This Here Town/Big Soggy Tears (Ballad/Lyrics)

Fast paced ska:

Courtney's all alone in this new place
So ashamed to show her face
She got a man, and I wanna shoot him down
With this here gun in this here town

A few weeks pass, and they're as happy as can be
She got what she want, from what I see
I walked away, and I hope to shoot him down
With this here gun, in this here town

It's been so long, and I still love you
But wait, she feels it's o'er between the two
My heart lifts as she shoots him down
With this here gun in this here town

We had our dance, and it was great
It seems, oh it seems I took her bait
She broke it off, and she shot me down
With this here gun in this here town

[Blues Guitar Solo]

Slow Acoustic:

Oh baby it's an art to live
But she's gonna make it hard to live
Her two big green eyes are leakin' like a sieve
But I still wouldn't make it
But I never would give
Quote:My heart lifts as shoots him down

Uh?

Quote:Her two big green eyes are leakin' like a sieve

This line is silly.

Also, Big Soggy Tears? Really?
1. Fixed. Line was supposed to say "My heart lifts as SHE shoots him down"

2. That line was by Sublime, we incorporate some Sublime lyrics in some songs.
(Sep. 25, 2008  1:57 AM)Evan Wrote: 2. That line was by Sublime, we incorporate some Sublime lyrics in some songs.

That doesn't make it a good line. Also, I find it pretty cheap to put other band's lyrics into yours. Speechless
(Sep. 25, 2008  2:07 AM)Bey Brad Wrote:
(Sep. 25, 2008  1:57 AM)Evan Wrote: 2. That line was by Sublime, we incorporate some Sublime lyrics in some songs.

That doesn't make it a good line. Also, I find it pretty cheap to put other band's lyrics into yours. Speechless

Sublime did this a lot, and it wasn't my idea for the lyrics to go in. My singer, Jordan, wanted it. He thinks it fits for some reason Chocked_2;;
Well ... it doesn't. Speechless
(Sep. 25, 2008  2:15 AM)Bey Brad Wrote: Well ... it doesn't. Speechless

Hahaha I agree, but Jordan can get rather pissy.