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The Beyblade Galaxy-Heroes saving the entire world

Feb. 15, 2011  2:08 PM
 
Hello everyone.This is my first beyblade story post.
Hope you enjoy this story,and don't mind telling me this story is good or not.

Character(s):
1.Shelia Misaki gender:Female
Age: 13
About her characteristics: Shelia is a very hot-blooded girl,with nothing can slow her down .She never thinks.However.she is talented in Beyblading,with her Legendary Beyblade, Universe Pegasis W105 RMF.
About her Beyblade:
Face: Pegasis 3 - A face represents Pegasis,which is little bit different with others,something like Big Bang Pegasis.
C. Wheel : Pegasis 2 -a normal Pegasis 2 wheel with a different color.
M . wheel: Universe-the only wheel that has two modes by switching the
metal piece ON the Metal Wheel.Both modes have amazingly strong attack force.
Track: Wing 105- a original W105 piece.
Bottom:Right Metal Flat- Something similar to R2F,but it's made of metal,which makes it can create a faster and stronger force,but with a higher stamina provided.
Finishing move: (not yet)

2.Arasha gender:male
Age:13
About his characteristics: Compared to Shelia,he is a calm person which can give the best solution when battling.
He is Shelia's classmate,and also her best friend.He uses any sort of bey,but mainly use his Defense type, Fang leone S-D125 RB.
About his Beyblade:
Face:Leone 2-the new look of Leone.
C. wheel: Leone - a normal Plastic wheel of Leone,with an another color.
M. Wheel: Fang - A heavy Metal Wheel with two layers.It is stronger that other mainly Defensive Wheels.
TrackConfusedpecial(Spike)-Defense 125 - This track is a stronger verson of D125,with a thicker outer layer and small spikes.
Bottom: Rubber Ball - It grips the floor so hard so it is very difficult to knock it out.However with such high friction so it provides very low stamina.
Finishing moveUnhappyB)Leone roar force
(B) Lion King fang
Chapter 1 - legendary

3:30 pm .

"ring........"The school bell rang noisily.Most students were expecting for this ringing sound, especially Shelia.

"Arasha! Let's have a Beyblade Fight!"
"Don't rush Shelia ,I haven't note down all the notes yet....."
"See you at the Colosseum !"
"hey---"Before Arasha wants to tell Shelia that he wants to finish his homework first,
Shelia already rushes out of the classroom.

"What a girl......What do you think , Fang Leone?"
Arasha 'sigh' a little bit and then took out his best partner,Fang Leone.

3:50, at the Colosseum.
"What take you so long,Arasha? Now let's fight!"
Before Arasha respond yet,Shelia already took out her light bey and launcher, pointing at Arasha straightly.She didn't even change her clothes yet.

"Do you really think that you need to be in such a hurry!?"Arasha roared.He is a little bit tired about Shelia's hot-blooded characteristics. "Forgot it .Let's battle!"

'3 , 2 , 1 ...... '
"Go......SHOOT!"

"Let's go! Wind Pegasis!Ram that Bey with your full might!"
"Don't you still get it?Leone!"

Leone stays at the bottom of the beystadium,while wind pegasis is going to bump it out of the stadium.
Arasha thought that the bey will just ONTO Fang Leone,but a miracle happened-Wind Pegasis twist to the back side of Fang Leone and ram it!

"ha,get you didn't I ? I make improvements!" Shelia laughed.
"Don't think you can beat my Leone with this! Leone ! "Leone Roar Force!" "
just then, leone's surrounds created a transparent wall and pushing towards Wind Pegasis.
Wind Pegasis fell out from the stadium immediately

"Ah, man, why'd I always lose? I tried very hard....."Shelia picked up her bey and said to herself.
Arasha heard that and said,"That's obvious-Because you're using a LIGHT BEY! Light Beys does not stay a chance when facing a Metal Bey!Go and exchange for a Storm wheel!"
"Hmph,"Shelia grumbled,"I'll defeat you one day!"

about 5:00 pm ,at a ruin.

"Clang!" a clear bumping voice is heard.

If you think it is because somebody is battling there, then---Think again!
In fact,Shelia is shooting her bey continually at a big,blue crystal.

