beyblades of destiny:chptr 2

Poll: Can u wait for my next episode?

no i cant wait!
100.00%
1
ill wait like a patient person...
0%
0
i think im gonna be sick!
0%
0
Total: 100% 1 vote(s)
whoosh!were r we...hey!guys!wake up!ugh...whoah!gingka cried.masamune and madoka got up,while gingka started to battle someone!3,2,1,LET IT RIP!!!Big Bang Pegasus,and another bey,Phantom Unicorno,clashing!BIG BANG PEGASUS!SPECIAL MOVE,(FLASH!)STAR OVERFLOW ATTACK!!!Phantom Unicorno was left flying!It wasnt finished yet!PHANTOM UNICORNO,(FLASH!)SPECIAL MOVE!!!PHANTOM SWORD FLOW!!!Big Bang Pegasus wouldnt budge!Phantom Unicorno stopped spinning!The other blader said that his name was:Jarokou Saktori!He said that he would help find Kyoya...He would show him around...

This is part 2,of the story.i MIGHT,change the name of the story to:Beyblade:quest 4 Kyoya.IDK,so une in next time!for part 3!!!

Hope u subscribe!!!Joyful_3
wen it says une,i meant:tune

someone,PLEASE,reply...i NEED,replies!!!~_~
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Wow...... this needs so much work I don't know where to begin.
Also if this is chapter two, you are not supposed to post a new thread for every chapter you make......... It is in need of grammatical corrections and you don't have any back story at all. The ending was horrid and please don't make separate posts just to correct your OP just edit the OP instead. A mod should really close this thread.