This is a three book series i'm planning on writing...
BOOK 1 AND 2 WILL BE STARTED SOON!
I've only started on a very short intro... if people like the intro, i'll continue to write the story.

F3AR: BOOK ONE

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INTRO

Some say fear is Evil. Some say fear is to be used for good. none of this matters because if you're smart, then you know, fear is what keeps you alive...

F3AR IS GOOD

I ran through the narrow corriders. panting like a wild dog. The nightmare was horrible. I needed to wake up. This nightmare was like no other. This one had a stranglehold on the very air I was breathing. I looked at the man before me only to lose all vision and have a strange falling sensation...

FALLING

The Sky was at my fingertips...
Everything i could ever do or say was flooding through my brain...
Thoughts, memories... love....

"AAARRRGGGHHH!!"
I woke up panting...
I was covered in sweat. I had woke up at the last minute just like all the other dreams. Nightmares. Fear...
My mind was clouded with doubt... how could i know what was real and what was not real... for what is real but another figment of our imagination... i contemplated on this only to see i was mad. Madness. That is what i fear...

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Im the type of writer that likes to put may confusing situations and connect the dots at the end.... please give it a chance.

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"What is peace, if not an illusion of war?" - Bunnii2165

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Well I like it! Is this story got to do with Beyblade? Your are allowed to make stories that are not about stories right?
By the way I think you should get the spelling right and that you umm.. Wait so this is the intro right? So are you going to upload chapter 1 because I want to read it.
I just don`t know wether there is an actual nightmare or is it just him saying it is a nightmare because it is so bad? Maybe I am not supposed to know.

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(by the way my name used to be rockleone40000)
I like Defense and stamina types. My favourite is Defense

AWESOME. I THIS IS GONNA BE A GREAT STORY. PM me when a new chapter is released.

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Are you accepting characters because i have a good idea for one.

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Thanks to Synth for the sig and the avatar
PM me for Mario Kart Wii, Brawl or Pokemon. My Pokemon FC is 2365 6466 0001
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“I thought the devil was a goat-man with a curly beard and horns. I was wrong. Now I know the devil has no face… Literally.”
Read my new story Faceless. It's promised to be bigger and better than my last one.
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Faceless...pid1080518

hahahha. look im glad you like it so i'll update soon... as for chapter 1 it will be uploaded soon ok...

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sorry no character requests...

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"What is peace, if not an illusion of war?" - Bunnii2165

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The next chapter is up... its not finished... This is a new type of writing for me: i've never tried a mystery novel so criticism would be appreciated...

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"What is peace, if not an illusion of war?" - Bunnii2165

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Really short chapters. Also, it seems nearly incoherent. And not all of your "I"s are capitalized.

By the way, I'm pretty sure there's a video game called "F3AR", but I'm not certain.

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Really short chapters. Also, it seems nearly incoherent. And not all of your "I"s are capitalized.

By the way, I'm pretty sure there's a video game called "F3AR", but I'm not certain.

Yes there is. thats why i came to this story.

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Thanks to Synth for the sig and the avatar
PM me for Mario Kart Wii, Brawl or Pokemon. My Pokemon FC is 2365 6466 0001
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“I thought the devil was a goat-man with a curly beard and horns. I was wrong. Now I know the devil has no face… Literally.”
Read my new story Faceless. It's promised to be bigger and better than my last one.
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Faceless...pid1080518

uhh well the first was a prologue and chapter one isn't finished and the yes there is a game but this has nothing to do with that

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all my i's aren't capitalized.... well im not perfect

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"What is peace, if not an illusion of war?" - Bunnii2165

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