The Dolphin's Adventure (not accepting character requests!) Vote on Poll! (not writing anymore)

Poll: How is the story?

It's awesome! Keep writing!
44.44%
8
It's pretty good! Keep up the good work!
27.78%
5
It's OK. Keep it up.
16.67%
3
Not that good...
5.56%
1
I don't like it all.
5.56%
1
Total: 100% 18 vote(s)
"Go Delphinus!" I yelled as my Oceanic Delphinus 80HRF charged at my opponent, forcing a stadium-out. Then, a mysterious blader came up to the stadium. "Battle me next!" he said.
"Sure! But you'll lose to my Delphinus, though." I replied. "Don't count on it! The blader said.
I'll win with my Electric Equuleus!" The blader pulled out his bey. The Equuleus clear wheel was blue and was smaller compared to other clear wheels, and the Electric metal wheel looked like an exact copy of Clay but made of metal. It's painted crimson red. I couldn't see what its track and bottom were but they were blue and the track was tall. He set his bey on the launcher and inserted the ripcord. I did the same. We both yelled: "3! 2! 1! Go shoot!" As our beys flew into the stadium, I could see his track and bottom: 200RD.

Make sure to post a character! If it's good, I'll accept it!
i like ur story you should add more to it though
character request
name:shadow
bey:thunder(only compatible with r-drago)r-drago90hf l-dragos rival bey
description:has like a mix of sora masamune and regis hair wears a short sleeve jacket like tobios and uses a grey and orange light launcher oh and hes a good guy duhh lol
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:07 AM)Idk Wrote: i like ur story you should add more to it though
character request
name:shadow
bey:thunder r-drago90hf l-dragos rival bey
description:has like a mix of sora masamune and regis hair wears a short sleeve jacket like tobios and uses a grey and orange light launcher oh and hes a good guy duhh lol
Hmm, accepted, but he will be minor.
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:11 AM)L-Drago rules Wrote:
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:07 AM)Idk Wrote: i like ur story you should add more to it though
character request
name:shadow
bey:thunder r-drago90hf l-dragos rival bey
description:has like a mix of sora masamune and regis hair wears a short sleeve jacket like tobios and uses a grey and orange light launcher oh and hes a good guy duhh lol
Hmm, accepted, but he will be minor.

ok at least im a part of something lol when do you think you will add another chapter or somthing
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:15 AM)Idk Wrote:
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:11 AM)L-Drago rules Wrote:
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:07 AM)Idk Wrote: i like ur story you should add more to it though
character request
name:shadow
bey:thunder r-drago90hf l-dragos rival bey
description:has like a mix of sora masamune and regis hair wears a short sleeve jacket like tobios and uses a grey and orange light launcher oh and hes a good guy duhh lol
Hmm, accepted, but he will be minor.

ok at least im a part of something lol when do you think you will add another chapter or somthing
Tomorrow.
Name:Tenji Okana
Bey: Static Libra FM145 ESB
Static: it resembles the hyper wheel but its metal is shaped like lightning bolts
FM145:like the M145 track the beyblader is allowed to move the track to different side but FM 145 ffreely moves from side to side causing a static effect
ESB:like Es its a bit bigger with a free moving ball keeping the beys balance intact
character apperance: Like Tobio(capt.capri) just black with black hair
Personality:ecstatic and friendly
Special move: Cybernetic Shockwave -Due to FM145 it creates a heavy electric field out from the bey constantly shocking the the other bey with electric shocks causing the bey to lose balance and slow down
Hope you like it
your story is cool but id add to it, give it flavor, put meat on the bones, ahhh you know what i mean, any way good story
character request
name: Dylan
bey: storm leone 100 fs
description: dull, confusing and smart. he really doesnt fit in much, usually docile. he has black jeans, a red shirt with a question mark (?) in the middle. also wears black coat (unzipped)
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:21 AM)Kid Sniper Wrote: Name:Tenji Okana
Bey: Static Libra FM145 ESB
Static: it resembles the hyper wheel but its metal is shaped like lightning bolts
FM145:like the M145 track the beyblader is allowed to move the track to different side but FM 145 ffreely moves from side to side causing a static effect
ESB:like Es its a bit bigger with a free moving ball keeping the beys balance intact
character apperance: Like Tobio(capt.capri) just black with black hair
Personality:ecstatic and friendly
Special move: Cybernetic Shockwave -Due to FM145 it creates a heavy electric field out from the bey constantly shocking the the other bey with electric shocks causing the bey to lose balance and slow down
Hope you like it
Accepted, but he will appear later.
What do you think of the story?
lol how far later Pinching_eyes its good
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:22 AM)shiny cthulu Wrote: your story is cool but id add to it, give it flavor, put meat on the bones, ahhh you know what i mean, any way good story
character request
name: Dylan
bey: storm leone 100 fs
description: dull, confusing and smart. he really doesnt fit in much, usually docile. he has black jeans, a red shirt with a question mark (?) in the middle. also wears black coat (unzipped)
Sorry, not accepted but he will have a cameo.
Thx for the feedback BTW, make sure to vote on the poll!
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:28 AM)L-Drago rules Wrote:
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:22 AM)shiny cthulu Wrote: your story is cool but id add to it, give it flavor, put meat on the bones, ahhh you know what i mean, any way good story
character request
name: Dylan
bey: storm leone 100 fs
description: dull, confusing and smart. he really doesnt fit in much, usually docile. he has black jeans, a red shirt with a question mark (?) in the middle. also wears black coat (unzipped)
Sorry, not accepted but he will have a cameo.
Thx for the feedback BTW, make sure to vote on the poll!

