One day there was 5 meteor it was Ldrago it crashed into earth to the dessert. All 6 dragons combined and started forming inside everyone got sucked in then taking its spirit.
And it became known as meteor Dragoon it was fearsome. So someone something had to stop him. A person called Tiru had heard of the fearsome Dragoon and it escaped to it master himself rytodo he was evil nasty and live in the cave. But Tiru did not have a beyblade. So he went to his dad and said: "dad the fearsome beyblade has been released."
And his dad said: "Tiru are you ready to do this." Tiru said yes. so his dad wanted him to follow and now he saw the one Pegasus. To be continued.....

Well, since that guy got banned, I'm guessing it won't continue, but might as well say it.

Story sucks.

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Make sense to your story,we cant understand the story very well

1.VERY wrong grammar.I mean,Your making run-on sentences very bad,you should put some comas and semi-colon(with the FANBOYS)so your story can be understood.
2.in the first part,you said their is 5 meteors,so how come there are 6 dragons?better change that.
3.Are you even reading books well?cause you can learn proper grammar just by reading

regardless,I'm going to say one thing,READ SOME BOOKS!

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