"No matter how I tried,I still can't defeat Arasha....."
Shelia disappointingly picked up her bey. Seems that she is going to crack the crystal but still failed.
"But I will not give up! not now, NOT EVER! Go,Shoot! Go Pegasis, ram it as hard as you can!"
The bey keeps going faster,faster,and faster,and heavily rammed on the crystal.

Just then,a miracle appeared - the crystal cracked,and blue,strong light keep shining from the crystal breakage.

"What the --- Ahhhh!"
"Are you......"
Somthing is talking to Shelia. However because the light is too strong so that Shelia can't see anything.
"Are you..... the one who was chosen?"
"What are you talking abo---"
"Never mind that."The voice stopped Shelia,"Here.you must keep this.Please treasure it,and don't let it fall into others hand......"
"Hey wait..........."

In a sudden,the light dims out.Shelia found her sitting on the ground,and the crystal is no more,but in the same place,there is a bey.

"What's this?"Shelia picked it up.This bey have a metal wheel like Quetz,but with a wing design on the edges.
It has a Metal Core on its bottom.

"Seems good....Now I must challenge Arasha again!"


~Chapter 1 end~
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Chapter 2 - Fight with Fang Leone!

Shelia have her new Metal Beyblade.
And she's going to challenge Arasha again.
But what's the secret about her bey?
Feb. 15, 2011  2:40 PM
 
Nice!like it so far!(btw do you accept character request?)
Feb. 15, 2011  2:46 PM
 
Maybe,because I don't have a good character chart yet.
(by the way,which character do you like better currently?)
Feb. 15, 2011  4:15 PM
 
hey can be in sounds like this will be a fun story
Feb. 15, 2011  7:30 PM
 
When's next chapter?
Do you take character requests?

This is a very good story!I want to see where it goes
Feb. 16, 2011  12:27 AM
 
since I didn't finish this chapter yet,the next chapter will not be soon.
Character requests .....Hmmm.... maybe....
Feb. 16, 2011  3:13 AM
 
NameConfusedamuel Husima
Bey:Core Shark F145 CES
Bey Description:Core:Core is like lightning only it has little fangs and a huge fang like metal in a compartment behind on of the blades and instead of the three blades it's a fin kinda.Shark energy ring:it's like libra only with a shark on the top and bottom and an open jaw (like wolf) on the sides.F145:fangs(rubber) stick down on every little time it gets shorter in length.CES:just like CS but it's plastic is eternal sharp.
Age:15
Special Move:Fang Ripper:the extra fang pops out and shark attacks invisibly and then does like pegasis starblast attack if it's still spinning.
Personality:confident in battle and always wants to battle,loyal,trustworthy,couragous too.Side:good
he wears, an layered tee (Red and Green) Black jeans and red skateboarding sneakers, and has black spikey hair like sora and is african american
Feb. 16, 2011  5:09 PM
 
(Feb. 16, 2011  3:13 AM)C-Dub Wrote: NameConfusedamuel Husima
Bey:Core Shark F145 CES
Bey Description:Core:Core is like lightning only it has little fangs and a huge fang like metal in a compartment behind on of the blades and instead of the three blades it's a fin kinda.Shark energy ring:it's like libra only with a shark on the top and bottom and an open jaw (like wolf) on the sides.F145:fangs(rubber) stick down on every little time it gets shorter in length.CES:just like CS but it's plastic is eternal sharp.
Age:15
Special Move:Fang Ripper:the extra fang pops out and shark attacks invisibly and then does like pegasis starblast attack if it's still spinning.
Personality:confident in battle and always wants to battle,loyal,trustworthy,couragous too.Side:good
he wears, an layered tee (Red and Green) Black jeans and red skateboarding sneakers, and has black spikey hair like sora and is african american
I may accept your request.
Mind be a villain?
Feb. 16, 2011  5:19 PM
 
HOPE THIS HELPS!!!

Name:Zero
Bey: Mercury Phoenix
Look: Black jeans, grey T-shirt, black jacket, black hair(avatar).

