after my two failure of draft making i have returned back with lots of hope that this will not be closed so here I am with my third draft

Face Bolt: Fireblaze (Phoenix)
Weight: 1.07 gram

The Face Bolt depicts Phoenix, one of the 88 constellations in space. Phoenix, was mythical bird that when died, rose from the ashes and lived again. The Hasbro version, shows the face of Fireblaze while the Takara Tomy version, is the same alphabet with the words, "Phoenix" under the face. The face of Fireblaze is like that of a bird but in flames and is an orange in color.


Energy Ring: Fireblaze (Phoenix)
Weight: 2.88 grams

Fireblaze has a flaming fire-like design and is rather light. It is orange with black spots around it.
This clear wheel has very good stamina capabilities but lacks both attack and defense.

Fusion Wheel: Burn
Weight: 31 grams

this metal wheel is a very smooth wheel with no indentations, and is completely round. It has ridges around it along with a fire-like design in the inner part of the Wheel. It is one of the best Wheels in terms of Stamina. This wheel is good is good in terms of stamina but produces much recoil when hit by other beys that’s why not useful in defense customizations but if used in attack customizations due to it’s good smash attacks gives nice results. This can be put into a top-tier stamina combo, Burn Bull AD/DF145SD/WD or Burn Bull 100/90/85SD/WD

Mold Variation:

There is a mold variation between Hasbro (weight: 33 grams) and Takara Tomy (weight: 31 grams). Takara Tomy has engraved the words "BURN WHEEL" on one side of the Wheel. While, the Hasbro variant does not. Testing has proved that the Takara Tomy mold is much better in terms of Stamina.

Spin Track: 135
Weight: 1.5 grams

135 is a Spin Track exclusive to Burn Fireblaze and the only track of that height. It is a viable track for Stamina, although outclassed. It is very severely outclassed in Defense and Attack, since it is a bad height, and does not have enough weight (for heavy Attack and Defense). Its color is yellow.

Performance Tip: Metal Sharp
Weight: 1 gram

Metal Sharp is the metal variant of the S (Sharp/spike) Performance Tip and contains more stamina. Also, it is not found on any other Beyblade and is exclusive to Burn Fireblaze. Being made of metal, it has more Solo Spin Time than most Sharp Tips, although the Balance is the worst of any Sharp series Tip, hindering its stamina.

Other Versions:

Poison Phoenix WA130SD: Random Booster Vol.5 Grand Ketos (Purple)
Storm Phoenix 130B: Random Booster Vol.5 Grand Ketos (Green)
Burn Phoenix 90WF: Limited DVD edition (Blizzard/Ice Blue)
Burn Phoenix 105F: Reward for 2003 Beyblade High Speed Challenge (Blizzard/Ice Blue)
Burn Fireblaze 135MS: Faceoff: Burning Fire Strike (yellow-painted wings)

Overall:

This bey consists of unique but outclassed parts but has burn wheel and Fireblaze ring both of which are good in stamina. I would recommend every one to have one of this bey.

please comment on this draft if there is any error please tell me i have tried to include all the things in it if still something is left please tell me.

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Again, this is extremely informal.

We have http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Burn-Pho...5MS--28613 which is better, http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Burn-Fir...enix-135MS and this is better too.

Stop making articles, you have been corrected twice, learn proper Grammar and Punctuation, then expand you're vocabulary. Then, do extensive testing on the Beyblade, and lastly understand everything and make a professional Article.

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Signature was too large. Read the rules.

Again, this is extremely informal.

We have http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Burn-Pho...5MS--28613 which is better, http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Burn-Fir...enix-135MS and this is better too.

Stop making articles, you have been corrected twice, learn proper Grammar and Punctuation, then expand you're vocabulary. Then, do extensive testing on the Beyblade, and lastly understand everything and make a professional Article.

what u want to say dude they have added more nuisance in their article i have summarized all the things as possible as they can be if u believe there draft is good so why haven't they have been published on bey wiki

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Again, this is extremely informal.

We have http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Burn-Pho...5MS--28613 which is better, http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Burn-Fir...enix-135MS and this is better too.

Stop making articles, you have been corrected twice, learn proper Grammar and Punctuation, then expand you're vocabulary. Then, do extensive testing on the Beyblade, and lastly understand everything and make a professional Article.

what u want to say dude they have added more nuisance in their article i have summarized all the things as possible as they can be if u believe there draft is good so why haven't they have been published on bey wiki

I never compared those articles to Beywiki, I compared it to you're draft, which has no chance of being on Beywiki.

I simply said, that you shouldn't have made a draft when there are already two good drafts, they might need more working before it's published, but it is still more official than this one.

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Signature was too large. Read the rules.

it's not the final draft dude i will keep modifying it after listening it's errors from other members too and those other two threads lacks information

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Again, there are better, more formal drafts made, and yours doesn't seem like yours is up to par with Beywiki articles.

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