't really look like zeo i think you should take it slower. Because i use to rush drawings but i don't anymore. If you wanna be a manga artist pick up one of those manga books which teach you how to draw it may sound lame BUT THEY HELP LOADS with proportions.
I don't mean to burn you or be rude, but it's not really that great of a drawing as you say it is sorry to say Uncertain
Its not a really good drawing of zeo really i was expecting it to look more like him from the anime but its alright. Wink
I got to tell you, i am writing a manga, and i know something about drawing, you need to work on the anatomy a bit, otherwise, it is pretty good.