Bey Description: the mercury wheel is Grey and is shaped like Fire in the outside and some rays near the middle in the inside. The clear wheel is Black and is a Flame. F135I(Fireblaze 135 ) is a Red 135 with 12 Flames on it . I(Indistructible) is a Phoenix feather. The facebolt is red with a Black Phoenix and Flames behind. Is a very powerfull bey, and one of the strongest. Is so strong that even Ryuga thinks he may lose and gets worried, the bey has a way to strike fear in opponents and will crush beys.

Zero description: He is a 15 year old guy. No one knows nothing about him. Is a very evil guy. Zero is very strong blader and always is blading. He found Mercury Phoenix when he was 6 years old. He was in a volcano and a giant Flame appeared in front. The volcano erupted and his family died but Phoenix saved him. He was the only one who survived. Since then he is all evil.

Special Move: Eruption Fireblaze. Flames appear in the stadium and then Mercury Phoenix Makes a giant Fireblaze . The blaze in his track get bigger.

Mirrored worldTongue_outhoenix attacks from all directions but the real one is in the air, after all hit the other bey the real bey charges down for a final attack!

He is a evil guy.
Feb. 17, 2011  12:43 AM
 
Because of some reason, this story will renew slowly.
Sorry for any inconvenience.
Au Revior.
Feb. 17, 2011  12:59 PM
 
Hello everyone !Chapter one is finished.
Ready for Chapter 2?

also to shuya,
this character is overdone.
But it is a good character to be a villain who is going to stop Shelia.
I may add into the story.
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Chapter 2 - Fight with Fang Leone!

3:30 (again?) at school.
"Hi Arasha! Wanna have a beyblade fight at 4:30?"
"Again? using that Wing Pegasis?......hey wait,what's happening with you?You never tell me the exact time."

"I got an another bey yesterday!I don't know why'd I get this bey anyway,but I'll sure I'll defeat you today!"
Shelia said to Arasha and rush back home."See Ya!"

"What's happening to her......Anyway , I'll fight with her and see her new bey." Arasha thought and went back home .

4:30 , At the Colosseum.

When Arasha just arrived at the Colosseum,Shelia called him. "Hey Arasha! Come here!Now let's fight!"
Arasha looked at Shelia.Unlike yesterday,she is totally dressed up with her original look,
Make her look cute and energetic.
"Something's happened to you.Why'd you dressed up properly?You usually came here wearing in your school uniform."Arasha asked .

"Just go on !I will beat you with my new Pegasis!"Shelia yelled and show her Pegasis to Arasha.

"Why'd did I think I ever seen this bey before?"Arasha thought,"It seems familiar to me,but I can't remember its name.....never mind."

"Let's go! 3 , 2 , 1 ........"

"Go Shoot! "

Two beys shoot out from the launcher and flew towards the Beystadium.
"Go,Pegasis!Circle and wait for a chance!"

The bey goes faster and faster,creates a circle.The circle is much bigger that Wind Pegasis' ones,with strong sound imitations.

"What the......This bey is extremely active unlike the one before!"Arasha is a little bit scared because he'd never seen a bey moves that fast! "Leone! Wait for the attack!"

Suddenly,Pegasis started attack Leone without Shelia's order."Hey,come back here,Pegasis! It's not yet okay!"

"Leone! ' Leone Roar Force!' "
The transparent force created and goes straight Pegasis.
"No!"Shelia cried.
However,something happened that nobody expected.

Pegasis 'Cracked' the force and rammed Leone.Leone bumped onto the fence of the Stadium and rebound back to the centre of the stadium.The fence broke at once and Leone become slower.

"Holy ....!What's happening?"
"What''s that sound?"
The crew heard the noise and gathered near Shelia and Arasha.When they saw the broken fence, they were shocked, because nobody ever destroyed those fences, which was made of extra-strengthed metal.

"Wow ,Pegasis......You're really something ! Let's do it again !" Shelia smiled happily and ordered it again.
She never expected she can break Arasha's moves.
"Ah ! I remember now! This is the Legendary Bey - Universe Pegasis! Where did you get that!?"Arasha remembered it .

"Somewhere in the ruins......I'll bring you there later! Let's finish this fight !"
"As you wish!"

And now,the battle continues.