whats cameo?
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:27 AM)Kid Sniper Wrote: lol how far later Pinching_eyes its good
5-10 chapters.
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:30 AM)shiny cthulu Wrote:
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:28 AM)L-Drago rules Wrote:
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:22 AM)shiny cthulu Wrote: your story is cool but id add to it, give it flavor, put meat on the bones, ahhh you know what i mean, any way good story
character request
name: Dylan
bey: storm leone 100 fs
description: dull, confusing and smart. he really doesnt fit in much, usually docile. he has black jeans, a red shirt with a question mark (?) in the middle. also wears black coat (unzipped)
Sorry, not accepted but he will have a cameo.
Thx for the feedback BTW, make sure to vote on the poll!

whats cameo?
A cameo is a short appearance.
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:31 AM)L-Drago rules Wrote:
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:27 AM)Kid Sniper Wrote: lol how far later Pinching_eyes its good
5-10 chapters.
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:30 AM)shiny cthulu Wrote:
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:28 AM)L-Drago rules Wrote:
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:22 AM)shiny cthulu Wrote: your story is cool but id add to it, give it flavor, put meat on the bones, ahhh you know what i mean, any way good story
character request
name: Dylan
bey: storm leone 100 fs
description: dull, confusing and smart. he really doesnt fit in much, usually docile. he has black jeans, a red shirt with a question mark (?) in the middle. also wears black coat (unzipped)
Sorry, not accepted but he will have a cameo.
Thx for the feedback BTW, make sure to vote on the poll!

whats cameo?
A cameo is a short appearance.

thought he wasnt accepted.
He's accepted for a cameo.
be happy you got one he means hes just gonna appear as like a contestent in a tourney or something but wont really affect the main characters
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:41 AM)Idk Wrote: be happy you got one he means hes just gonna appear as like a contestent in a tourney or something but wont really affect the main characters

oh i got it now.
character: zane
age:14
bey: thunder leone
personality:he is a teen that keeps things to him self than thinks he better than anyone else eather
thats my charecter!
(Mar. 05, 2011  5:46 AM)zaneeago Wrote: character: zane
age:14
bey: thunder leone
personality:he is a teen that keeps things to him self than thinks he better than anyone else eather
thats my charecter!
What's the track and bottom and the special move?
heres 4 characters

Name: Izuma Inzori
BeyBlade: starts with: Silent Ninja MSBSCH85 RHF/RS, final form is: Silent Samurai MKSCH85 WRHF/RWD

