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The Legend of Herobrine (accepting character request)

Poll: who do you think is cooler (please wait until you're done reading the story and the story is over)

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Dec. 20, 2012  5:29 AM
 
Hello Im going to tell the first story about Minecraft

chapter:1 "the creation"

Hey Herobrine you wanna go mining for Diamonds hehe sure notch (in the mine) hey look a bunch of red-stone what kinda pickaxe do you got "said notch" uuuh hmm let me check"said Herobrine"Stone,steel,gold,what the heck a half eaten bagel well thats what I have.Use the stone Pickaxe"said Notch" ok "said Herobrine" he mined through the redstone and mined,and mined,and mined until.Diamonds! "screamed Notch"!!! Diamonds"gasped Herobrine" but its above a lava pit on a small ledge we'll have to get it come on"said notch" Actually I will do it"said Herobrine"Herobrine hit the Diamond and his pickaxe broke.Danget"said Herobrine"c'mon let me do it "said Notch" here scoot over more,AAAAHHHHH AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!"screamed Herobrine"as he fell into the lava NOOOOOOOOOO HEROBRINE no brother.
Dec. 20, 2012  6:01 AM
 
That has nothing to do with the official series. This should have been posted in the Your Creations forum.
Dec. 20, 2012  4:28 PM
 
sorry I will try to remember to change it to the right one next time.
oh by the way do you wanna request a character and make your own.
Dec. 20, 2012  4:53 PM
 
And the story should really be "revised" and "edited," mainly because it'll help readers better to understand what's going on, rather than "make corrections while they gaze about and read." I know for one it kind of hurted my eyes.