"Leone! Go after Universe Pegasis!"Arasha ordered.
Leone goes closer and closer towards Pegasis.The beys were so close that they almost touched each other.
"Now! ' Lion King Fang!' "
"Pegasis! Try to seal his finishing attack!"
Pegasis went faster to avoid Leone's attack.It suddenly goes back and ram onto Leone!

"Go-------!"

The beys clashed each other and created an explosion.Smoke were everywhere.
The smoke finally goes away and the results revealed - Pegasis is still spinning while Leone already stopped.

"Yeah----! I finally beat you,didn't I,Arasha?"Shelia said to Arasha proudly and took back Universe Pegasis.She kissed the bey."Thank you,Pegasis."

"Finally, I lost." Arasha took back his bey,"but that doesn't mean anything.You win because the bey is too strong."

When Shelia heard this,she seemed to be a little bit sad."Oh,well.....Hey,did you say that you wanna go to the ruins? Now let's go."
"Right. Let's go ."

However,when they are about to leave the Colosseum,somebody pat Shelia's shoulder.It's the shopkeeper.
"Hey.You must pay for the Stadium repairment."

Yes.Not fence but Stadium.
Because they destroyed the Stadium but not only the fence.
~Chapter 2.end~
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Chapter 3,The first fight to the Galaxy Destruction Gang

"Your Majesty,do you see that?"
"Of course."
"Then,we can attack that girl and snag her Universe Pegasis!"
"Alright.I'll send you to do this mission."
"Do you have any other things to do with her after we get the bey?"
"No.You can do anything to her,kill her,make her be your slave or even rape her.Anyway,do as you wish."
"As you wish,your highness."
Feb. 17, 2011  1:49 PM
 
no i don't mind as long as he's a main character or he turns good.
Feb. 17, 2011  3:01 PM
 
(Feb. 17, 2011  1:49 PM)C-Dub Wrote: no i don't mind as long as he's a main character or he turns good.
Well, actually I'm thinking of adding him as one of the headquarters of a bad team.
and I didn't thought anything about 'Being good'.
do you want this character settings?
(also do you like the story? '3')
Feb. 17, 2011  7:58 PM
 
Epic story man!Request:
Name:Xad III
BeyConfusedtealth shadow S(plit)80 S(talk)
Dark moveConfusedplice
Shadow slices the opponent's bey in half.
Xad wears black cape and pants, red shirt
Personality:A lot like my name sake, and a loner.
Shadow face:A picture of a menacing shadow with the word "shadow" on the top
Shadow C.W:Think of a black pegasis wheel then make it sharper and more spickey
Stealth:Think mercury + vulcan then color it in black
S80:A normal 80 but it has a metal ring around it
S:Has a computer chip in that stalks the bey.
Feb. 18, 2011  1:06 AM
 
(Feb. 17, 2011  3:01 PM)Meteo LDrago Wrote:
(Feb. 17, 2011  1:49 PM)C-Dub Wrote: no i don't mind as long as he's a main character or he turns good.
Well, actually I'm thinking of adding him as one of the headquarters of a bad team.
and I didn't thought anything about 'Being good'.
do you want this character settings?
(also do you like the story? '3')

ok he doesn't have to be good guy
and as long as he's SUPER strong
(I really like your stry!)Wink
Feb. 18, 2011  9:14 AM
 
To Muzuchi Reiji:
Please describe more about the character,
and mind making a new name for your character?
It is a little bit werid.

To C-Dub:
Thank you Joyful_2

Notice:
These are the describe of Shelia:

SheliaConfusedhe is a Japanese,with a Sea-Blue color hair.She is about 170 cm tall.
She has a cat-ear like thing on her head.It can help her hearing.
She looks cute but her hot-blooded characteristics does not fit her charming look.
Feb. 18, 2011  9:17 AM
 
awesome beginning!! looks like something gud is coming our way
Feb. 18, 2011  12:34 PM
 
Hello everyone.This is Chapter 3.
What will happen to Shelia?
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Chapter 3 - The first fight to the Galaxy Destruction Gang: Headquarter one -Samuel Husima

"Shelia,did you really found this bey here?It seems hallow here."
"Believe in me ,I saw a big crystal here.I destroyed it and accidentally get this bey."