BeyBlade description:
Face: A shuriken in the middle, between two kantanas and the writing SAMURAI for Silent Samurai and NINJA for Silent Ninja (color: all decals black on silver background)
Silent: think of Lightning with the multi hit mode (renamed Rapid Strike mode) as thick shurikens, and upper mode (renamed Slice mode) as a kantana (color: un-painted)
Samurai: think of Kerbecs + L-Drago I with the 'rings' as shurikens and the dragon heads as kantanas (color; silver)
Ninja: same as Samurai except that the dragon heads are shaped like kunai (color: silver)
MKSCH85: Metal Kantana Spring Change Height 8.5mm – 11.0mm, same as MSBSCH85 except that the Shuriken Blade is changed with 4 kantanas (color: translucent silver for the plastic, un-painted metal for the “blades”)
MSBSCH85: Metal Shuriken Blade Spring Change Height 8.5mm-11mm, think of CH120 with an external shell resembling a shuriken made of metal, when lose, MSBSCH85 can bounce due to the spring within the core of MSBSCH85.
RHF/RS: Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Sharp (can change during combat at Izuma’s command)
WRHF/RWD: Wide Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Wide Defense (can change during combat at Izuma’s command (color: translucent silver for plastic, black for the rubber))
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “Silent death,” Silent Samurai disappears and hits opponent with a million kunai and shuriken and kantanas
Level 2: “100 Slices of The Samurais’’,” the Metal Shuriken shell on MSBSCH85 swells and smashes the opponent’s bey 100 times, on the 99th time, Silent Ninja halts and circles the stadium 10 times, cheating a black hurricane that flips the opposing bey out of the stadium with a insanely powerful smash from Silent Samurai.
Level 3: N/A
Level X: “Infinite Blade” Samurai appears and slices at the opponent’s bey with such speed and power that the opposing bey instantly stops and flies out of the stadium 10 meters away, breaking it in half. (Last resort, can only be used three times in a year!)
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitz”: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale lifts Samurai, Samurai creates a kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses water jets to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, and increase its spin velocity, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Electric Kantana Dive”: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence
Team attack 3: “Magma Kantana Dive”: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive” team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition

BeyBlade Type: Attack/Defense
Spin Direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: Male
Clothes: Black Armani Exchange T-Shirt with black GUESS jeans and a silver cloak with black flames (cloak is based on Minato from NARUTO) clothes all the time
Black hair, Chinese origin, oldest of 4 children
Caries twin Kantanas everywhere.
Team rank: Leader
Attitude: helpful and cool, he has to keep a critical eye on his twin sister, Sonai so that she doesn’t go out of control with her short temper, his classmates (except for Sonai) are jealous of him. When he promises something, you can guarantee that he will keep his promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. Keeps his younger brothers in line every day so that they don’t drive Sonai crazy.
Age: 17 years as of February 27, 2011

