Hey guys I recently made a short film, check it out if you have the time to spare a leave a like if you like it, I filmed it with the help of a few friends over the course of a day. Any feed back is greatly appreciated

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aWOBsBgeIZY

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I see no harm in giving this a watch.

Thanks a bunch, it means a lot

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Exposition:

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I feel like this is an attempt to be an artsy film, which is pretty nice. The cinematography is overall pretty good as well as nicely done. Though the grain could be a little distracting at times.

short film so you have to get to the point which lost me a tad though of course re-watching it again I got it. While it looks good in some shots, it looks rather iffy in other shots. As saying you know what you have in this area but there is an issue in this area.

pretty good overall, though I feel with the lack of music there is a heavier weight being placed on the scene and sound effects since. Lack of music= Lot more tension and it feels all the more raw.
(I would look at another feel that feels raw because the lack of music but that's a film that shouldn't be discussed here remotely) all if any.Nicely done project

Thanks a lot for the input!

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