As the current thread on making your own beyblade characters is being filled, I've decided to make room for writing stories specifically. Whether it's between characters or OCs or whoever you're writing about, just go ahead. It's preferred that the story is related to beyblade, but no inappropriate content. PM me if you have questions or need advice.
Write Your Own Stories
Ok that works
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Thanks, for creating this thread, Dragunix! I'll try to get something up here tomorrow, but, I'm glad I can have a place to share my stuff, without creating my own thread.
Nice creative thread U came up with....Dragunix
Should we move some of the drafts here or no?
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Dan Teira vs. Wakiya Komurasaki
Dan and Wakiya walked up to the stadium. "I'll burst yer bey in one hit." Wakiya says. Dan grins. "Whatever you say, Wakiya." "3, 2, 1, let it rip!" Wyvern rolls into the middle quickly as Thunderbird zooms in, a golden trail glowing behind it as sparks flew. It hit and Wyvern rolled up the stadium and halted at the ridge. It spun there for a second, before shooting down the stadium fast with a purple glow around it. Thunderbird shot in like a rocket and curved around like a hook, before slamming into Wyvern, causing it to zoom up the stadium fast. It slammed into the wall and then rolled in towards the middle extremely fast. "Go! Hyper Shield Crush!" Thunderbird hit in the middle and they clashed, causing the beasts to appear, a purple dragon breathing flames at a red bird with wings made of fire. They clashed fiercely in the middle, neither willing to give in, as suddenly there was a loud click! and Wyvern flew from the stadium fast, bursting in midair.
Tre Kuroba vs. Valt Aoi
Tyche glid into the middle and Valkyrie zoomed in fast and hard, a golden trail of sparks behind it. The two hit as Tre yelled, "Luck of the Draw!" and a blade shot out, piercing Valkyrie's armor. Tyche's rubber flat hit the stadium and it sped up and zoomed around towards Valkyrie, who was going wild and bouncing off the walls. Suddenly it hit the wall and changed direction, zooming towards Tyche. It's small flat tip retracted and the star tip hit, causing it to speed up and shot towards Tyche like a rocket, before hitting and causing them to clash near the edge. The bit beasts appeared, a knight against a green leprechaun. Then Tyche was flung out of the stadium.
Dan and Wakiya walked up to the stadium. "I'll burst yer bey in one hit." Wakiya says. Dan grins. "Whatever you say, Wakiya." "3, 2, 1, let it rip!" Wyvern rolls into the middle quickly as Thunderbird zooms in, a golden trail glowing behind it as sparks flew. It hit and Wyvern rolled up the stadium and halted at the ridge. It spun there for a second, before shooting down the stadium fast with a purple glow around it. Thunderbird shot in like a rocket and curved around like a hook, before slamming into Wyvern, causing it to zoom up the stadium fast. It slammed into the wall and then rolled in towards the middle extremely fast. "Go! Hyper Shield Crush!" Thunderbird hit in the middle and they clashed, causing the beasts to appear, a purple dragon breathing flames at a red bird with wings made of fire. They clashed fiercely in the middle, neither willing to give in, as suddenly there was a loud click! and Wyvern flew from the stadium fast, bursting in midair.
Tre Kuroba vs. Valt Aoi
Tyche glid into the middle and Valkyrie zoomed in fast and hard, a golden trail of sparks behind it. The two hit as Tre yelled, "Luck of the Draw!" and a blade shot out, piercing Valkyrie's armor. Tyche's rubber flat hit the stadium and it sped up and zoomed around towards Valkyrie, who was going wild and bouncing off the walls. Suddenly it hit the wall and changed direction, zooming towards Tyche. It's small flat tip retracted and the star tip hit, causing it to speed up and shot towards Tyche like a rocket, before hitting and causing them to clash near the edge. The bit beasts appeared, a knight against a green leprechaun. Then Tyche was flung out of the stadium.