Name: Sonai Inzori
BeyBlade: begins with: Pre-HWS Narwhale CH120 PD, and ends with: Hydro Narwhale XDFCH110 EPWD/PD
Type: Stamina
BeyBlade description:
Face: For both Narwhales, two narwhales next to each other with a wave and the writing Narwhale on the bottom. (Color: the narwhales: sliver, the wave: light blue, the writing: silver, the background: medium dark blue)
Hydro: imagine the Pre-HWS Virgo except the lobes are wave like. (Un-colored)
(Metal wheel) Narwhale: 4 Narwhales in a circle with a wave pattern on the bottom
(Clear wheel) Narwhale: two Narwhales in a circle. (Translucent blue)
XDFCH110: eXtreme Down Force Change Height 11.0mm- 13.5mm, basically a CH110 with the external shell as a super wide DF that works in both spin directions. (Translucent blue)
EPWD/PD: Eternal Polish Wide Defense/Polish Defense, PD with a voice controlled shaft aligned in PD’s notches, wielding a free spinning PWD (Translucent blue)
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “ Hydro Turbo Boost”: Narwhale creates a water typhoon complimenting its team members spin or itself spin, thus increasing the bey affected by the water typhoon spin velocity.
Level 2: “Hydro Cannon”: Narwhale creates a huge water typhoon in the playing area and sends it at the opponent’s bey, sending it flying repeatedly so that Narwhale’s extreme stamina can be used to outlast the opponent’s bey.
Level 3: “Flying Hydro Narwhale Cannon”: Hydro Narwhale hovers in the air because on XDFCH110 and creates a water Narwhale to ram the opponent’s bey.
Level X: “Hydro Horn”: Narwhale appears and creates a high pressure water jet in the shape of a Narwhale’s horn and Stabs the opponent’s bey breaking it in half, or KOing in instantly
Team Attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitz”: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Hydro Narwhale lifts Silent Samurai, Samurai creates a Kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, and then they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses Hydro to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Hydro Shock”: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity
Team attack 3: “Rock Strike”: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition
Spin Direction: L/R
Character bio:
Gender: Female
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that her cloak is blue with silver flames.
Caries a special Touch Screen Repair Computer, TSRC, and tools for bey repairs
Rank in Team: repairer. (Technician)
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 2nd oldest of 4 children
Attitude: very reckless, and has a short temper, her twin brother, Izuma, does all that he can do to make sure she doesn’t go out of control with her rage and short temper doesn’t get the worst of her, her classmates (except for Izuma) are jealous of her. When she promises something, you can guarantee that she will keep her promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. She can get very angry with her 2 younger brothers, she respects Inzori as the greatest beyblader of all time
She is Izuma’s twin sister
Age: 17 as of February 27, 2011
Name: Hatachi Inzori
BeyBlade: begins with: Static Zerker LB135 ELRF final form: Electric Berserker BXBCH135 EMCLRF
Beyblade type: Attack
BeyBlade Discription:
Face: A sword with electricity coming out of it and the writing BERSERKER or ZERKER on the bottom. (Color: the sword: Silver, everything else: yellow on a black background)
Electric: Looks like a metal wheel with 4 lengthened protrusions in the shape of thunderbolts. (Slightly overhangs the track like Rock does (color: silver))
Static: same as Electric but it only has 3 protrusions
Berserker: 4 very large swords in a circle. (Color: translucent light yellow)
Zerker: 3 swords in a circle. (Color: translucent dark yellow)
BXBCH135: Bending eXtreme Blades Change Height 13.5mm – 16.0mm, basically a CH___ with 4 large Blades that can bend at Hatachi’s command during battle.
LB135: Lightning Blade 13.5mm, 3 lightning like blades facing outward.
ELRF: Eternal Left Rubber Flat, a free spinning RF.
EMCLRF: Eternal Metal Coated Left Rubber Flat, combine Metal Flat, Rubber Flat, and Eternal___ and CS, a free spinning LRF with a Metal Coat around it. (The metal coat is raised by 2mm from the Left Rubber Flat)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Static Shield”: a shield of electricity that causes the opponent’s bey to gain static electricity and stick to other unwanted friction causing things.
Level 2: “Lightning Horn Ramp”: a Horn with a smooth slope made of electricity rams the opponent bey and “slopes” it out of the stadium if it hits.
Level 3: “Electric Blade Typhoon”: a electric typhoon with electric Berserker Blades popping out every where to hit the opposing bey.
Level X: “Electric Berserker Blade”: Electric Berserker’s version of Samurai’s Infinite Blade except that the sword is made of electricity.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Shock”: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity.
Team attack 2: “Lightning Kantana Dive”: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence.
Team attack 3: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grind”: Team attack with Magma Saurian: (possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition
Spin direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is black with yellow thunderbolts, and wears repair goggles.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 3rd of 4 children
Carries a special touch screen analyzer computer that can scan beys and create strategies according to the opponent’s bey parts and battle strategies for each of the team’s members
Team rank: Tactician
Attitude: a Bey strategist, caring and intelligent.
Age: 14 years old as of March 8, 2011
Name: Rez Inzori
Beyblade: first bey: Inferno Dino BD145 RS ___ final bey: Magma Saurian XGBCH160 RDS
BeyBlade Description:
Face: A T-Red head blowing Flame and the writing DINO on the bottom for Inferno Dino/A T-Rex head with Magma trickling down the side and the writing SAURIAN on the bottom for Magma Saurian. (Color: Brown T-Rex head, red flames/magma, & gold DINO/SAURIAN)
Inferno: the Hasbro Pre-HWS HWS version of SGTO (red and brown)
Magma: Metal version of Heat with rubber in the gaps. (Rubber: red, metal: un-colored)
Dino: a T-Rex in a circle (the T-Rex: brown, the background or other plastic: red)
Saurian: ripples of lava in a circle. (Color: translucent red)
BD145: Hell Kerbecs’ Track. (Translucent red)
XGBCH160: eXtreme Gravity Bowl Change Height 16.0mm – 18.5mm, cross of CH___ and GB145, 4 metal balls on the shell of CH___, the plastic is arranged in a 4 pronged star.
RS: Rubber Sharp. (Color: translucent red, rubber: red)
RDS: Rubber Defense Sharp, a DS made of rubber (Color: red rubber and translucent red for the plastic parts)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Lava Shield”: Saurian creates a wall of Lava around it to protect it from attacks.
Level 2: “Lava Wipeout”: Saurian creates a wave of lava to cover its opponents.
Level X: “Volcano Grave”: Saurian suddenly starts circling the stadium and creates a miniature un-erupted volcano in the middle of the stadium, then when the opponent’s bey is in the volcano’s crater, the volcano explodes, sending the opponent’s bey flying.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: Magma Kantana Strike: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive” team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack 2: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grind” (possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) : Team attack with Electric Berserker: Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop

