Renaissance (non-Beyblade story)

Poll: do you like it?

Yes I do!
33.33%
1
needs improvement
66.67%
2
*gets Axe* DIE FOR MAKING BAD STORY!
0%
0
Total: 100% 3 vote(s)
*code 1 Foxtrot, we got another story that will clutter the Your creation forum, Over*

okay...

so, it's another story I made! maybe I'll try to continue this, ya' know, keep going until I can't take it anymore. Let's start!

Chapter 1: It all started
Chapter 2: First Blood
Chapter 3: The jokes on them
Chapter 4: Now or Never
To be continued(or not)...

Here are somethings that I will tell you:
  • DON'T give me characters
  • give constructive comments that will help this improve!
  • lastly, NEVER think that this is violence! Its actually romance!


so, happy commenting!
Chapter 2 now live. pls. check OP
should I bump this thread until someone replies? anyways, chapter 3 online
Triple posting.... nice one

Chapter 4 now live. and I am FINALLY taking character request:

Name:
Gender:
Personality:
RankUnhappyscout or captain)
Nice stories oh and since you said charecter request.........



Name: Tanith
Gender: Boy
Personality: Kind and Strong willed
Rank: Scout
(Aug. 20, 2011  4:27 AM)TanithElite Wrote: Nice stories oh and since you said charecter request.........



Name: Tanith
Gender: Boy
Personality: Kind and Strong willed
Rank: Scout

FINALLY!

ok, so let's see what the others got(he's accepted)
Nice story. But I dont quite like romances so..no characters from my said so far...story is good though