(Nov. 06, 2017 2:28 AM)dt1000 Wrote: Dan Teira vs. Wakiya Komurasaki
Dan and Wakiya walked up to the stadium. "I'll burst yer bey in one hit." Wakiya says. Dan grins. "Whatever you say, Wakiya." "3, 2, 1, let it rip!" Wyvern rolls into the middle quickly as Thunderbird zooms in, a golden trail glowing behind it as sparks flew. It hit and Wyvern rolled up the stadium and halted at the ridge. It spun there for a second, before shooting down the stadium fast with a purple glow around it. Thunderbird shot in like a rocket and curved around like a hook, before slamming into Wyvern, causing it to zoom up the stadium fast. It slammed into the wall and then rolled in towards the middle extremely fast. "Go! Hyper Shield Crush!" Thunderbird hit in the middle and they clashed, causing the beasts to appear, a purple dragon breathing flames at a red bird with wings made of fire. They clashed fiercely in the middle, neither willing to give in, as suddenly there was a loud click! and Wyvern flew from the stadium fast, bursting in midair.
Tre Kuroba vs. Valt Aoi
Tyche glid into the middle and Valkyrie zoomed in fast and hard, a golden trail of sparks behind it. The two hit as Tre yelled, "Luck of the Draw!" and a blade shot out, piercing Valkyrie's armor. Tyche's rubber flat hit the stadium and it sped up and zoomed around towards Valkyrie, who was going wild and bouncing off the walls. Suddenly it hit the wall and changed direction, zooming towards Tyche. It's small flat tip retracted and the star tip hit, causing it to speed up and shot towards Tyche like a rocket, before hitting and causing them to clash near the edge. The bit beasts appeared, a knight against a green leprechaun. Then Tyche was flung out of the stadium.
Hah, one of my Bakuten Shoot Beyblade characters has a Thunderbird bey, But nice story!
As a part of audience...I have a request to the authers here...the battle description is very much good...but can U make a story where the protagonist saves world or a part of the world by fierce battle between him/her and the enemy....
And some different type of dialogues would be appreciated....its just a request...
And some different type of dialogues would be appreciated....its just a request...
(Nov. 06, 2017 3:27 AM)Eleanor Wrote: As a part of audience...I have a request to the authers here...the battle description is very much good...but can U make a story where the protagonist saves world or a part of the world by fierce battle between him/her and the enemy....
And some different type of dialogues would be appreciated....its just a request...
Okay, I'll try.
Vis vs Mytero: Iris vs Ifrit
Mytero walks into the Maganda gym and finds Vis testing a new launch. He says, "if you don't mind me using the expression, long time no see." Vis laughs and says, "it's been a while sense I heard that voice. How's it going?" They catch up and then decide to battle. Zac, being his protective self, was there and is able to be a ref for the battle. Vis goes for the test launch as Mytero tilts his launcher and grasps the two power triggers on his launcher. They launch, and Ifrit slams into Iris causing it to roll out of its normal path. "You haven't changed mu..." This thought interrupted by Ifrit yet again hitting Iris, knocking it out. "Maybe you have changed a little." Zac stares the score as Vis retrieves his beyblade, using a echolocation like trick to find it.
They get ready to launch, Vis tilts his launcher to do a bounce launch and says, "you're faster. I can appreciate that." They launch and Sonar's accel frame grips the stadium giving it a boost of speed and knocking out Ifrit. "Though I learned a lot and figured out the best way to take out a fast target is to be faster." Zac states the score.
They grin at eachother and get ready to launch. Vis yells "retro launch." As he swings his launcher to the left. The beys collide head on then Iris rolls to the center. Ifrit charges into the center and Vis says, "now rolling counter." Ifrit hits Iris which uses the speed to roll up to the top of the stadium and arc back down with just as much energy. Before it hits Mytero says, "Honō no kabe." As Ifrit switches to the semiflat and the metal balls go to the center increasing spin speed and defecting Iris with enough force to KO.
Vis is down a point and gets ready for a normal launch as Mytero tilts his launcher. They launch and Mytero slams his launcher down and yells, "torch launch!" This attack hits Iris and diverts it's path and then goes in for another attack. "Now," says Mytero as he tightens the white jacket around his waist, "Ifrit, Enbā no ken!" Vis just tilts his head and says, "trick of the light." And the dreaded sword of embers just rolls right off Iris as it makes its way to the center. "Iris, spiral hold." Says Vis as his beyblade negates attacks for Ifrit and winning by a spin finish.