Shelia and Arasha are walking in the ruins.The ruins seems to be hallow after Shelia took Universe Pegasis.
"Well,but where is the crystal thing?"Arasha asked.
"I don't know.When I have this Universe Pegasis,the crystal pieces disappeared."Shelia replied.

"Wait......take a look on this ancient picture on the wall."
Arasha saw the picture on the wall.He is watching the picture and the words on it ,and trying to guess what is it talking about,but the pictures are not clear enough to be clearly seen.

"The Pegasus fought with the devil who destroyed everything on earth.At last ,Pegasus won and recover the things on earth.....and what in the world is that on the backside of this?"
"Don't try to guess those ancient things.Let's check is there anything here."

Suddenly ,Shelia heard some unusual sound.Her upper ears pointed upwards and search where does it come from."Who's there?"

"Oh well ,I'm been founded by you."A teenager turned out from the corner.He wore Bright Red Clothes,and a rep cap.There is a sliver "GD" mark on it.
"My name's Samuel Husima,and my mission is get that Universe Pegasis and destroy you. But before that,I'll...."
"You'll what?"Shelia asked.
"I'll have your body!"That guy laughed.

Shelia is very angry.She has never being angry like that - Of course, which girl have experienced this kind of things before?
"How dare you!"She roared.Her face were totally red.

"So what?Gimme your Pegasis bey ,I may not kill you."
"Never!Darn you ,let's have a beyblade fight!"
"Good.I'll beat you down and get you bey."That guy took out a bey.
"Core Pisces WS145 CES......."Arasha grumbled."Shelia ,this bey is kind of strong.You must be careful."
"I don't care what the hell is that!" Shelia roared. She is still very angry about the 'Body Having thing'.

"3 , 2 , 1 ......"
"Go............Shoot!"
Two beys flew out from the launcher and go towards each other.

"Pegasis! Ram it! Ram it until it becomes crust!" Shelia is out of her control. Pegasis goes toward to Core Pisces
and rammed heavily.However it does not affect much.
"Shelia! Calm down!"Arasha whispered.He knew that Shelia can hear him because she has excellent hearing.
"That bey's Coat-eternal sharp can reduce its damage gained!Normal ramming can't affect him!"

Shelia seems a little bit calmed down."What should I do?If ramming can't damage it........"
"Do you remember that technique you used when you're using Wind Pegasis? You slipped behind Leone and smash it!"
"I got it! Pegasis!"
The same thing occurs as before.Pegasis goes extremely fast and when it's going to ram the bey,it goes to the other side of the bey.

When Shelia and Arasha it is going to success.......

"You've been fallen into my trap......'Pisces Fang Ripper' !"
Thousands of fang-shaped aura hurls up Core Pisces and knocks out Pegasis.Fourtunally there is no 'Stadium outs' when battling on the ground,but seems that Pegasis gained heavy damage.

"Pegasis!Are you okay?"
"You're no match to me!Pisces,finish it off!"
"Pegasis!Flee to somewhere else but here!"

Small whirlwind begins to appear around Pisces and it immediately shoot the aura out.Although it is fast, Pegasis is even faster.It avoid all of them by moving in a Zigzag movement .

"Damn it,don't let it go away Pisces! Keep on firing!"That guy ordered.
"Now,Pegasis! Use that Skill Sealing thing to destroy those auras!"

However,Universe Pegasis didn't listen the order.
It keep on going and ram onto a rock.
"What are you doing,Pegasis?The battle is not finished yet!"Shelia yelled.
Arasha thought, "No.It is going to........"

Just then,Universe Pegasis flew way up high and dropped down.Light blue aura surrounded it and created an extremely strong force.

"Pisces! Do it again! 'Pisces Fang Ripper'!"That guy is a little bit scared due to Pegasis power,but he still tried to order Core Pisces to take it down. Fang aura goes straight towards to Pegasis,but seems it does not have any effect.
"What's Happening!?Why it is still OK like nothing happened!?"The Guy yelled,"anyway.....Pisces! hurl yourself with fangs!"Core Pisces stopped throwing out Aura piece ,and control them go near itself.

