Well, this is a fantasy Beyblade Story.
There are normal humans,
Faeries: look like humans, but they've got some magical things, etc. and live in another world
and Vampires: immortal humans with sharp teeth, they drink blood
this is the main character:
Lilja Sanoja
Lilja has snow-white hair and dark blue eyes
Her bey is Miekka Tiikeri(it's finnish and means Sword Tiger)It's a bey made of pure white crystal.
she was born in Finland but lives in Japan now.
Prolougue
A man sneaked through the night. He stopped and turned." I know you're there, Koira. Come tell me where Thasha Dhul is and give the Fairy crystal to me. Then I'll spare her." he whispered.
A woman stepped out of the shadows. "No! You're a liar.I know she is safe and I would never give it to you. The fairy crystal is safe. You wouldn't even recognize it, if you were holding it in your hand."she spat. suddenly the was a flash of light. As it faded, the night was silent, and there were no signs of the man and the woman.
Fairys walking Fairy paths.
The crystal it will change the worlds.
One girl, she and her friends
will stop the bad with crystal swords.
The peace,deceptive and silent
but the fading dark will never end.
if you want to do a character request, it must contain:
Species(Faerie, Vampire or Human):
Bey:
It's special move:
Name:
the look of the person:
Character:
and please be honest. I even WANT critic, so I can get better.
There are normal humans,
Faeries: look like humans, but they've got some magical things, etc. and live in another world
and Vampires: immortal humans with sharp teeth, they drink blood
this is the main character:
Lilja Sanoja
Lilja has snow-white hair and dark blue eyes
Her bey is Miekka Tiikeri(it's finnish and means Sword Tiger)It's a bey made of pure white crystal.
she was born in Finland but lives in Japan now.
Prolougue
A man sneaked through the night. He stopped and turned." I know you're there, Koira. Come tell me where Thasha Dhul is and give the Fairy crystal to me. Then I'll spare her." he whispered.
A woman stepped out of the shadows. "No! You're a liar.I know she is safe and I would never give it to you. The fairy crystal is safe. You wouldn't even recognize it, if you were holding it in your hand."she spat. suddenly the was a flash of light. As it faded, the night was silent, and there were no signs of the man and the woman.
Fairys walking Fairy paths.
The crystal it will change the worlds.
One girl, she and her friends
will stop the bad with crystal swords.
The peace,deceptive and silent
but the fading dark will never end.
if you want to do a character request, it must contain:
Species(Faerie, Vampire or Human):
Bey:
It's special move:
Name:
the look of the person:
Character:
and please be honest. I even WANT critic, so I can get better.