"Remember that launch you saw me testing?" Asks Vis, holding his launcher with it tilted sideways, "I need a helper to test it on." They get ready to launch and Vis yells, "Echo Boost!" As Iris spins on its layer before jetting forwards thanks to the accel frame p and slamming into Ifrit. Both beyblades are flung into the air and Ifrit bursts.
"That was fun," said Vis holding out his hand, "it was nice catching up." Mytero responds by saying, " I could say the same." Before shaking Vis' hand and leaving.
(Side note: anyone ever had one of their fingers go numb as you are typing?)
Mytero walks into the Maganda gym and finds Vis testing a new launch. He says, "if you don't mind me using the expression, long time no see." Vis laughs and says, "it's been a while sense I heard that voice. How's it going?" They catch up and then decide to battle. Zac, being his protective self, was there and is able to be a ref for the battle. Vis goes for the test launch as Mytero tilts his launcher and grasps the two power triggers on his launcher. They launch, and Ifrit slams into Iris causing it to roll out of its normal path. "You haven't changed mu..." This thought interrupted by Ifrit yet again hitting Iris, knocking it out. "Maybe you have changed a little." Zac stares the score as Vis retrieves his beyblade, using a echolocation like trick to find it.
They get ready to launch, Vis tilts his launcher to do a bounce launch and says, "you're faster. I can appreciate that." They launch and Sonar's accel frame grips the stadium giving it a boost of speed and knocking out Ifrit. "Though I learned a lot and figured out the best way to take out a fast target is to be faster." Zac states the score.
They grin at eachother and get ready to launch. Vis yells "retro launch." As he swings his launcher to the left. The beys collide head on then Iris rolls to the center. Ifrit charges into the center and Vis says, "now rolling counter." Ifrit hits Iris which uses the speed to roll up to the top of the stadium and arc back down with just as much energy. Before it hits Mytero says, "Honō no kabe." As Ifrit switches to the semiflat and the metal balls go to the center increasing spin speed and defecting Iris with enough force to KO.
Vis is down a point and gets ready for a normal launch as Mytero tilts his launcher. They launch and Mytero slams his launcher down and yells, "torch launch!" This attack hits Iris and diverts it's path and then goes in for another attack. "Now," says Mytero as he tightens the white jacket around his waist, "Ifrit, Enbā no ken!" Vis just tilts his head and says, "trick of the light." And the dreaded sword of embers just rolls right off Iris as it makes its way to the center. "Iris, spiral hold." Says Vis as his beyblade negates attacks for Ifrit and winning by a spin finish.
"Remember that launch you saw me testing?" Asks Vis, holding his launcher with it tilted sideways, "I need a helper to test it on." They get ready to launch and Vis yells, "Echo Boost!" As Iris spins on its layer before jetting forwards thanks to the accel frame p and slamming into Ifrit. Both beyblades are flung into the air and Ifrit bursts.
"That was fun," said Vis holding out his hand, "it was nice catching up." Mytero responds by saying, " I could say the same." Before shaking Vis' hand and leaving.
(Side note: anyone ever had one of their fingers go numb as you are typing?)
(Nov. 06, 2017 4:27 AM)MWF Wrote: Vis vs Mytero: Iris vs IfritNot really...
Mytero walks into the Maganda gym and finds Vis testing a new launch. He says, "if you don't mind me using the expression, long time no see." Vis laughs and says, "it's been a while sense I heard that voice. How's it going?" They catch up and then decide to battle. Zac, being his protective self, was there and is able to be a ref for the battle. Vis goes for the test launch as Mytero tilts his launcher and grasps the two power triggers on his launcher. They launch, and Ifrit slams into Iris causing it to roll out of its normal path. "You haven't changed mu..." This thought interrupted by Ifrit yet again hitting Iris, knocking it out. "Maybe you have changed a little." Zac stares the score as Vis retrieves his beyblade, using a echolocation like trick to find it.
They get ready to launch, Vis tilts his launcher to do a bounce launch and says, "you're faster. I can appreciate that." They launch and Sonar's accel frame grips the stadium giving it a boost of speed and knocking out Ifrit. "Though I learned a lot and figured out the best way to take out a fast target is to be faster." Zac states the score.
