Shining God MS

It's done. If you catch any mistakes or have suggestions, please let me know!
Really good job Kei! There are a few grammatical errors that I noticed, but nothing major.
(Jul. 09, 2009  3:22 AM)Synesthesia Wrote: Really good job Kei! There are a few grammatical errors that I noticed, but nothing major.

Thanks! Feel free to fix any errors.
I fixed one error. I suppose he'll fix the rest?
Anyway, great job Kei. (Also, woo!, I can edit/add articles again)
(Jul. 09, 2009  3:28 AM)Pichuscute Wrote: I fixed one error. I suppose he'll fix the rest?
Anyway, great job Kei. (Also, woo!, I can edit/add articles again)

Why don't you just fix errors you see?