The Age of the Vulcan (a beyblade story)

Poll: How good is my story?

Great Story! Keep Going!
100.00%
1
Good Story! Keep Going!
0%
0
It's OK. Keep Going!
0%
0
Bad Story. Keep Trying!
0%
0
This is Trash. Keep Going!
0%
0
Total: 100% 1 vote(s)
Hey guys, this is my story about beyblade, I hope you like it.
I'm not quitting, by the way, even if the world explodes while I'm trying to write a chapter Smile
Please read the story, vote in the poll and comment.
I accept and appreciate constructive criticism but do not like scolding my story without a reason.

Chapter 1:

One story, one thread. I realize the motive behind creating this one, but you'll just have to edit the title of the other.

Click and hold the title to edit it.