They grin at eachother and get ready to launch. Vis yells "retro launch." As he swings his launcher to the left. The beys collide head on then Iris rolls to the center. Ifrit charges into the center and Vis says, "now rolling counter." Ifrit hits Iris which uses the speed to roll up to the top of the stadium and arc back down with just as much energy. Before it hits Mytero says, "Honō no kabe." As Ifrit switches to the semiflat and the metal balls go to the center increasing spin speed and defecting Iris with enough force to KO.
Vis is down a point and gets ready for a normal launch as Mytero tilts his launcher. They launch and Mytero slams his launcher down and yells, "torch launch!" This attack hits Iris and diverts it's path and then goes in for another attack. "Now," says Mytero as he tightens the white jacket around his waist, "Ifrit, Enbā no ken!" Vis just tilts his head and says, "trick of the light." And the dreaded sword of embers just rolls right off Iris as it makes its way to the center. "Iris, spiral hold." Says Vis as his beyblade negates attacks for Ifrit and winning by a spin finish.
"Remember that launch you saw me testing?" Asks Vis, holding his launcher with it tilted sideways, "I need a helper to test it on." They get ready to launch and Vis yells, "Echo Boost!" As Iris spins on its layer before jetting forwards thanks to the accel frame p and slamming into Ifrit. Both beyblades are flung into the air and Ifrit bursts.
"That was fun," said Vis holding out his hand, "it was nice catching up." Mytero responds by saying, " I could say the same." Before shaking Vis' hand and leaving.
(Side note: anyone ever had one of their fingers go numb as you are typing?)
(Nov. 06, 2017 4:28 AM)Dragunix Wrote:(Nov. 06, 2017 4:27 AM)MWF Wrote: Vis vs Mytero: Iris vs IfritNot really...
Mytero walks into the Maganda gym and finds Vis testing a new launch. He says, "if you don't mind me using the expression, long time no see." Vis laughs and says, "it's been a while sense I heard that voice. How's it going?" They catch up and then decide to battle. Zac, being his protective self, was there and is able to be a ref for the battle. Vis goes for the test launch as Mytero tilts his launcher and grasps the two power triggers on his launcher. They launch, and Ifrit slams into Iris causing it to roll out of its normal path. "You haven't changed mu..." This thought interrupted by Ifrit yet again hitting Iris, knocking it out. "Maybe you have changed a little." Zac stares the score as Vis retrieves his beyblade, using a echolocation like trick to find it.
They get ready to launch, Vis tilts his launcher to do a bounce launch and says, "you're faster. I can appreciate that." They launch and Sonar's accel frame grips the stadium giving it a boost of speed and knocking out Ifrit. "Though I learned a lot and figured out the best way to take out a fast target is to be faster." Zac states the score.
They grin at eachother and get ready to launch. Vis yells "retro launch." As he swings his launcher to the left. The beys collide head on then Iris rolls to the center. Ifrit charges into the center and Vis says, "now rolling counter." Ifrit hits Iris which uses the speed to roll up to the top of the stadium and arc back down with just as much energy. Before it hits Mytero says, "Honō no kabe." As Ifrit switches to the semiflat and the metal balls go to the center increasing spin speed and defecting Iris with enough force to KO.
Vis is down a point and gets ready for a normal launch as Mytero tilts his launcher. They launch and Mytero slams his launcher down and yells, "torch launch!" This attack hits Iris and diverts it's path and then goes in for another attack. "Now," says Mytero as he tightens the white jacket around his waist, "Ifrit, Enbā no ken!" Vis just tilts his head and says, "trick of the light." And the dreaded sword of embers just rolls right off Iris as it makes its way to the center. "Iris, spiral hold." Says Vis as his beyblade negates attacks for Ifrit and winning by a spin finish.
"Remember that launch you saw me testing?" Asks Vis, holding his launcher with it tilted sideways, "I need a helper to test it on." They get ready to launch and Vis yells, "Echo Boost!" As Iris spins on its layer before jetting forwards thanks to the accel frame p and slamming into Ifrit. Both beyblades are flung into the air and Ifrit bursts.
"That was fun," said Vis holding out his hand, "it was nice catching up." Mytero responds by saying, " I could say the same." Before shaking Vis' hand and leaving.
(Side note: anyone ever had one of their fingers go numb as you are typing?)
