SOME STORY 'BOUT BEYBLADE

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I am very bored today, I like to write a story with a newer twist to beyblades yes bad grammar:

This is the beginning of the long journey of the greatest protector of the worlds and galaxies the ultimate savior...
THE BEYBLADE KING!

CHAPTER ZERO

...In the very beginning, man and beyblade coexisted perfecty with each other. They shared life together and formed a pure energy called "G". G is the power that can be used to destroy or create depending on the heart of the one who uses it, G power becomes stronger when the courage and will of dedicated partners increase.

Governing and protecting this world was the beyblade council, a group of powerful people with their partners the beyblade beasts who swore to protect beyplanet and beygalaxy from evil forces who dwell inside the galaxy and most importantly the foreign evils that exist far beyond this galaxy and the farthest reaches of the universe itself. Using the power of G, they save countless lives from evil.

One of them was the legendary warrior whose power has no equal. He was given the task and responsibility to protect everything from evil. He was already very powerful... but he wanted more power. His desire to control and manipulate the universe devoured the better of him. He learned the dark arts and used the dark side of G that is born from hatred, greed and evil, this in the negative force that was asleep ages ago. He fought the council and the other students who wanted to harness the power of G ,but he failed.

He gathered all the evil in the galaxy and one by one attacked and destroyed other worlds making him stronger by the minute until he became an entity of darkness. He called all of his minions, there were battalions... no... there were worlds of his minions who attacked beyplanet.

The leader of the council used another source of energy... the G core. The center of the vast universe is the g core, a place where the g energy from the will and courage of all living things dwell and gather, the power of light.

With it he became the beyblade king. He stood face to face with the dark entity and they launched their beyblades with all their might. Heavenly bodies where pulverized and destoyed because of the impact and intensity of the fighting beyblades. Two dragons sprung out of the beyblade and fought each other, they shot big balls of energy from their mouths. The dar entity collected more darkness while the Beyblade king combined his power with the other bladers who were ovrflowing with will.

With a final blow the two enemies finished their battle and the dark entity was weakened. He was trapped forever and peace throughout the universe stayed once again.

The dark entity was only asleep but after thousands of years it will definitely wake up and bring the dark age again. But the prophecy says that another Beyblade king will be born, the descendant of the great father before him who fought the evil back in the distant past and bring the peace again...


THIS IS NOT THE BEGINNING, THIS IS AN INTRODUCTION OF THE GREAT WAR OF THE ANCESTORS IN THE DISTANT PAST. ITS LIKE AN APPETIZER TO A GREAT MEAL IF YOU LIKE IT I WILL MAKE A CONCRETE STORYLINE WITH CHARACTERS AND BEYBLADES WITH SPECS. WELL IF NOT AT LEAST I KNOW. JUST REPLY AND TELL


Sounds a lot like Bakugan...
I think you should keep writing it's really good Grin
CHAPTER 1:

Beytown, a place where beyblades are basic necessities and are commonly used as tools for everyday life. Some use it for cooking, housework, consruction work, mining, office, energy, and many other things that are needed to be done. It is a very small but peaceful town that is happy and warm. They are lead by a great leader by the name of Justice, the peacekeeper of the town. No one may suspect that from this town a legend will be born...

From a mysterious place above the clouds...

IT IS TIME PROTO, IT IS TIME FOR YOU TO BEGIN YOUR GREAT QUEST

Yes master Anakis.

A large ball of fire crashed from the heavens...


"Yes it is Saturday", Justin cried. He picked up his beyblade and went to the place where other kids meet to have a nice saturday battle. The soft breeze had encouraged him to have a victory for his battle. He picked his beyblade and went out of the house. From the front door he could see the cart of the old bargain man, the guy with good finds for cheap prices. Justin ran quickly to the old man and checked his cart. "Oh, it is you Justin," said the Old man. "Did you find anything nice?" "Nothing for attack types...wait that defense gear looks great","How much is this" Justin said to the old man. The Old man replied,"You can have it for free!"

Justin thanked the old man and skipped happily along the road. He found a slightly buried object gleaming in the light. He picked it up and looked at it well. The object was a bunch of beyblade parts. "Wow this looks cool!" Justin put the left pocket of his shorts and went on his way.

When he got to the beyblade park, he found Kuma, the big kid who thinks he is boss. He also appeared to have a sack with a pretty large amount of looted beyblade. "Ha Justin, I have created the most powerful beylade in the history of the world, you can't defeat me!" Kuma took out his defense type, Wild Bear D5-DW 7.

Justin took out his beyblade Spindra II custom and old and outdated beyblade. " You still have that ugly piece of scrap metal with you, hahahaha,"Kuma insulted Justin. Justin replied,"We will find out the true victor when one of us loses." "What makes you think I will fight you?",said kuma Justin grabbed the gear he got for free. "That...that is Defense 10, that is not yet released!","Fine I will fight you for it in exchange for this..." There was a weird part in Kuma's hand, it was a beyblade tip and it seems to be an attack tip. "If I win, you will get this weird part in my hand but if I win, that gear is mine and I will be the king!",Kuma suggested. "Fine with me", Said Justin


3...2...1... GOOOO SHHHHOOOOOOTTTTTT!!!! The two parties launched their beyblades and they clashed in mid air. Once Wild Bear hit the ground, it stabilized and showed very little movement. "Spindra, attack Wild Bear," Justin commanded. Everytime spindra hits the opposing beyblade, it would not budge and Spindra takes the damage itself. Kuma was intoxicated with the thoughts of having his new gear and being the world champion in the upcoming tournaments while Justin was trying hard to attack Kuma.

Grizzly bear claw swipe! A massive bearlike beast popped out of Kuma's beyblade and was pounding the ground hard. The claw of the great beast was trying to hit Spindra, Spindra dodged the attacks and struck wild Bear. Wild Rampage! The bearlike beast suddenly attacked harder and faster, boulders were flying because of the great force of the impacts. They left deep craters in the ground. Never have justin felt so much fear in his life.
I was wondering if I could have my char done:

Dino Serra
Age:13
Beyblade: Night Triceratops SW145 WD
S.Move: Thunder Crisis- Bey attacks opposing bey and with every strike the opposing hey gets hit with lightning causing a stadium out (50/50 chance of stadium out)

Personality: Always jumpy and when battling gets serious and loses his temper.
NO! There is no way he's gonna accept any character requests!
Because character requests can ruin stories, I mean, it's recommended to let him make his own characters. It's the rule of thumb in writing stories on WBO.
I was just asking and plus did he say he didn't want any chars
Okay then.