Vengeance [Fantasy Story]

Poll: Do you like it?

Yes
33.33%
1
No
0%
0
I don't know yet...
0%
0
Always will!
33.33%
1
Never will!
33.33%
1
Total: 100% 3 vote(s)
Hey, this is my newest/latest story non-Beyblade related! It will possibly be a trilogy based on if this one actually gets finished!

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Chapter 1

Story removed due to extreme violence.
You might want to tone the violence down some...

A 14 year old with a love life? Um, ok...

Also, what do u mean by hybrid? I'm assuming it's not what I think by the way you described it...
(Apr. 04, 2014  1:06 AM)DRAGON KING Wrote: You might want to tone the violence down some...

A 14 year old with a love life? Um, ok...

Also, what do u mean by hybrid? I'm assuming it's not what I think by the way you described it...

It's a newly discovered gender that was found in 2347, the story takes place in 2365. A Hybrid is just either a boy with a girl's face, voice and thoughts; or a girl with a boy's face, voice, and thoughts. Like a he-she that people sometimes say in their early childhood.
This is far to violent to be allowed on this forum. Post it on a site more appropriate possibly.