So as some of you may know, creative writing has always been a passion of mine. For brevity's sake, I'll cut to the chase. I have two short stories and a creative writing contest coming up. The after-school writers club I'm in can't seem to agree on which one of the two I should submit.
I was thinking I'd see what you guys though. If any of you have time, would you be able to read through both of them and leave some feedback/vote for whatever you thought was superior? Thanks in advance.
There are two categories that entries can be submitted under; either a narrative essay or short story.
Writer's Block
This is an autobiographical narrative essay, that I wrote in a style leaning more towards "Narrative" than "essay"
Eternally Missed
This is a short story, somewhat romantic in theme. Also partially inspired by a Muse B-Side, hence the name.
Once again, thanks in advance for the help.
-Aster
I was thinking I'd see what you guys though. If any of you have time, would you be able to read through both of them and leave some feedback/vote for whatever you thought was superior? Thanks in advance.
There are two categories that entries can be submitted under; either a narrative essay or short story.
Writer's Block
This is an autobiographical narrative essay, that I wrote in a style leaning more towards "Narrative" than "essay"
Eternally Missed
This is a short story, somewhat romantic in theme. Also partially inspired by a Muse B-Side, hence the name.
Once again, thanks in advance for the help.
-Aster
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