The adventures of Brooklyn chapter 1 the adventure begins

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Info
Name Brooklyn Valentine
Age: 15
Home town: surrey BC Canada
Race: African Canadian
Hair: Little afro

Chapter 1

Brooklyn hurry up and shower tomorrow is your big day you only six teen once said Brooklyn mom. I cant wait tomorrow will be such a good day and a good day to beyblade to i need some practice before world championships time to go to sleep. As Brooklyn was dreaming he has this dream wear everything was dark kinda like he was in another realm. He walked around when he heard this loud roar he started to run but dint know wear he was running to but he was scared then he stop he heard it again and as he turn around there was a lion black body and wings it looked like a ghost lion walking towards him the lion yelled out my name is Cyroar I am the guardian of the Valentine family for almost 10000 years Brooklyn said what do u want from me Cyroar said am hear to protect you from danger what danger cyroar said are u familiar of the game called beyblade yea i am if you dint know some people have different beyblades then you like the world champion team gate guardians yeah there so cool they never lost a match yeah thats because they have the guardian in there blade to give them extra power they plan on using that power for evil and to open the gate and release the forbidden bladder 10000 years ago there was a masked man who had this extremely powerful beyblade known as the red dragon also knowen as Kayor he controlled half the world and your great great great great great great great great great great grandfather defeated him thats when me and him teamed up and after the battle your grandpa vanished but your grandfather last words wear to protect my family with honer and loyalty now you most stop the gate guardians befour its to late then brooklyn suddenly woke up and in his right hand was a beyblade with a lion on it and it said Cyroar and Brooklyn said it was all a dream how did... no it cant be then Brooklyn mother yelled down hurry up and shower todays the big day
you sot to do some work its really hard to tell who is speaking
this isnt mine Joyful_2