WBO Tag Team Writing Tournament! Team 8 vs. Team 2!

Entry One
Entry 2
Same rules as usual. First to five votes wins. So, let's get this one started!
I simply like the grammer in entry one better. I CAST THY VOTE FOR ENTRY ONE.
First one by a long shot. Just caught my attention and didn't bore me like the 2nd one did.
(Dec. 13, 2011  11:12 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: First one by a long shot.
and why is it your vote? you have to explain why, you see this is what creates spam, okay time to read these entries

After reading the entries this is it:
Entry 1: Good grammar used, awesome story plot
Entry 2: There was alot of crocs, they could've used eg. he,she instead of using croc, croc, croc over and over again

Overall, both entries did good, but my vote goes to entry #1

Erm... Tournament's been killed. Sorry. Most participants don't really visit the WBO anymore, really, including the original creator. Plus, too many people dropped out.