The real life Beyblade story......

Hello users from WBO, Im theironangel.

I made an awesome real-life beyblade story.

these are the characters and my friends.

Lenard Ramirez

Age: 11
Beyblade:Blitz Unicorno TH160RSF

Lenard Ramirez is my real-for-real name. One of my team's best soccer players.

Marvy Molina

Age: 10
Beyblade:Storm Capricorn W105RF

If you had heard about Marvy Molina in my Beyblade series', but for real Marvy is my classmate
his birthday is April 27. that explains why Marvy's age is 10.

Matthew Angeles

Age: 11
Beyblade:Galaxy Pegasus W105W2F (now) Evil Gasher 125F (former)

Matthew was my friend through childhood, Matthew and I were partners in both Beyblade and soccer.

Terry Caballero

Age: 11
Beyblade:(none)

If you have heard Terry in beyblade metal storm, actually terry is my seatmate, ever since Grade 3 and Grade 4 she has feelings for me (despite me not knowing what her feelings are).

Alex Pinote

Age: 10

Alex is my rival in many challenges, although shes a girl (despite the fact that I hate girls). She had a bitter childhood, Because, Alex's Father died of an accident, and Alex's Mother died because of Cancer, I felt sorry for her.

Keezer Oquias
Age:12
Beyblade:Ldrago Destroy F:S

Keezer was the mysterious guy that fought me to a beybattle, but i lost to him, so i decided that i needed a new kind of power/Beyblade.

Thats all my charcters/friends.
So ...

Where is the story exactly ... ?
sorry insomiac, its "real-life" but I can remember a little the past, im not a physco.
No, she's asking where the actual story is. There are no chapters in this thread, at all.
If there are no chapters could we close it? .-.
dude is insomiac a she?

(Aug. 10, 2012  1:44 PM)Ironangel99 Wrote: dude is insomiac a she?

Yes. She is.
Now if I were you, I'd post chapters of this or else this will get closed.
Other than that, there really is no point in making this thread.
Or explain to us what this thread is for. I.e. share our real life beyblade stories.
(Aug. 10, 2012  1:44 PM)Ironangel99 Wrote: dude is insomiac a she?
my post was to the thread stater.
K,seems i remembered it now

At part 1....

Lenard:*drawing
beyblade designs*
Matthew:psst...Lenard, lets battle on beypark with the gang
Lenard:kkkk
Matthew:And bring your Attack-type stadium.
Lenard:I need curfew first.
Matthew:me too, good point
Two ours after school
Terry:Hi Lenard!!!Wink
Lenard:Yeah hi
Terry:Umm......Lenard can we go on a date?
Lenard:k thats a good idea
Lenard:Meet me at beypark at 5:30 pm.
Terry:*runs on the school classroom Class-A*
LenardConfusedhe so weird...
Alex:so what are you doing with Lenard?
Terry:Were going on a date!
Alex:...
Alex:I wanna go on a date to!
Lenard:um ladies?
*Alex and Terry start pulling arms like tugg of war!*
*When at 5:30*
Lenard and Matthew:3,2,1 LET IT RIP!!!!!!!!
Lenard: Go unicorno!!!!!!!
Lenard:good thing its on barrage mode!
*Unicorno moves like a flower formation*
Keezer:Hey Lenard!
Keezer:Battle my L-drago Destroy F:$

TO BE CONTINUED...
whats an OP?
Sorry but this story is really bad... i recommend making it like a real story.
The OP is the first post of the thread...

And yeah, make it like a real story, rather than putting the name, then dialogue.

"I can't believe this would happen!" Miles said.

Devin put his hand on Miles' shoulder. "Don't worry..." Devin encouraged. "We'll get through this..."

"Thank you, Devin..." Miles replied...


Kinda more like that above. That would be better...
@ironangel OP is Original Post aka the first post of this thread. Just click edit, full edit or quick edit, then, well, edit.
Edit: I have been beaten and will humbly surrender.
(Aug. 10, 2012  2:19 PM)Nitro52 Wrote: WTF THIS STORY IS... sorry but this story is really bad... i recommend making it like a real story.

Dude,Nitro you said bad words darn i need improvments!!!!
What? Sorry I don't know what you just said...anyway...On one hand, Nitro, maybe you shouldn't be so harsh. On the other hand, sorry, he's kinda right. The story needs work. But if you put your heart to it, it will get better. Also, defstamina is a wise person. Take his advice.
(Aug. 10, 2012  2:36 PM)Beyniac Wrote: What? Sorry I don't know what you just said...anyway...On one hand, Nitro, maybe you shouldn't be so harsh. On the other hand, sorry, he's kinda right. The story needs work. But if you put your heart to it, it will get better. Also, defstamina is a wise person. Take his advice.

Sorry. I just get upset when stories don't come together...