I've decided to post the short raps I make in my spare time, enjoy!

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We called him the galloper

Rising and running all over us

Slashing and stabbing

The planets surface

Snatching and grabbing

We cry and tremble

We fear the pain that knows no end though

We bleed

We fleed (purposeful mistake)

We trapped down on our knees

Here comes a savior

The braver

Who stands up to our merciless slayer

Monikered the traveler

He rumbles and rolling

The merciless ravager

Tagging and flagging

Hes bagging the bragging

The Glad man.

Bad man.

Sad man.

Dead.

[hook] The clock strikes another time

Another man dead, makes nine

The clock strikes another time

A hole digger's soul is mine

There is no light to fight this darkness

Don't try to start it

Or you'll be left with much less than you start with

You can't out run this

So don't just run, sprint

'Cause we're comin

And we're running and gunnin'

And there won't be somthin to be done with

Don't be killed

Get some

Don't lose it

Win some

Find some-thing to believe in

Before we come and getcha'

[hook]x2

Life?

It will collapse

Planets?

They will collapse

Raise the stakes and make an attack

So round the troops we're taking this back

Rebuild from rubble

Trouble

Leave you in a puddle

(Bubbles)

Of your own waste

So make haste

Cause this ruin is ruining

So get out

And break face.

This is about a post apocalyptic planet with bandits and raiders attacking what's left of sentient life, then a cool guy comes in and saves them.

This is just something I made in my spare time.

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Sun's blazing, hazing, it's amazing. What wonderful weather for gaming.

heh.

Another beat see, always leaves me feeling quite geeky.

I got the speed, see me playing until my shirt gets creasy

(greasy)

Eyes are hazed, I'm trapped inside a mental maze.

I wasn't always like this but this business hurts my physical fitness.

Now I'm alchemixing like a DJ, listening to Dragon Shouts like Ihk Roh Dou.

If you haven figured it out this covers a game that's fallen off.

I speak of Skyrim, a PC program that's quite addicting now.

I swear before this came to the PC I did go out.

So I'm wasting away and it's Orcs that I slay.

Ow..

This is something.

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Listen in

Come join the huddle

Now of course it’s gone POP

I wasn’t born in a bubble

But for a moment you thought I was subtle

But still I will bring a ring

Through all this piss-posturing

These other Hip-Hoppers bring

Still thinking

They can change the hip-hoppers scene

Unknowing

This is an unbreakable regime

Since 70's like

"Love, it Doesn't Cost a Thing"

But finally

Out comes a rapper that's a gaming geek

Bringing things to people

Giving pleasing reads

Please,

Let's keep it moving

So people can feel the music

And get to grovin'

I suppose as long as this doesn't become a 'rap battling' thread it can remain open …

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still posi

I don't really like "battle raps" so I don't ever see that being a problem.

Your delivery is kind of robotic. Work on flow, and don't just say words and find some other word that rhymes and call it a rap. Hate to cause ill will but still.

This isn't directed at Harmony. BTW, this was a freestly with the help of a rhyming dictionary, lol.

Okay Ralph, you think you're macho(Ralph Macchio, get it?), but you stand frozen when I come approaching. I'm the King. I spit and flow, and you're shopping at the Dollar Stow(Stow lol). I have a golden glow but your a dim match in a wet cave. You crave my rhymes, I'm your mom's fave. I'm pushing these rappers into their graves. Crushing them like a tidal wave, my rhymes are a flood. And your mud beneath my Nike's, you can't get me out your psyche.

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6 God is watching and I hope you're prepared to face him

Thanks for the tips, but full disclosure this is an old rap I posted on another forum. Looking back on it I realize all of the mistakes I made in it. But I always appreciate the input!

I also have a few raps I keep under wraps (pun intended). Unfortunately, I lost my archive on my laptop cause somebody *coughNortoncough* "accidentally" deleted my save files when restarting my computer.

I might add something to this conversation when I feel like rattling off a freestyle again.

Will say however, this isn't too bad, but word play could be a little better, but not bad.

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Come check out my Youtube Channel here! It's all about video games!

They say I should retire, that I'll never be Supa Hot Fire (https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=MeB3eYk1Ze0).
They say that they hate how I am attired, how that they want me to get fired. I hate to hate on the haters, but I gotta say laters.
I gotta put all the hate in a crate and send my love on a dove above. All my life it's been a race to see who can be the best lowlife, all I got was more and more strife.
All I wanted was a nice slice of the spice that makes up life.

That just comes off the top of my head , I don't do those regularly.

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Signature credit to Leet.o

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i don't like coffee

I never have.

*Ginga*.. you're drunk bro... go home.. : )

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Why would I be suspended????

HMS summarised:




Anything not Tornado Type S:  Wolborg will leave you #rekt




Otherwise:  Go crazy with Ultimate Grip Flat 




For something less cookie-cutter:  Jiraiya sure is sexy

Is Wolborg 2 useless for competitive play?

Extremely useless. 
Now, if you come upon one I'll just PM you my address so you can throw it away. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

I wasn't looking for Beyblade Underwear, I swear

I didn't really expect a nice little community of people who enjoy free styling as much as I do. For me personally, music is a life force that, drives me, for lack of a better word. I am glad that there is a group of people out here that I can share it with!