Shelia is cheered up."Pegasis ! Ram it with your might!"
The Fang Aura of Pisces and Pegasis' attack create an explosion.This time,the explosion is more bigger than the
one which was fighting with Fang Leone.
Pisces was flying away and then bumped onto the rocks.It stopped immediately.The wheels of Pisces - Both Clear and Metal - were totally destroyed.

"Gasp! I failed to finish the mission!"The guy said."You regret of oppositing to us!"and then he fled.

"That move is great, Pegasis!"Shelia said to Universe Pegasis. "Let's call this move as 'Pegasis Universe Smash'!What do you think? "
"Shelia,"Arasha said,"Universe Pegasis is too powerful for you.It is out of control twice. I believe that you should train yourself rather that only using Pegasis' power."

"Okay.....But what is that guy doing?What's the fuss about getting Universal Pegasis?"Shelia asked.She is a little bit angry about that person who wants 'her body'.
"No Idea....But I am sure that he is not a good person."

~Chapter 3 end~
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Feb. 19, 2011  1:27 PM
 
Hi everyone,
this is the character outlook description of Arasha :

His hair is short and spiky.
He also has a pair of cat ear on his head.(both sea blue)
It can also help hearing but it's not as strong as Shelia's.
His is about 173 cm tall.(Actually he seems to be Shelia's brother more that her friend =3= )
He is also a Japanese.
Feb. 19, 2011  2:10 PM
 
Other names:
Paul
Fal
Todd
Lazzo
Lem
Feb. 19, 2011  2:12 PM
 
Awful.
Is Z or Zad ok?
Feb. 19, 2011  2:58 PM
 
Yeah Zad is ok
Feb. 19, 2011  2:59 PM
 
wow. your storys have so much content. great job.
Character request:
Name: JT
Bey: Death Pegasis SU(Supreme Upper)100 R2F(Rubber^2 Flat)
Description: SU100 has 6 fan blades that stick out under the wheel that slant upwards, creating a double balance/spin attack. We all know what Pegasis and R2F are. Death is like Dark but the blades are inverted and the attack blades look like storm and the defense blades have pinpoints for a spike attack.
Moves: Black Hole Destruction(Spins around like Storm Bringer but way faster, creating a black hole inside the stadium.), Darkness Pull(Makes a large gravity field around it pulling the other bey in, chipping parts or splitting it in two.)
Dark Move(If it's okay.): Gravity Well(Creates a massive black hole in the center of the arena so powerful that it distorts time and brings you to an alternate dimension, where your worst nightmares become worse and are portrayed in the blackness of space. When coming back from the dimension, the other bey is shown to its owner, usually obliterated to dust, before the owner passes out.)
Feb. 19, 2011  3:04 PM
 
To 001:
What kind of character JT will perform?
Also, maybe it's my personal problem,the Dark move is kind of terrible..... = =

(Do you like the content of my story? Joyful_2 )
Feb. 21, 2011  11:31 AM
 
Chapter 4 - WTH!?

(notice:This Chapter will not be finished THAT fast 'cause I'm going to school.)

After fighting with that weirdo guy -Samuel,Shelia is tired and she decided to go back into the city.

"Whew, that is really tiresome,"Shelia said,"If Universe Pegasis is not so strong,I'm already lost."
"The biggest problem is actually you're angry and out of control."Arasha grumbled.

However,when they get back into the city,something terrible happened ,and they never expected this will happen,too.
The city in front on their eyes was totally destroyed.Buildings were bombed and cracked like potato chips.(?)
Lots of men were walking and they held a MP5 sub machine gun.
"What's this!?"Shelia Yelled.

Of course,who will expect the city you lived will become like that?

"Found Survivors.Found Survivors."On of them found Shelia and Arasha.
"These are wanted people.Kill no mercy."Another said.
"Huh?"

Just then,those guys pointed their guns at Shelia and fired them up.
Shelia walked in front of them,twist and 'cut' on of the guys' hand.....

"Crack" , it's hand was destroyed!
"Hey,what's this!?"
Shelia shocked.However.she didn't know that those guys' MP5 already lock on her.

"Oh no----"Shelia cried.She did some backflips to make them can't lock on her,
and she hurried to hide near Arasha.
(To be continued later.)
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