Team attack 3: Rock Strike: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is silver with red flames.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and the youngest of 4 children
Team rank: Attack absorber (the shield)
Attitude: very humorous, liked by everyone.
@Dracovianauis
The first one and the second one are accepted.
P.S. Did you notice that one of the characters has a metal wheel named Electric and the main villain has a metal wheel named Electric? :\

I got characters bios now:
Name: Umi Iruka
Bey: Oceanic Delphinus 80HRF
Speical Moves: Dolphin Wave: A large wave is created and KO's the oppenent. Blowhole Smash: The bit-beast comes out and smashes into the oppenent.
Appearance: Short black hair, wears a red shirt, blue shorts and black sneakers.
Personality: Confident, fun, but gets serious in battle.

Name: Shinpi Uma
Bey: Electric Equuleus 200RD
Speical Move: Electric Charge: The bit-beast comes out and "charges" with electricity. Then, the bit-beast "charges" at the oppenent.
Appearance: Long red hair, wears a black shirt, denom shorts and black and white sneakers.
Personality: Secretive, powerful but hides his true strength.
“Come on, Delphinus!” I yelled as my Delphinus kept narrowly missing Equuleus.
“Go, Equuleus!” the blader yelled. “Special Move! Equuleus, Electric Charge!” Equuleus got charged up with electricity and then suddenly charged toward Delphinus.
“Dodge it, Delphinus!” I yelled. Delphinus tried to run but to no avail. Equuleus slammed into Delphinus with its track, causing no damage to itself. “Go, Delphinus! Special Move! Dolphin Wave!” I yelled. A huge wave hovered over the stadium. Then, the wave came down on Equuleus.
“No! Equuleus!” the blader yelled. However, Equuleus managed to keep spinning, but was wobbling heavily.
“It’s time to finish this! Special Move! Blowhole Smash!” I yelled. Then, Delphinus leaped into the air and attacked Equuleus from above, forcing a stadium out. “So, what’s your name?” I asked him.
“Shinpi Uma.” He replied. “And what’s your name?”
“Umi Iruka.” I replied.
thats so ...... AWESOME!! dude these stories are beast!
yeah lol, thats the only "electric" related metal wheel name i could think of cause lightning is gone kapuht
(Mar. 05, 2011  3:57 PM)Idk Wrote: thats so ...... AWESOME!! dude these stories are beast!
Thx!
“Good match, but I have to go now.” Shinpi said.
“Where are you going?” I asked.
“Home. It’s time for dinner.” he replied. Then he walked away.
“There are no good bladers here.” I said to myself.
Then, I thought I heard something. I turned around and saw another mysterious blader.
“No good bladers, huh? You forgot me!” he said.
“OK! Battle with me then!” I said.
“Good luck defeating my Angry Zeus Lightning Bolt 145 Hole Metal Flat!” he replied. The Zeus clear wheel was Yellow and had lightning bolts. Angry looked like Ray but the wings had spikes.
And finally, LB145 looked like UW145 but the wings are thicker.
We put our beys on our launchers, inserted the ripcord and yelled “3! 2! 1! Go shoot!” Our beys went flying into the stadium. I attacked but Zeus dodged.
“Attack, Zeus!” he yelled. Zeus sent Delphinus flying but Delphinus landed safely.
“Grr! Go Zeus! Special Move!” he yelled.

TO BE CONTINUED