Well as I was typing the story my pinky on my right hand went numb. It is a weird feeling. It feels stiff yet when you rest the hand on the ground it feels like the finger is over a gap. Like I said, it is very weird.
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(Nov. 06, 2017 4:31 AM)MWF Wrote:(Nov. 06, 2017 4:28 AM)Dragunix Wrote: Not really...
Well as I was typing the story my pinky on my right hand went numb. It is a weird feeling. It feels stiff yet when you rest the hand on the ground it feels like the finger is over a gap. Like I said, it is very weird.
It seems U r a typer of a very incredible speed...It happens to my left hand fingers when I play my guitar...
(Nov. 06, 2017 5:00 AM)Eleanor Wrote:(Nov. 06, 2017 4:31 AM)MWF Wrote: Well as I was typing the story my pinky on my right hand went numb. It is a weird feeling. It feels stiff yet when you rest the hand on the ground it feels like the finger is over a gap. Like I said, it is very weird.
It seems U r a typer of a very incredible speed...It happens to my left hand fingers when I play my guitar...
it most likely due the fact that i hunt and peck. it also happens when I play on my computer. I never use my pinky for things like this and that.
This one is a little different.
Vis it testing his new echo boost and as Zac walks by the string on Vis' string launcher snaps leaving Vis confused as he holds the launcher in one hand and the string in the other as Iris slowly stops spinning. Zac decides to give Vis something. "Here," says Zac, "it was going to be a gift for later but you need it now." Vis grabs it and says, "it's a light launcher." Zac just tells Vis to try it out. So Vis does and is surprised by the power. "It is a neo light launcher," said Zac glowing with pride, " I invented it myself." Vis tests the gear on it then asks, "you have another one of these, a grip, a beylogger, and the neo equivalent of a long winder? I think I have a friend who will like it." Zac gets Vis the parts and then Vis assembles it. And goes to where Rykos tends to train. "Hey Rykos," says Vis, "I have a prototype for you to test. It will fix the inertia problem you have with nova dragoon." Rykos takes the launcher and says, "I will test it." Vis grins and says, "great and how about a single battle to test it out? I just got an upgrade also." He pulls out his launcher a gray light launcher with a more bulky design on a gray grip with white rubber and with a caribener grip along with a black power trigger with gold accents. And they get ready to launch. When they launch the extra power causes both beys to burst on impact. "I am giving you this prototype for a bit," says Vis, "the finished version of your launcher will be completely integrated into one piece. Just as you use it write down some feed back and what colors you want and send it to my brother in about a week. Ok?" Rykos nods and says, "no problem."
(I am going to end it here and finish it in a part two. It is midnight when I typed this and I am tired.)
Vis it testing his new echo boost and as Zac walks by the string on Vis' string launcher snaps leaving Vis confused as he holds the launcher in one hand and the string in the other as Iris slowly stops spinning. Zac decides to give Vis something. "Here," says Zac, "it was going to be a gift for later but you need it now." Vis grabs it and says, "it's a light launcher." Zac just tells Vis to try it out. So Vis does and is surprised by the power. "It is a neo light launcher," said Zac glowing with pride, " I invented it myself." Vis tests the gear on it then asks, "you have another one of these, a grip, a beylogger, and the neo equivalent of a long winder? I think I have a friend who will like it." Zac gets Vis the parts and then Vis assembles it. And goes to where Rykos tends to train. "Hey Rykos," says Vis, "I have a prototype for you to test. It will fix the inertia problem you have with nova dragoon." Rykos takes the launcher and says, "I will test it." Vis grins and says, "great and how about a single battle to test it out? I just got an upgrade also." He pulls out his launcher a gray light launcher with a more bulky design on a gray grip with white rubber and with a caribener grip along with a black power trigger with gold accents. And they get ready to launch. When they launch the extra power causes both beys to burst on impact. "I am giving you this prototype for a bit," says Vis, "the finished version of your launcher will be completely integrated into one piece. Just as you use it write down some feed back and what colors you want and send it to my brother in about a week. Ok?" Rykos nods and says, "no problem."
(I am going to end it here and finish it in a part two. It is midnight when I typed this and I am tired.)
Can the characters from the actual series be used along with OCS?